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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: minizz

yay me first😃RES


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Aditi,first of all yeh le ek badi si jhappi for this cute chapter🤗ok now let me start with the title.I loved it.perfect for this one.I absolutely adored Kesar in this one.There were so many shades to his character here.The happy-go-lucky fellow teasing Gulaal at the beginning who goes on to become all sulky because he is not allowed to go to school which causes his well thought out plans go to waste...haaawww.me loved it.

Mini return jhappi 🤗 hmm title applied na,he is getting possessive and and the same time sulky if he can't get his way typical Kesar traits I would say😆

I could imagine Gulaal running after him with that plate of food😆but once again we come to know the real reason for his sulkiness-Gulaal is too busy to spend time with him.He could have happily bunked school for the rest of the year if only she spent all her time with him na.bechara Kesu and then she had to go and do that.oh Gullu you are so ignorant...You should never ruffle a teenager's hair and call him a bacha.Nothing could be more insulting than that to the bacha...ooops sorry Kesar😆and out comes the blunt Kesar-that outburst was good.He could never hide anything from her even if he tried to.I am loving the GK interactions so much.

Yeah she would run behind to ensure he had eaten na,and yes Kesar would have been totally honest with her when asked reason of his behaviour,he wanted that exclusive attention from her and if she was instrumental in ensuring that he satyed back even if it was for his own good,she had to compensate by being around all the time,failure to this will lead to tantrum and so it did


I am sure if the secret had not come out their relationship would have been exactly like this.While reading that bit about feeding each other I was reminded of the cowshed scene from the show.That was a beautiful scene Aditi😃

Yes I am sure she would continue mollycoddling him and he would try and best to project his grown up front till the equation changes for good when the secret comes out,then Gulaal is on defensive and Kesar in conflict with his feelings and his duty

and I loved that possessive Kesar who gets all riled up because Gulaal went with Dushyant towards the end.I loved Kesu's last dialogue a lot😳and JK ka smirk ha ha ha zaroor kuch khichdi pak rahi hogi.Do make her the cupid in this too.I love our Rockstar😆

JK to JK hai na uske dimag mein bhi toh hamesha kuch chalta rehta hai,why would she miss a golden opportunity like this,she will have to have her say na😊 and Kesar's reaction was expected I guess,first of all she goes out when he had to stay in,so not done,second she didn't even inform him and last but not the least she went with Dushyant now that was the biggest crime she committed in his mind😲 so out comes the words that were kept in after so much control and patience


Aditi,this was a beautiful chapter and finally the people in the house are waking upto the fact that Kesarji might be taking the DV to his heart.I want to see what they do next cause in the show except for MB no one else gave a damn😡

Yeah it's the first time that he has spoken out loud what's always playing in his mind so let's see how we can get family to react at this so called out of line behaviour from their dearest brat

I hope I made some sense or it it just mindless ramblingsorry for the very haphazard comment😭Now please update soon🤗

Hey Mini it made perfect sense, no ramblings at all,Thank you for your lovely comments,I hope you know your support means a lot partner,helps me keep going at something I feel so nervous about dealing with,Thanks for being constant support 🤗I will update late evening today or tomorrow morning😳

Edited by enchanted23 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
comments updated Aditi 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

So MY haseen qatil.😳.This is just a little gesture from my side to just show how much I am in awe of the way you are handling a delicate issue.👏.Just learned editing skills after chewing the brains of my bodyguard,my jadugarni Geeshu and my sunehri Kiran so the credit of this poster goes to them...They are the ones who taught me..🤗

So here is my creation for your SS..Which I so want you to prolong🤗 ..Hope you accept my request 😳

SURPRISE FOR YOU!!



piyu wat a lovely creation dear😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
aditi hi😃🤗 you knw i always loved this ziddi possesive chotu kesu, ali potrayed it so well😊.holi scene and gullu-mb confrontation scene
.r 1 of my fav.
coming to chapter, sorry to be biased but i totally agree wid kesu's pov. i mean look at him, so much efforts he is taking for gullu's happines and he is trying his best to fit in vasant mojdhi .aur yeh gullu ko dikh bhi nahi raha?
my fav part was when he becomes angry wid gullu for going out wid dushyantji.
and i extend my support in demand for holi scene, it is my fav scene and i knw u will do 100% justice to it
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Posted: 13 years ago

@ Shradha..🤗.Awww thanks yaar😳


Aditi..My hassen qatil..🤗..Take a bow and then a jhappi for keeping my request...And who will throw rotten tomatoes*rolls sleeves and stands before you...*..It is such a heartwarming subject you chose and I am in awe with the way yu are dealing with different untouched aspects keeping the essence of the basic charcterisation same.For instance..The return of the ziddi bacha is just so awww...Lubbed the banter and the haq and all the complaints..👏

Also my fav moment was the PB and zimmedari convo.👏..Such a potent hint to what trouble coming next...⭐️

Ufff the final nail in the coffin was that Kesu's frustation of being treated as a kid..though he is growing up physically and trying to take care of her in the best possible way..😭..Lubbly👏

And then we see the return of Jealous,possesive and gussail kesu..So looking forward to the next chappi...😍

Also kudos to the pareshani dialogue and KESU KA JAWAAB..Adorable👏

And I echo with Mini and Shradha..I want a holi scene ..Its a demand *stomps foot and throws a tantrum*😆

I am so looking forward to an update today*hopeful muh*

Aditi..⭐️..Brilliant is simply a lesser word to describe the intensity of the emotions with which you are experimenting in this SS.Thanks again for keeping my request🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
RES😍

Aditi wow this was brilliant.I loved it😳

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Aditi,I read the next chapter too and it was too good.Both the chapters are brilliant.You are treating the story with a lot of sensitivity which is admirable👏

Chapter-6:My most fav thing in this chapter is Gulaal's thought process and her reaction.I loved how you portrayed her need for Kesar.Her life does revolve around him Doesn't it?and I am pretty sure that if he hadn't been around after Vasant's death she would not have been able to carry on the way she did.I mean she would not have broken but her zest for life,her child like zeal,her liveliness would have long disappeared if Kesar had not been with her.Kesar became her entire world and that helped her much more than she could imagine.She gets all panicky when she first hears about MB's decision to send him away and even at this time Gulaal is not understanding the point behind MB's decision.How can she?When the only thought in her mind is that her Kesar is going away from her.I really loved that and for that I am willing to overlook her ignorance.MB has always been a wise soul-only problem- no one ever cared to listen to him in the show.Hopefully here he will be slightly more effective.I loved PB's outburst-She is real here.I never understood how she could go back to being so pally with Gulaal after the initial silent treatment right after the DV.They never showed her having any kind of insecurities.How can that be?Only once we got a small glimpse of what was hidden in her mind during that engagement telling off scene.So I am totally loving PB'character here.They should have shown her like this in the show and I am sure the actress would have done a great job.I don't consider her negative cause what she is feeling is natural and I totally feel for her.ok now cming on to Kesar...wow I love this guy.He is not sorry for his action and he is not going to say sorry for that and he is even ready to face a temporary judaai from his Gulaal over this.very strong.Well that is Kesar na.He has this inner strength in him that never fails him when he has to face a tough situation.this is just one more quality in him that I loved in his character😳and I really loved his honest answer to Gulaal.So very Kesarish.This makes Gulaal realize that maybe she might be wrong in holding him back and that last thought of hers that when he grows up they will have to go their separate ways.Aditi that just killed me.So poignant.Aditi,bas aise hi Gulaal ke feelings ko dikhaate rehna.I love it.That's the blunder they committed on the show.After a point the vulnerability in Gulaal went missing and the viewers could not empathise with her anymore.So I am very happy here cause even though I crib and cry about about Galool the fact is that I do love her a lot.So thank you

Capter-7:ok this is the continuation of the last scene from the previous chapter.An introspection of Gulaal's thoughts-wow that really made me very emotional Aditi.It will be so difficult for her without him.It's just 2 months but it is going to be tough.That para was just so simple yet so very beautiful.I loved it.The second para-ufff it was good.While reading it I suddenly came to the realization ki how much the DV has affected him cause this is not how a normal 15 yr old thinks.This guy is talking like an adult-an adult who has a truckload of responsibilities on his shoulders,who is starting to feel the burden of expectations.Outwardly he might appear to be a tantrum throwing,stubborn,juvenile teenager but one look into his mind and that picture just vanishes.That was so beautifully shown Aditi.I loved it.Yes he needs discipline but I am loving MB here who tries to make him understand here.That scene and MB's dialogues were really good.This was what Kesar needed-someone to sit him down and make him understand lovingly and even though Kesar doesn't believe that he is wrong he comes to the realization that he should not have spoken in that manner to his parents.I know he realized that before this but to actually admit it and say sorry-that he would have never done if MB hadn't come na...I loved the small GK scene.so full of affection and love.very nice.awww he doesn't look back while leaving...That made me all teary eyed.Aditi,I really enjoyed reading these chapters and I hope you will be able to update soon cause I want to know what happens next.Thank you for these wonderful chapters and yeh le badi si jhappi for that🤗



Edited by minizz - 13 years ago
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res 4 😛

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Aditi 🤗...done with reading the two chapters...what can I say...just wanna say awesome😳

Ch-6:
MB outburst n all his scolding to kesar...I can basically understand what n how mb would have think abt this issue..but is it the way kesar can understand the mistake of talking to mb n pb harshly...bang on JK...she is the only one who can actually see the deep down rooted bond of kesar n gulaal 😳...Coming to PB n her feeling against gulaal in matter of kesar...I can totally understand her perspective n to be frank I am very much satisfied with her thought...unlike in the show where she never showed...n Mb saying those words to gulaal revealing his idea to send her kesar away from her for some days reasoning his exams...I just loved loved her reaction here...how can her kesar leave her..how can she live with out her kesar...her life revolves around him...day begins n ends with him...her smile thinking that her kesar will never leave her n her decision to make him apologize to mb so that he can stay back with her...I can understand that she was unable to understand the actual reason behind mb decision as now the matter is something which she can never accept, which is kesar staying away from her...talli is a perfect complaint box..always complaining abt some thing or the other...no wonder kesar felt very happy when he is studying without her...The moment he saw gulaal he has to ask that question na that how can she go to mandir without him n without informing him...such a possessive guy 😳...she can only go out with him...bang on kesar...i liked that he didnot want to apologize to mb n pb regarding this issue as he never felt that he did any mistake...for him its his haq n if they feel that he did mistake in talking to his elders harshly then he can have the punishment...he can accept punishment that would be on her indirectly...but cant say sorry for this issue...I loved that gulaal is realizing that kesar wants to get rid of that shackles which she is not ready to do...I am very sad that in future it has to be this way that she has to let go of her kesar so that they take some different paths in life..the way she promised vasant...but dont worry kesar will never let that happen...

Ch-7:
Continuation from the last chapter...the first para was so good...how they r bond to each other n how can now they stay with all those daily cores that they do for each other...the pain that she is in thinking that her kesar does not need her anymore (which will never ever happen) is too much for her to handle...then kesar all frustrated thinking that why cant he ask the quuestion which he asked abt gulaal to his parents...he always have that haq on her..its his responsibility to take care of her...to know her whereabouts..to accompany her...its his promise to his vasant ba...how can he break it...he would have done this even if they dont have that pati n patni tag n they dont have dv...i also like that he did apologized to vasant abt his anger...offo he is in so much anger na...Mb has to come n cool him down...I just loved loved this convo between mb n kesar...i always wanted this convo between them in show...how sensible Mb talk here making kesar understand that he would be getting answers to his questions but at the right time...when he will be able to understand those answers...that assurances is enough for kesar now...n so comes his apology that he would have not talked to his parents harshly...once the tension is cleared..he has to ask abt gulaal na...I just love the way he directly said that he has to meet her as she might be crying without even eating...they very well know that she would be so much in anger n pain...he got slap 😆...he would definitely get it as he said those words though to just pacify her...i loved how they both tell each other that its only abt 2 months n they will be meeting every week...n more over they can also meet if needed daily...kesar n his plans to meet her daily 😳...they r feeding each other...its from one single plate na..me loving this so much 😍...I liked that kesar is all determined to fulfill the promise he did to his father n brother..even though it is tough for him to stay away from them n gulaal...

Aditi...I am just looking forward for the next chapter...how will both kesar n gulaal stay away from each other...how will they manage being away from each other...i wish to see them meet near his school as he planned...so do update the next chapter soon...I am eagerly waiting 😍

Aditi...I need the title of ch-5 ...till yesterday i remember it..but now I am unable to..I loved that title so much...so do update the title of chapter 5 in that post...

Edited by MR21 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: minizz

RES😍


Aditi wow this was brilliant.I loved it😳


arrey padh bhi liya abhi toh i was just editing it😆

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