Gulaal: What If chp 26(part II) upd Pg 57 - Page 10

@ All..Thanks for liking it..Just wanted to tell Aditi..that I am in awe of her SS😳

Well Now Aditi..⭐️Coming to the chapters...👏

Chapter 3 and 4 were wonderfully penned down..The bond is so uniquely potrayed and I just admire the way you actually chose Gullu to be a more aware mellowed down than her show counterpart...The away Kesu boy bechara falls in trap of Gulaal and then how he does a full on nautanki is so adorable..

And the terrace Tom and Jerry act..I must say its my fav..👏.Coz it has some hints to what even the CV's dared not to explore..The attraction of a teenager towards a woman who was the centre of his universe..Beautifully done..👏As I have always maintained that adoloscence is the age where each and every step counts and the growing attraction towards the opposite ..is almost inevitable and that too for such a boy whose whole world revolves around the woman..

Ahhh I so want you to prolong it coz actually though Cv''s skipped some portions but the dangerous hints of Chotu Kesu bhang episode pre-leap was indeed such a hint for the impending doom...

And the next chapter..Awww Can he get more adorable..Picking mangoes to buy gift for his lady love..Shooo shweet..Big hugs..Aditi brilliantly done and Now I am so eager to read the next update...Lubb you and pls do prolong it..Its my sincere and humble request...Weekly updates!! No complains!!And yes!! totally forgot..NO COMMENYTS ON TALLI BILLI😆

Originally posted by: MR21

my res 😭

i am very late 😭😭😭...I am not sure when I will read it 😔

Edit:

Aditi...I agree with Piu...you have to continue this phase of kesar for some chapters...I am just loving this story...

Thanks Ramya I will try my best to prolong as much as I can😳

Chapter 3:

I am very happy that here she is actually thinking abt the effect of her decision on kesar...though her intentions are very much good n to be frank she had no other than doing dv with kesar at that time...now she is actually seeing the way it is effecting kesar mind...her decision of sending him to city is absolutely correct in her perspective...though she have to stay away from him...while kesar being the only hope in her life...but for his benefit she can take this decision...n also like the way she said to him that she never care abt the people who talk abt her...the things he do is the only thing she consider...

Yeah in my opinion, they should have addressed this in the show as well.it was all very well to take a decision that seemed like the best solution at that time, but she also had to consider repercussions of her decision in that child's life, this is what I was trying to portray, glad you liked it

I liked the way kesar thought abt how she cans end him away from her...when she cant even stay away from his vasant ba for 3 days...he always know that the way he cant live without her...the same way she cant live without him...what an idea kesar...he is at his best na when he wants some thing to be done in his way...I liked the way he not even wasted his time in implementing his plan to convince pb to stop gulaal sending from here...MB is at his best as always...i loved the way he disagreed to gulaal proposal as there would be no use in doing it now...n also the way he stop both gulaal n pb...n also the way he said that we have to take this effects of dv n it has to be kesar n gulaal who have to think abt this dv once kesar can understand the meaning of dv...kesar n his ways to stay back...such a nautanki saying he cant live without mb n pb...wow I just love that terrace scene between them...me in dreamy mode...

Kesar in my opinion understood Gulaal completely,her pain,her hurt,her lonliness,her sacrifices,her lone battles for his family,her fight for her honor everything and though he was unable to change many things around her because of his age.he was totally dedicated to support the cause,for him she regained supreme in every sense of the word,Well nautanki nahi hogi to woh Kesar kaise hoga na,he could only do this with PB and Gulaal na,so I guess once in a while he should be able to get away with it too,after all he was just 14😊

Chapter 4:

wow..new school that too no talli with hi..he would be very happy shappy fr this...n more over he will not listen all those crap talks abt his gulaal n him...arey yaar why this talli has to feel bad that he is not studying with her...good that its boys school..warna yeh wahaa bhi tapakthi...n upar se sudha woh promise to get her marry kesar...I loved that its sudha n not gulaal...n also gulaal was nt happy with all this n shocked..n she not even accepted to what sudha said to talli...i would loved seeing this in show rather than seeing the gulaal-the match maker...

I loved teh way kesar wants to fulfill his vasant ba dream...n his wish to go all alone to his school...i liked the bit with dushy n kesar...looks like dushy will buy a scooty for kesar...i wish gulaal would be the first one to have a ride on it with kesar...unlike in show where talli tapkofys in between them...

Haha well Kesar is just like any other 15 year old who would want to hang out with group of boys and carry on with pranks without being cornered for every little shararat na,naturally he is happy to be doing that exactly and Sudha I guess was just trying to specify Talli w/o realising what she was committing herself too,Gulaal having already taken biggest decision of his life for him should atleast learn from the effect he was having of this decision of hers and refrain from making any more mistakes

kesar n his plans for gulaal...he can do anything na for making her happy...kuch zyaada hi kaam kiya na kesar ne ki usse fever aagayaa...wow so did all this effort to get her gift for her birthday..so sweet of him...I just loved that what is the gift n also she know that her kesar will never take any ones help to bring gifts to her...omg she extended her hands fr him to put the bangles...I just love the way she did it n ofcourse he putting those bangles...i am happy that kesar started doing things for gulaal understanding her wishes just looking at her looking at those bangles...

Kesar never did have to face any physical hardship to what he wanted na,being Badi haveli laadla he was privileged child who didn't know what it takes to work entire day to earn 100rs,he was driven by his desire to buy that gift for her from his efforts rather than asking someone for that money and not having done this before naturally resulted in physical strain but that not withstanding he was happy that he could get her something that he knew she would love😳

Aditi..I am just in awe abt this SS...no problem if it extends to FF...so u will have a long weekend...just looking forward to some more awesome scenes between gulaal n kesar in the coming next chapters...

Yes I have a long weekend,but am not sure how many of those four days I will be at home,I have few friends coming over but will try and update at least couple of chapters😊

Ramya thanks for your lovely comments,it means a lot🤗

Originally posted by: sharmishta

Aditi, ... 🤗 Both d chappis were too good..
so Gulaal is willn 2 bear d pangs of seprtn for his sake...
n kesar knws dat his absence wud kill her day by day ... aww dese 2... such a deep rootd reltn... true soulmates..😳
den comes kesar's emntnl atyachaar on PB😆... bacha knws hw 2 turn thngs in his favour... 😆
Final cat n mouse chase was so cute.. here we gt a glimpse of d real gulaal... lively n carefree... it's alwaz kesar who cn get through to her real self na...☺️
Talli rani is so moody abt kesar's indiffernce.. nw, dat's nt a good sign... abhi se line maarne ki planning kar rahi he..

the last scene was really awsme yaar... jst lvd d way he wishd her n gave her d gift...

Gulaal is subcnsiously accptn his prsnce in her life na, i mean she's nt dat happy with talli-kesar allnce na.. D way she extnds her hand 2 him for d bangles ascertains dis..

ye le tons n tons of for dese 2 chappis...

Originally posted by: without-fathom

Firstly - thank you so much for making Sudha the one to make that out of line promise to Talli, and Gulaal the one who could not consent, even just for appearances! All other wrong decisions Gulaal made in her life (in the show) on one side of the scale weigh equal to this one ... where she decided for Talli and Kesar - thank God you changed that way that was writ - given your opportunity 😆

Yes I indeed had the opportunity and I utilised it to change something that bothered me so much,Even if she had that haq on him,he still was entitled to knowledge of such promise made on his behalf and Sudha not entirely convinced herself was just looking for acknowledgement from Gulaal as she knew without Gulaal's consent such alliance would never get anywhere, having seen the extent of Gulaal's hold on Kesar, all she wanted was for Gulaal to nod her head but having seen cosequences of her one sided decision she wasn't going to commit to this,not my Gulaal anyway😆

Moving on - I feel like I'm floating in the translucence that exists between the two states of being for GK - as ward and guardian, and as lovers. Of course I want them to become the soulmates they are destined to be for a happy end. But the path that paves to that destination is... so testing sometimes. Like this point where he gives her the bangles, and she extends her arm to have him slip them on. It's a moment like this where I can never decide if I really want to sit through the anguish that is coming up ahead for them; where I wonder why there must be a formality of establishing explicitly their status quo - when just in this moment, aren't their everything soulmates are? This is so uncomplicated just for a moment, that the long way up ahead of complications galore is a tight line I wish to not see them walk. Like I could be content with just this, what they have here, in the moment, if it could be paused at this point forever!

Well yes all of us wanted that na,time to stop there where everything was so hunky dory between these two but life never stops and the complications and complexities is what makes this bond such a worthwhile time investment na,can never get enough of these two

But of course, the other part of me disagrees. There has to be a conscious and willing and aware acceptance of each other as partners - and nothing less than that can suffice for GK. They must undertake the ordeal, whatever way it comes - because well, even if just this moment feels like heaven, it is but a glimpse of so much more the completion of a bond could be!

Yup totally agree,true soulmates- they indeed were from the time they first met,the journey to the final destination though full of anguish,pain,hurt and cry was made worth through moments like this,where you could actually feel nothing ever could come in between these two

Anyway. Also loved the little Dushyant moment. You've just gotta feel for this guy. Even if he was once so evil, he made you cringe and writhe!

Overall, a great chapter Aditi - will look forward to the next on Saturday - have a good week!

Thanks for your lovely commets Jzee,I will try and update tomorrow as I have a long weekend 😳

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

@ All..Thanks for liking it..Just wanted to tell Aditi..that I am in awe of her SS😳

Aww Piyu I loved the poster thank you so much,something I will cherish forever😊

Well Now Aditi..⭐️Coming to the chapters...👏

Chapter 3 and 4 were wonderfully penned down..The bond is so uniquely potrayed and I just admire the way you actually chose Gullu to be a more aware mellowed down than her show counterpart...The away Kesu boy bechara falls in trap of Gulaal and then how he does a full on nautanki is so adorable..

In my opinion Gullu should have been made to realize the implications of her decision on Kesar,in show this was completely ignored,in terms of taunts that he was subjected to and also trying to figure out what this DV actually meant as there was no one trying to explain it to him,he was coming to his own conclusions and acting as he saw fit trying to draw his parallels from how Vasant used to behave with Gulaal in his mind he was her husband now and he was expected to behave as Vasant would have😕

And the terrace Tom and Jerry act..I must say its my fav..👏.Coz it has some hints to what even the CV's dared not to explore..The attraction of a teenager towards a woman who was the centre of his universe..Beautifully done..👏As I have always maintained that adoloscence is the age where each and every step counts and the growing attraction towards the opposite ..is almost inevitable and that too for such a boy whose whole world revolves around the woman..

Hmm all I can say is that his attraction is growing towards a woman he cannot live w/o,there is no awareness of what this attraction means and implication with respect to DV,no he is not even remotest idea about husband ,wife relationships but this would have been true even if Vasant would have been around,for him there was nothing wrong in adoring a woman his life revolved around

Ahhh I so want you to prolong it coz actually though Cv''s skipped some portions but the dangerous hints of Chotu Kesu bhang episode pre-leap was indeed such a hint for the impending doom...

Yes I will try my best as I think this had so much potential but I can understand why it would be difficult to project it on smaller screen in India,where there are so many social taboos still ruling the roosts🤢

And the next chapter..Awww Can he get more adorable..Picking mangoes to buy gift for his lady love..Shooo shweet..Big hugs..Aditi brilliantly done and Now I am so eager to read the next update...Lubb you and pls do prolong it..Its my sincere and humble request...Weekly updates!! No complains!!And yes!! totally forgot..NO COMMENYTS ON TALLI BILLI😆

Thanks for your lovely comments Piyu,I lub you too😳 I will prolong as much as I can be around to read,cause you may be the only one😲

Originally posted by: enchanted23

Thanks for your lovely comments Piyu,I lub you too😳 I will prolong as much as I can be around to read,cause you may be the only one😲