Gulaal: What If chp 26(part II) upd Pg 57 - Page 9

Originally posted by: Kesarmania

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hi aditi, again a briliant chapter from you:-). I loved the way u potrayed kes-gul bond. Seriously the moment gulaal came in his life, every1 else including his mother became 2ndary to him. Thanks for pm:-)

Originally posted by: minizz

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Aditi,sab se pehle yeh le ek badi wali hug🤗 aww yeah le return hug 🤗I loved it.both the chapters.I admit I was a little disappointed not finding the 7 yr leap only because you wrote about it 😆 yeah i wanted to do the leap so I could finish this SS during Easter break which starts coming Friday,but Piyu ko yeah manjoor nahi,toh main kya karu sorry 😭but then the 15yr old Kesar was so cute and the chapter was so,so good that I wished it just went on and on...😍 aww thankyou so much😳

ok now let me start with chapter 3-First of all let me just say I agree with Shradhha completely.You do write Kesar's perspective brilliantly but I am amazed at the way you are portraying Gulaal,you are doing complete justice to her character here and I am so very happy about it👏😃 Thank Mini,but you can't get away by writing SS from just one characters pov na as this is alternate journey I had to ensure that all characters from the show have fair bit of space and are justified within that space loved her thoughts and not for a second did I feel she was over reacting.In the show I could stand with her on the decision of doing DV with Kesar because that was the only way out for her at that point of time to protect her family and Kesar from harm but then later on not once does she think about the kind of repurcussions this decision might have had on him and his future.somewhere down the line it became all about Talli...uggghhh🤢So I am happy here that she is shown to be concerned for Kesar.

See Mini, this is what bothered me a lot,yes she was justified in taking that decision at the time cause there was no other option but she shouldn't have escaped the reaction her action entailed,albeit her intentions were pure but it did cause havoc in that 12 year old child's life and starngly there was no mention of this in the show🤢

bechara Kesar,his trick kinda backfired on him and when Gulaal agrees with him about the school change he just panicked.He just can't think about staying away from his Gulaal.The same goes for Gulaal but she is ready to do it,to suffer the judaai for his better future.oh Aditi,I loved that a lot😳The panic causes the nautanki Kesar to come out,who is my absolute fav😛I loved his attempts to convince PB to let him stay back and not send him away.I was laughing over there yet It was so endearing cause I could sense his desperation,he is terrified at the prospect of having to go away from Gulaal and he would do anything to avoid that 😭I loved that a lot.

Yeah Kesar's nautanki had to come out na the moment he realised his prank was going to backfire on him,and he does know how to get his way when Gulaal's lost case,his insight into her mind and how to counter her decisions that he didn't agree with was what I was trying to project,glad you liked it😳

ok I forgot to mention,one thing which stood out for me in this was Kesar's thought as to how she can be so insensitive,she could not stay away from Vasant bha for 3 days so how can she even think of sending him away for such a long time.How will she live without him.This bit was my fav.Somewhere he does know that as much as he needs his Gulaal she needs him too😳MB was at his usual best.PB was real for a change.awww the last bit was so sweet Aditi,the way he notices Gulaal being beautiful-so subtle,beautifully handled👏and the entry of khule baal...yay

Yes even in that young age he knows how difficult it will be for them to live apart from each other,specially after Vasant's death as they had been so dependent on each other to come out of that biggest loss of their lives and were still trying to come to terms with his absence

Chapter-4:I can no longer imagine Ali so trying to imagine Neil as a teenager-not very hard to do😆😉 hahahaha yes you can imaging young Neil,I guess he can pass it off as 15 year old easily 😆uff I loved this one a lot.Talli...hai isko dukh ho raha hai,Hey bhagwaan iska dukh hum sabko torture kar gaya🤢le yahaan bhi bin budhi Sudhi ne promoise kar diya ki Kesar Gudda toh tera hi hoga😡

I loved the way you changed the scene.It should have been done this way in the show.It would have made more sense.Gullu toh matchmaker nahi bani na and she is not very comfortable with the alliance too.

Yeah Sudha wanted to specify her so she made that promise only to handle the situation at that time,Gulaal is slowly but surely learning from her mistakes,she realises that this decision is not for her to make so she keeps quiet,This is what I would have liked to see too

That bit makes me very happy.I loved the little Dushyant-Kesar scene. There is a reason I have put the sequence between kesar and Dushyant you will find out in chapter or two aaah Kesar you made not only Gulaal cry but us readers too.kya kya karta hai...The whole mango picking for the money to buy Gulaal bangles-very sweet.and bechaare ko bukhaar bhi ho gaya but I loved Gulaal doing all seva.My fav has got be the scene where he wishes her and makes her wear the bangles.Gulaal is overwhelmed by Kesar's gesture and i am sure these bangles will be cherished by her just like those imlis from the show.and I ahve a feeling that this will not be the last we see of these bangles na.mujhe aisa ek scene show mein dekhna tha jo nahi dikha toh kya hua your SS is there to fulfill all my wishes🤗😊

Aww Mini you are a mind reader I guess,yes I will be using bangles in chapters to follow😳 and yeah this also highlighted the growing acceptance on Gulaal's part of his haq to bring her the gifts that she cherishes and her equal need for that support that assurance that there is someone who not only remembers her special days but goes out of his way to make it extraordinary

Thank you Piu for making Aditi write more about the pre-leap.I was a little apprehensive about imagining Ali but mera problem solve ho gaya ab main Neil ko hi dekh rahi hoon😆😳

hawww so I guess you want this to go on too,Mini how can you be in Piyu's team you are my partner😕

Aditi,I am loving the flow a lot.ok can I make a request?sometime,whenever you feel it's right, can you insert a Holi scene in somewhere.ab tu hi toh is show ki CV hai toh kuch kar na pleaaassseee😳I want to see one.Please do think about it.

Thanks Mini,Ok I will try and accomodate Holi scene somewhere,this is our SS na,hum kuch bhi ker sakte hai😆

Thank you so much for these beautiful chapters.I am so sad that I would have to wait for the next weekend for Chapter 4😭 but chalega for this SS I can wait patiently😊

Arrey nahi,I will update on Friday,it Good Friday na,we have a holiday as as my other half is in US for the entire week I will have enough time at hand I guess😊

yeh raha mera emotion se bhara hua comment😃

Thank you for you lovely comments and appreciation,means a lot to me big hugswa🤗

Originally posted by: without-fathom

The highlight of this episode for me was the starting part of Gulaal's introspection. Of the beginning of her realization of the far reaching consequences of a decision that had back in the moment of multiple crisis seemed like a one step solution to all problems. What's brilliant about that paragraph however, is how Gulaal being Gulaal draws no lesson from her mistake.

Yes in my opinion she was always very reactive to a situation her DV decision may have been the best thing in given circumstances but she failed to realise how this will affect Kesar in coming years and effect it will have on his impressionable mind,here too she is reacting to a situation he faced in the school w/o thinking through the effect of such impulsive decision will have on Kesar for her he's opinion or decision didn't matter cause he was too young to decide for himself and this continued even when he grew up and that was so unacceptable

The mistake - of making Kesar's decisions for him. Like they are her own to make. That kind of right these two could exert on each other formed the basis of a strong and endearing bond, but it is also what led Gulaal to forsake Kesar's opinions far too often. Like here. She's coming around to understanding how she's forced him into a DV with one decision - and how making it for him may not have been the best idea in the long run - but it doesn't take her one moment further to think of another resolution to this problem, which again, involves taking a decision on his behalf. Sure, he's the one who prompted the idea. But the way she takes his decisions - city school, necessary distance, dissolving of DV - the intentions with with which she wants to carry it through, are all Kesar's primary prerogatives, technically speaking.

I feel the right which she exerted to take all decisions for him and expected him to abide by same was never given to him,though he did feel it existed when he was younger,but he was never able to exert that and that why he ends up making that statement "Teri baat to mujhe manani hi thi,baat teri jo thi"

Of course, she was always Galool for a reason, right? Kesar's sharp and sensitive perception is bang on Aditi. Even inside that child's mind is a gut instinct that kicks in so right and strong - it's a Kesar defining trait!

Kesar always knew what made her tick,he so knew her inside out and that's why I put in that statement there,as once she had decided something only person that could counter that decision was MB that too for some period cause she was so bull headed when she decided on something she had to see reaction to contrary in order to revert her decision nothing and no one could alter that,one determined and stubborn woman

Will look forward to the next!

I have updated JZee but it's not post leap yet thanks to Piyu😳 Please read when you get a chance

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JZee

Originally posted by: kalika.j

@Aditi, nice chapter.

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So MY haseen qatil.😳.This is just a little gesture from my side to just show how much I am in awe of the way you are handling a delicate issue.👏.Just learned editing skills after chewing the brains of my bodyguard,my jadugarni Geeshu and my sunehri Kiran so the credit of this poster goes to them...They are the ones who taught me..🤗

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