Maneet FF walking down dark lane/upd#19-pg128 - Page 63

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update di... sry for the late post :(... but loved the update<3 ... plz write more soon :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
that kunal...hope maan does something abt him...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
interesting story...pls include me in your pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG ANOTHER ONE! Nazu...why didn't you tell me earlier...ab tak thoda to padh chuki hoti Koi baat nahi ab padhungi..it might take me some days...but I will get there 😆


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Helo hi ..I am back with my next update - too late..oops yep - I hope you still remember the story 😆
Priya is on her bed trying to sleep. She remembers the early morning meeting for which Dev has asked her to get ready. She sets an alarm in her phone and puts it beside her pillow. She goes to sleep but is disturbed by a phone call. She picks it up wondering who can call her at that hour.
Priya: Hello
caller: Hi...laughing...now I know why he is not lifting my call. can you please give the phone to him.
Priya: Him? whom did u call?
Caller: Come on yaar. give it to Vicky.
Priya: There is no Vicky here. Wrong number
Priya disconnnects the phone. She doubts if he was talking about Maan's brother but ignores.
Maan is waiting for Geet all excited. Geet comes out in a yellow color saree. Maan keeps staring at her. Geet walks closer to him. Maan holds her hands and makes her sit beside her. He keeps staring at her. Geet signals him with her eyes to look at the saree, but he ignores her.
Geet: Maaann..
Maan: hmm..
Geet: Are we gonna spend the whole night like this.
Maan: I would love to..
Geet gets angry, folds her hands, and faces other side.
Maan: Did I select this saree.
Geet: Nope. its my selection. isnt it awesome.
Maan: It just reminded me of a saying - yellow yellow dirty fellow.
Geet gets angry, snaps, gets up, and leaves to change with Maan calling from behind. Geet enters the washroom. She sees the red saree, she looks at it admiringly. She wears the saree and looks into the mirror. She finds hard to take off her eyes, but she thinks about Maan - he will say it is like we just got married. Geet pulls off the saree in frustration. She finally wears the white saree thinking it is his favorite color.
Priya is in sleep when she gets a call. She picks it up in half sleep.
Caller: Helo darling.
Priya: Helo
caller: Who is this?
Priya: Excuse me. I guess I am supposed to ask that question
caller: I am Jo. I want to talk to Vicky.
Priya: Vicky?? wrong number.
Priya disconnects the call and goes to sleep again.
Maan is worried why Geet is taking so much time to change. Geet comes out of the washroom.
Maan is happy that Geet has not let her angry spoil their night and thinks to compensate for his mischief. Geet comes and stands before Maan looking at things other than Maan. Maan smiles. He holds her by her shoulders and pulls her closer. Geet is still staring somewhere else. Maan holds her chin and makes her face him.
Maan: Geet - you are looking mesmerizing.
Geet: Me or the saree. Actually Maan. this saree will be very useful. I mean see if anyones dies in our relatives or neighborhood we have to wear white so its really nice.
Maan gets angry and holds her wrists tight and drags her close giving an angry stare. Geet is in pain.
Geet: Maan you are hurting me
Maan realises what he was doing. He leaves her hand, goes by the window and stands there facing outside. Geet feels bad. She goes and stands behind Maan.
Geet: You know I love this saree because it is white which symbolizes peace and purity - just like my wonderful hubby's heart. Maan - I am really sorry. I didnt mean to hurt you.
Maan does not react.
Geet: Ok then I will go and change.
Geet starts to leave but holds her and pulls her back.
Geet: Either I make my husband happy or angry, result is same, it hurts
Geet points Maan holding her hand tightly. Maan losens his grip. They both laugh.
Priya is in deep sleep when her phone rings again. She sits up and recieves it.
Priya: Helo. she hears loud party music.
caller: Hey man. I heard you are back home. Come and meet your friends yaar.
Priya: wrong number.
Priya goes and rings her number with landline. Her phone rings. She wonders its her phone and her own number then how all of a sudden Vicky's phone are transferred to her. She understands it is his mischief but is clueless what to do.
Maan looks lovingly at Geet.
Geet: You know I am angry.
Maan: Why?
Geet: You forgot your silly comments
Maan: oh.
Geet: what ohh.. Actually I wore red saree after that but thought u will another such comment so again wore this...just for you
Maan: so sweet
Geet: See and you always get angry with me
Maan: Yep just bcoz I love you so much.
They both hug. Geet changes her saree feeling it is late and they go to sleep.
Priya's phone rings again. She grabs and throws it on the wall. It hits the wall and breaks.

Precap: Geet suspects Priya.
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Edited by Naz_Angel - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

woohoo!!!!!!!...you have updated finaly👏...i wonder if i was any inspiration for this update😉...because maan and geet seem to get all twisted and confused like we do...😆...hmmm so i forgot about priya...but i think i remember that she is of a noble family and she ran away...right?😳...and she has some kind of background with vicky...right?😳...omg i wonder why geet is suspecting priya now...last time geet slapped priya...will she do the same this time around?😲...and what happened to that stalker?😉...btw...i saw you added some spice with maan pulling geet towards him...while they were having their angry love tiff...i liked it☺️

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Posted: 13 years ago
woww..u have updated... its great part.,loved maaneet cute nok jhok .
uff priya what is going on yaar.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Finally you have updated!👏
I'm going to read this again from the begining😍 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Finally u hv updated!👏
I'm gonna read dis again after my exams...
thanx for PM.🤗

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