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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update dear
loved it
Posted: 13 years ago
Woaha! Priya is from roayl family? And she ran away from her marriage? I did not expect that about her. I truly thought she wanted to come between Maan and Geet. The precap sounds so interesting.
Naz, how do you manage to write suspence so well? I'm in awe of you.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great update! Can't wait to read more!
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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry for late response but awesome update...finally Priya's mystery is resolved...hope to get another update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Naz 🤗
Awesome updates 😳
Wow Priya comes to know abt Geet's stalker...
Hopefully we'll also comes to know abt mystery man in nxt update 😆
Update soon...
Thnxxx 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome.. work.. keep it up
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi friends,
Here comes the next update
Priya is returning after her meeting with Surabhi. She is waiting for a cab when a car almost runs over her. Priya falls down and gets hurt. She notes the car number. Passersby help her to the nearest hospital and she gets her wounds dressed. Priya thinks she has seen this car in Khurana constructions and goes to office to find out who it was. Priya reaches office and enquires about the car. Watchman informs her that someone wants to meet her. She looks around and finds the same car waiting for her. She goes near and opens the door.
Priya: Ohh..its you...no surprise.
Kunal: Get in. I will drop you.
Priya: After what you have done to me.
Kunal: Lets have a chat and decide.
Priya gets in the car.
Kunal: So...you like adventure?
Priya: No ...I dont .
Kunal: but I love them.
Kunal gives a evil smile n speeds up the car. Priya is not so happy but knows there is no point asking him to slow down.
Priya: Why are you doing all this?
Kunal: Dont you know...I thought you know that the reason you got all those bandages.
Priya: If Maan comes to know about you intentions, do you have any idea of the consequences
Kunal: I told you I love adventures...n when I like something I get it any cost.
Priya: Are you bad? she is married and have her own life. you are unnecessarily troubling her.
Kunal: You know the only 2 things I hate - lecture and philosophy.
Kunal stops the car suddenly, Priya gets the jerk. She looks at Kunal shocked.
Kunal: Get down of my car and stop poking into my matter or next time you will not be in state to return home. Got it.
Priya gets down the car. She feels dizzy after the fast drive but manages to get herself a cab and returns to KC.
Kunal gets a call and goes to a shopping mall. He looks around and feels irritated thinking he got wrong information. He is about to step out when he sees Maneet walking in, he is all happy.
Maan and Geet walk into the shopping mall and have a walk around for sometime.
Maan: Geet...what do you think we are here for?
Geet: Maan. what do people do in a shopping mall?
Maan: Generally they buy goods n stuff..
Geet: Exactly.
Maan: But we are here since long n not bought anything.
Geet: You are eager to return to your office it seems..You go. I will do shopping myself.
Maan: Offo. I was just asking if we actually are gonna bye something or not.
Geet: Yep. how about some sarees?
Maan: Lets go then.
Maneet walk towards the ladies section where they find night wear in the way.
Maan: Lets have a look at them.
Geet: I have many of them.
Maan: We can at least have a look.
Maan selects a few night wears which Geet rejects. She feels shy and says she wont be comfortable in them. Maan laughs and selects a long dress for her and asks if she would be comfortable in that. She likes it and they get that. Maan and Geet move to the sarees section. Kunal walks into the shop and asks to pack the few nightwears that Geet has touched. sales man is surprised but packs them for Kunal.

Maneet reach home.
Maan: Geet, how about showing me how you look in these sarees.
Geet: Now but I am tired.
Maan: Ok. you take rest and I will get some work done.
Geet: No No. I am not tired . I will just come in a moment.
Kunal reaches his home and is excited about what he brought. He looks at the nightwear and looks at them. He picks up a nightwear and looks at it loving trying to imagine Geet in it. He hears someone laughing and look back. Maan is staring at Geet lovingly and they are both looking into the mirror and she is laughing.
kunal walks near the mirror and realises it was his hallucination. He turns around but finds Maan and Geet again in the mirror. He gets pissed off and breaks the mirror. He goes and throws off the nightwear he was holding.
He picks up a black one and thinks Geet will be looking gorgeous in that. He imagines Geet in that dress on his bed waiting for him. He walks towards the bed and Maan comes past him and falls over the bed covering Geet. Geet tries to stop him but Maan holds her hands and pushes her back on bed and she says she is looking gorgeous. Kunal gets mad, runs towards the bed, and grabs hold of Maan, but soon realises it was just a pillow and throws it away and other pillows n blankets on the bed.
Kunal is pissed off and thinks he has to make it fast and get his Geet away from Maan.
Precap: Geet wears all the sarees for Maan. Priya gets calls asking for Vicky 😉
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Edited by Naz_Angel - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome maan should now get rid of this kunal😡
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079

awesome maan should now get rid of this kunal😡

first maan needs to know about his intentions😉😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Naz yaar..CVs had already took the idea of Kunal naming Vikram and now you are giving them more ideas..hehe ..loved Kunal's hallucinations..

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