Love is so short, Forgetting is so long!!!!!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hello Friend, i wrote few lines and decided to share with you people, hope you guys will like it...

Ab Khushi hai na koi gam rulane wala
Hum ne apna liya har rang zamane wala

Dil mera thood ka chala gaya aisa woh
Phir loot ke na aaya humhe bhulane wala

Har saans seenein main ab chub se jaati hai
Chod gaya jab se mere saansein mehkane wala

Aansoon be palko pai ab na aate
Dil thood gaya jabse humhe haasane wala

Hume mitane wale ke berukhi ro dekho
Kafan tak na pehnaye who dafnane wala

Tha pata hogaya yahi anjaam mera
waafon ko mile ga bewafaai inaam tera
tha yakeen phir be apne waafon par mujko
tha yakeen kal hoga apne chahaton ka savera
hota be shayed koiapna aashyaana?
agar saath deta woh Duniya bana ne wala


kehne ko ab woh ho gaye hai paraye,par

Dil ke wohi hai ab be dankane badane wala


cheen liya hai humse pyar ke har ek nishane

cheeno gay kaise yaadein jin pe bas nahi tumhara


gham na karo kuch nahi jaane ga ye zamana

har sitam seene main daba dega tera ye deewana



Ab bas yahi dua hai ke khush rahe tu

Apne har sapne ko bas ab jeeye tu

hum ko jo nah mila,woh sab kuch tumhe mile

tere naye chahat ka har ek phool khile

Hamara kya hai:

Ab Khushi hai na koi gam rulane wala
Hum ne apna liya har rang zamane wala






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Posted: 14 years ago
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Kya baat hai sonu...

Jeet liya tune hume dost!

Apna rang zamane wala! Excellent composition yaar...keep them coming...great...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Beautiful Sonu ...
Really enjoyed it ..
I kind of pictured Archana saying this for Manav 😆
..In my view this poetry suits her very well in her current condition ...
You did this yourself ...wow , I am impressed .We have some really talented paople in this forum...👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very nice Sonu 👏👏 I loved it... 😳
Never knew of this talent.. 😛...
As Tanya Di said even I felt it perfectly suits Archana esp the lines in brown 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Translator, tum kaha hai?😊 (Divya.😊)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: LovePRSoham

Very nice Sonu 👏👏 I loved it... 😳

Never knew of this talent.. 😛...
As Tanya Di said even I felt it perfectly suits Archana esp the lines in brown 😆

Rachu , I felt this part was just written for Archana only .This so her , madly in love with the very person who took everything away from her ...😭

kehne ko ab woh ho gaye hai paraye,par

Dil ke wohi hai ab be dankane badane wala


cheen liya hai humse pyar ke har ek nishane

cheeno gay kaise yaadein jin pe bas nahi tumhara


Edited by Tanyaz - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tanyaz

Rachu , I felt this part was just written for Archana only .This so her , madly in love with the very person who took everything away from her ...😭

kehne ko ab woh ho gaye hai paraye,par

Dil ke wohi hai ab be dankane badane wala


cheen liya hai humse pyar ke har ek nishane

cheeno gay kaise yaadein jin pe bas nahi tumhara


oh yes Di 👍🏼
Sonu does not watch PR I think but how come he wrote it for Archu 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: suan

Translator, tum kaha hai?😊 (Divya.😊)

I can't translate the whole thing ( got to get dinner ready ) but I will translate the part I feel suits Archana a lot ...
You will like it .I am not that good at translating , still will give it a go ..
kehne ko ab woh ho gaye hai paraye,par
Dil ke wohi hai ab be dankane badane wala
cheen liya hai humse pyar ke har ek nishane
cheeno gay kaise yaadein jin pe bas nahi tumhara

It is being said that you are no longer mine

Still it is you only who can make my heart beat faster
You took away everything from me that was a symbol of our love
But how wil you take away those memories as they only belong to me ...


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tanyaz

I can't translate the whole thing ( got to get dinner ready ) but I will translate the part I feel suits Archana a lot ...
You will like it .I am not that good at translating , still will give it a go ..
kehne ko ab woh ho gaye hai paraye,par
Dil ke wohi hai ab be dankane badane wala
cheen liya hai humse pyar ke har ek nishane
cheeno gay kaise yaadein jin pe bas nahi tumhara

It is being said that you are no longer mine

Still it is you only who can make my heart beat faster
You took away everything from me that was a symbol of our love
But how wil you take away those memories as they only belong to me ...


Awww.❤️
What beautiful words.👏
Thanks so much Tanya, and yes, they suit Archana's current situation perfectly!
i can't wait to get the translation for the entire poem.
Sounds like a beautiful poem indeed.
Great job Sonu.👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thats called an awesome composition 😊
one of the best composition i have ever read when in terms of emotions,love,bonding,pain,sorrow etc 😊


sonu u r a great poet :)



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