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Posted: 14 years ago
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Fantastic OS!!!

Loved it to bits!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#72
Read part one:-) damn interesting. Moving to next:-)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
Tht was a superb ending. Esp tht u made maan realise how wrong he was when he misbehaved with geet in past. Tht even cvs seem to had forgotten! Gr8 work:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
i dont have words to explain what i felt while reading this os
brilliantly written
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 1-How could you stop at such a crucial point? You're forgiven. hehe I'm going to read the next part now. It better not be sad like most of your writings...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76
Part 2- Loved it! So glad that this was a happy OS! That was amazing!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Happiness its found in simple things...thats what u described in the 1th part,and i loved that cause i feel the same,and i was happy reading this...thank you for that jaz!!Their stubburness its so sweet,may seem like an impediment for others but for them is like their own special language...loved the way u showed that...Hmm,and my favorite part,cause i am a sucker for the way maan married geet filling her maang with his blood,u showed it here too but with sindoor...that scene everytime blows my mind!!Girl,ur ideas are alway brilliant,how maan knew abt her past and his reaction to the womans words,were worth to read!! Again i am loss at words to praise ur imagination... when maan said he wont believe her if she was to tell herself the truth...u somehow predicted maan's reaction in the actual show "geet"
Thank you again for this beautiful piece!!


See ya jaz, i am off to read another of ur work!!
😃 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78
very nice...
Maan and Geet now together and the look on Brij's face was priceless...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
awesome dear!!
you are just awesome!!
loving your fictions!!

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