OS: Saath Saath prt2 pg4 Aug 28

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#51

As always.....excellent OS!!! Keep it up...looking forward to the next one!!👏

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Tressa

@Tressa

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#52

woww.... jaz... part 2 was also fab... end was nice & dramatic... I can see all dat happening... Maan may really marry Geet like dat... no dhol... no band-baja... direct shaadi... do write more...

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Sara

@charmed ones

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#53

WoW⭐️⭐️⭐️ Jaz kiya update hai👏👏👏......mere pass tarif ke lafs nahi hai......jo abhi lakho gi kaam hoga.....I reali wish...Cvs isko liyeh ker baanae....aur ek week main shaddi kerdi apne Mannet😳 ki....par Brij😡 mandir main kiya ker raha tha?😕....

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Anum

@anufa

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#54

awsum!!!!

i wish aisa ho jaye!!!!

update sooN!!!

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Nadia

@naddiya26

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 15 years ago

#55

totally amazing OS dear.. you are outstanding ...i am sacred to write OS now ...
the way you wrote is fabulous ...

Edited by naddiya26 - 15 years ago

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sharanya

@shaaranya

Rocker

+ 9

Posted: 15 years ago

#56

OMG!!!

amazing!!!!

such an awesome OS!!!

PLZZZ do write more n pm me wen u do

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-Urvi-

@-Urvi-

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#57

Aaaaaahhh! That got such a huge grin to my face you know! Thank God I didn't discover this OS when you'd only written Part 1. Reading both parts together was a complete treat!

You write really really well, and I especially like the way you describe each of their feelings. Thanks for sharing! :)

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Tasneem

@kooLgrl786

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#58

Part 1

"Suniyeh,

hehehe.......i luv dis!!!

Maan was lost in her happiness, her smile and her excitement

awwwwww.....!!

"Uski shaadi'''''''."

thnk god he heard till d end!!!!

i so much wanted him to hear everythin hehe....!!!
once agn an awsum OS.....grl u rock!!
made my day.....n anothr one to go...
n thn its monday .......yeppie!!!

luv ya!!
T@$