OS: Saath Saath prt2 pg4 Aug 28 - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
As always.....excellent OS!!! Keep it up...looking forward to the next one!!👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
woww.... jaz... part 2 was also fab... end was nice & dramatic... I can see all dat happening... Maan may really marry Geet like dat... no dhol... no band-baja... direct shaadi... do write more...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53

WoW⭐️⭐️⭐️ Jaz kiya update hai👏👏👏......mere pass tarif ke lafs nahi hai......jo abhi lakho gi kaam hoga.....I reali wish...Cvs isko liyeh ker baanae....aur ek week main shaddi kerdi apne Mannet😳 ki....par Brij😡 mandir main kiya ker raha tha?😕....

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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
awsum!!!!


i wish aisa ho jaye!!!!

update sooN!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
totally amazing OS dear.. you are outstanding ...i am sacred to write OS now ...
the way you wrote is fabulous ...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
OMG!!!
amazing!!!!
such an awesome OS!!!
PLZZZ do write more n pm me wen u do
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
Aaaaaahhh! That got such a huge grin to my face you know! Thank God I didn't discover this OS when you'd only written Part 1. Reading both parts together was a complete treat!
You write really really well, and I especially like the way you describe each of their feelings. Thanks for sharing! :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58
Part 1

"Suniyeh,

hehehe.......i luv dis!!!

Maan was lost in her happiness, her smile and her excitement

awwwwww.....!!

"Uski shaadi'''''''."

thnk god he heard till d end!!!!

i so much wanted him to hear everythin hehe....!!!
once agn an awsum OS.....grl u rock!!
made my day.....n anothr one to go...
n thn its monday .......yeppie!!!

luv ya!!
T@$
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59
just loved it totally
i hope cv's are reading this and actually they make such a episode
do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60

Hey just read your entire FF...its wonderfully written. Loved the way it progressed.

Do continue and pm me .

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