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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
Haaye it was such a nice OS
Kash same thg happens in serial yaar
Loved the way u portrayed all feelings emotions pain n love here
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
the thought of Geet being married to another man, it made his blood boil. The thought of Geet being a Mrs. Geet Something-Or-Other, instead of Mrs. Geet Maan Singh Khunrana, it enraged him.

hehee........our blood also boiled seeing her wid DEV :@ arrghh...

"Main nahin chati ke meri zindagi ke boj thale, aap dab jayeh."

ufff dis was d line of d episode!!!!!!

Geet! Kya kaar rahi ho? Iss hal main tumhe aaise kaam nahin karna chahiyeh!"

hehehe dis was funny.....lolzz i can jst imagine his expression!!!

Walking in their direction was her brother, Brij.


expected entry :@

"Geet kahin nahin jayegi," Maan said in a menacing tone. "Aur khabar joh tune phirse Geet ka haath pakda."

Brij laughed. "Aacha ashiq dunda hai tune Geet. Ek tujhe chodke chale gaye toh tune dusra dhund liyah?"

"Aaye!" Maan yelled as he grabbed Brij by the collar, lifting him off the floor. "Geet ke bare mein aaisa kuch kaha toh tu jaan se jayega!"

"Bohot garmi hai tujh mein Geet ke liyeh," Brij said "Tu jaanta kya hai Geet ke bare mein? Tu jaanta bhi hai ke uska ateet bhi hai?"

"Chup," Maan said.

"Tu jaata hai ke ussne aapna muh kaala karke aayi hai? Tu jaanta bhi hai ke woh aapni izzat gavake aayi hai?" Brij said.

"Nahin…maine aaisa kuch nahin kiya," Geet said.

Turning his head, Maan saw tears in Geet eyes.

"Tu jaanta bhi hai ke yeh neech ladki ne…………"

"BAAS!" Maan roared.

Geet and Brij were both shocked by his out burst.

"Baas," he said, "Bohot hogaya. Jitna mujhe jaan na hai, main jaanta hoon."

Brij didn't blink when he said, "Uske kartoon ki bare mein tu kya jaanta hai?"

"Saab kuch, saab kuch jaanta hoon main!" Maan said.

"Kya?" Brij said.

"Saab……………" Geet whispered behind him.

"Haan, saab janta hoon. Main jaanta hoon ke Geet ki shaadi tum saab ne zabardasti kardiya tha. Main jaanta hoon ke woh shaadi nakli thi aur shaadi ke dusri din woh admi usse chodke chala gaya tha."

"Inko kaise…" Geet whispered behind him.

"Tu…" Brij began but Maan shut him up.

"Main yeh bhi jaanta hoon ke Geet uske baache ki Maa banne wali hai," he said.



Love dis part!!!!



What he did next, left everyone speechless. He took a pinch of sindoor from a thali that rested in front of God. He raised his hand to her forehead and filled the part in her hair with the sacred red powder. She looked at him – shocked.


OMG....OMG....OMG..... :|

speechless!!!


"Aab main samaj gaya hoon ke tum mujhse door kyun bhate the. Woh issi liyeh kyun ke tum nahin chati ke tumhare vajese meri zindagi mein koi bhi muskhil aayein, issi liyeh nahin kyun ke tum mere liyeh kuch mehsoos nahin karti,"

👏

"Main jaanta hoon ke tum bhi mere liyeh woh mehsoos karti ho, joh main tumhare liyeh mehsoos karta hoon. Tumhari akhoon bhi wohi ehsaas hai joh mere akhoon mein hai,"

👏

👏

👏

"Mere dil main jis ladki ne jaga banali hai, woh koi aur nahin…tum ho Geet. Tum ho," he whispered.

OMG.....yeppie he atlast said it!!

"I love you Geet. Tumhare liyeh main kuch bhi kar sakta hoon,"

yeeeeeaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh!!!!!.......love dis line...!!

"I love you too," she said as she raised herself to her toes and placed a soft kiss on his cheek.

awwwwww..............!!!!

The Best OS by far!!!
loves all ur contribution but dis one......woot woot!!!😲👏
dey got married yepppieee!!!!!.....im lovin it!!
dis was such a dramatic one.......gosh!!
i luv u grl......srsly!!
hw will i handle 2day?......dis OS n thn d episode 2ni8😍
WONDERFUL...!!!!
T@$<3
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63

Wow just loved it..u made my day.. Gosh it was so beautiful..

I just saw it was so long but even if it had more long i wouldnt have mind it really..
LOVely..thanks for the PM..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
wow jaz loved both parts .!!! fantastic !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
wow, that was a very emotionally charged chapter...it had everything from geets revelation, brij's appearance to maneet confession...kudos to u jaz for writing a thoroughly entertaining OS. u have a way with words which makes the reader delve into another world altogether, thank u! 👏


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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
OMG just read both of dem abhi abhi...N trust meh i'm not sleeping tonight😆..the second part was so beautiful..You made evrything go just perfect...It was all so dramatic i felt like i was standing right there...👏...Please write more of much OS's with "happy endings"😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
TWIN!!!
OMG am i dreaming or was this another happy ending??...wow i guess my need for happy endings reaally did reach you telepathically😆....umm that might not be spelled right but ohh well....AHHHHHHHHHHH 2 parts?...you are on a roll dawg and please don't rewind back to sad stories...they make me cry and plus need i remind you that you owe me some stuff?😉....omg what to say!...part 1 was just sooooo cutee...the way Geet was excitedly telling Maan about her childhood things was the highlight for me😳....i always lovee the wayy Geet finds happiness in small things cuz so do I and the way you incorporated that in the story was simply amazing!!!....and part 2....MARRIAGE??....omg as if my dreams were not enough!! haha...wow, just WOW!!...but i think the sindoor part was just perfect and the wayy Maan stood protectively in froont of Geet....*SIGH*....that was just awesome!!!....how are you soo gud dude?...what is the secret of your writing missy?...please do give your twin some tips so she can ace her college essays😆....now hopefully you have no more complains for me dude but that doesn't mean I don't haha😉...well waiting for your next OS now rapido!!❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
Hi Jaz,
U just summarized what 3 yrs of the show. I hope the CVs read this Two shot & make the "scene" as sensitive as u have written it.
I really enjoyed reading it. U always write the emotions so well!
Geet will need Maan's support.
-Sona
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
jaz!!

that was a lovely update..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
nice part.. finally Maan knows the truth about Geet..

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