OS: Saath Saath prt2 pg4 Aug 28

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Binish

@mayurmaaneet

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Posted: 15 years ago

#31

wow.. and once again i have tears in my eyes.. kya jaz always making us cry! loved the update.. hope ur giving us another part! i cant believe geet and maan married.. ehhe.. continue soon.

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-Premeena-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#32

awesome... soo loved all of it...!! plain woww... u were more than amazing..!!!

write more OS's.. plain woww..!!=)

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441240

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Posted: 15 years ago

#33

that was brilliant Jaz....

loved ur take on Maan's reaction to Geet's truth...

i only hope something similar happens in the show.....

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raman1921

@raman1921

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Posted: 15 years ago

#34

Wow Jaz very Nice I hope that's becomes true LOL .........:)

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Pickachu

@pickachu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#35

Awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee os.
I loveeeeeeee it.
I hope that happens in show too.

Fatima

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Anisha

@.anishaa.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#36

Eeeeeek I am so excited Jaz i love your writing!

LOL *squeals and jumps and shrieks and laughs and smiles and is sooooooo excited*
Gonna read both parts now, took a brief sneak peek and will comment after reading!

And definitely continue to PM me! Loveya!

-Anisha 😊

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Opti

@Opti

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Posted: 15 years ago

#37

Just read Part 1. Lovely Jaz. I can visualise the entire scene and well imagine Maaneet speak those lines. Hope we get to see something as sensible in the show. Off to read Part 2.

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Neetu2825

@Neetu2825

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Posted: 15 years ago

#38

Gosh, I hope this is how it happens in the actual show. If they are married, then they won't get separated by Dev. With Dev turning positive, the current track is really freaking me out. Loved ur update...it was beautiful.😊

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Manal Ali

@.YixingsManal.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#39

Yaaaaay u updated it n tht too a LONG version😃 & OMG Jaaz Thanks ALOT 🤗 i mean i always Wanted Maan To Know Geets PAst like this 😃 cuz we all know how Maan is, he wont have trusted her if she told him, so ya this was the onli way n u fullfilled ma Dream *BALLE BALLE* Come Come Beta Give Jhapiz 🤣 ------ Maan wanted to beat something! How dare anyone think about doing such a thing to Geet? Leaving her stranded at the airport, causing her to go to jail – JAIL! Just the thought of Geet trapped in a jail cell with real criminals made his skin crawl.
I Loved This Line As This Was soooo Maan😉 I mean Im sure he'lll actually do this ! his Anger on Tht Guy Was so Clear here👏

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And Thn

Clearly, this was information that Maan could have done with out. He didn't know or like how jealous he felt at the moment. Marriage comes with certain expectations, Geet had only fulfilled her duties as a wife. But why, why did it make him want to jump off a bridge at the thought of some scum bag having his hands all over Geet's body. Why did it want to make him vomit at the thought of some other man kissing her, touching her – pleasing her? Why? I knw How He Feels 😭 cuz 1st of alll he knows tht poor Geet Was Cheated n she had no idea wat was happpenin to her n she did wah otha wife do😕 buh Pooor Maaan😭 he might be diein Slowly slowly everytime when he thinks about how tht Jerk Touched n Kisssed HIS Geet🤢🤢😡

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"Meri zindagi main aapke ilava, aur bhi muskhilein hai." She'd said this when he found her crying at her home after Mr. Chopra's party where he'd caused her to quit her job.

"Mujhe koi haq nahin hai ke main aapke liyeh kuch bhi mehsoon karoon." She'd said this with tears in her eyes outside the club.

"Main nahin chati ke meri zindagi ke boj thale, aap dab jayeh." She'd said this just a few nights ago. Ofcourse 😭 Seriously After Readin this OS n This Line I wanna Kill Tht Jerk !😡 I mean few Days Back i was Again feelin bad for him as wah NT was doin to him buh now, HE DESERVE It😡😡 Sala, Khutta , Kamina🤢

Getting up, he walked over to her room. He pushed the door slightly to see if it was open or closed. When the door moved back, he immediately stopped. He debated on whether he should go in or not. He didn't want to invade her privacy, but in the end his hearts desire to see her was stronger than any logic his mind came up with. He gently opened the door, making sure it didn't make a sound. Her back was to the door, her face facing the open window. He walked around the bed, instantly taken by her beauty. As it was, she was a beautiful woman, but the moonlight hitting her face – it rendered him speechless. A soft breeze blew in causing her to shiver slightly and frown in her sleep. Looking around he saw a blanket at the foot of the bed. Then took it and placed it on her gently. She stirred slightly, but didn't wake. Instead she pulled the blanket close and gave a small smile. Maan couldn't help but grin. Here I can Imagine The Scene When geet was in out house n Maan comes in n thinks he was Dreamin 😳😳😳

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Any sliver of doubt he had was pushed aside when Geet tossed slightly and placed a hand protectively over her stomach. Ya thts the onli thing she do Which makes us Think she is Pregnant, other wise we see NO STOMACH 🤣

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Why? Why did he have to be such an egotistical jerk? If he hadn't had his pride and ego hurt by her refusal, maybe he'd actually have seen that there was more pain in her eyes than his. He played all the moments in his mind when he'd hurt her – physically and emotionally. The times he'd said that she was a weak woman who knew only to run from her problems and nto face them head on. How was he supposed to have knows that she was facing the biggest hurdle in her life head on? How the hell was he supposed to know!? Exactly My Point! He would have neva Trusted her! thts y I reallly Want CV's To Let maan know The Truth Like This!!

This will be the Best Way!!!!!

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His sentence died in his mouth when he felt someone bump into him. He was already irritated, this was pissing him off. He turned ready to blast off on the person who apparently didn't have the eyes needed to walk. Turning he saw that it was Geet who was standing behind him. When he put a hand on her shoulder, he saw she was shaking.Haila Jaaz 🤗 Tumne Toh Saach Mein Meri Khawaish Poori Kar di 🤗

Immediately, Maan dropped the phone that was in his hand. He stepped in front of Geet like a shield, pushing her behind him with his right hand Ayeeeeeeee😳 Our Maan is so 😳Protective😳😳

"Geet kahin nahin jayegi!" Maan said harshly, as he felt Geet latch onto his arm, her finger nails digging into his skin. Awwwwwwwwwww 😳 Just Like Khurban Hua Seq, When He was takin her to the room, n thn Geet Was tryin to hide Her self Behind him n thn Hold His Hand😳😳

Brij laughed. "Aacha ashiq dunda hai tune Geet. Ek tujhe chodke chale gaye toh tune dusra dhund liyah?" This is Wah We expected frm this Jerk🤢

"Aaye!" Maan yelled as he grabbed Brij by the collar, lifting him off the floor. "Geet ke bare mein aaisa kuch kaha toh tu jaan se jayega!" Haila 🤣 I can Imagine Maan Liftin Brij 🤣 1 Slap is Missin here 🤣

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and Then When Maan said

"Haan, saab janta hoon. Main jaanta hoon ke Geet ki shaadi tum saab ne zabardasti kardiya tha. Main jaanta hoon ke woh shaadi nakli thi aur shaadi ke dusri din woh admi usse chodke chala gaya tha." Geet what Else do u want 😳😳 1 Jerk Left u alone🤢 n Our Maaan is still there for u 😳 aye Kash Mujhe Bhi Ek Maan Mil Jaye😳😳😳😳😳

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And thn .. And Thn ,.... Here Comes the Part Where i Actually started jumpin Up n down 😃😃😆😆

Without one word, Maat took Geet's hand into his. He pulled her behind him as he entered the mandir. He didn't stop until they stood in front of God. Then he looked into her eyes, seeing confusion, shock and fear.

What he did next, left everyone speechless. He took a pinch of sindoor from a thali that rested in front of God. He raised his hand to her forehead and filled the part in her hair with the sacred red powder. She looked at him – shocked. Oyeeeeeeeeee 😲😲 u read ma Mind😲😲 🤣 go check Geet's Facebook Page n check ma Comment on her status 🤣 I said Exactly like this😳 I really Wanted Maan to Marry Geet 1st n thn to knw tht, tht Jerk is non otha thn his Own Brother🤢 ( is Maan Actuallly Devs Brother🤢 I dnt think so 🤢 BIG DIFFERENCE)

---- Now here when i was doin Balle Balle 🤣

Maan turned to Brij. "Milgaya jawab! Geet meri paatni hai, meri zimedari hai. Aagar tu Geet ke aas paas bhi nazar aaya, toh jaan se mardunga!" Nice Slap on Brijs Face👏 I wish Darji was there too 😉😆

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"Aab main samaj gaya hoon ke tum mujhse door kyun bhate the. Woh issi liyeh kyun ke tum nahin chati ke tumhare vajese meri zindagi mein koi bhi muskhil aayein, issi liyeh nahin kyun ke tum mere liyeh kuch mehsoos nahin karti," Maan said.

Geet looked away unable to meet his eyes.

"Main jaanta hoon ke tum bhi mere liyeh woh mehsoos karti ho, joh main tumhare liyeh mehsoos karta hoon. Tumhari akhoon bhi wohi ehsaas hai joh mere akhoon mein hai," he added.Ayeeee Geet Shut up Now 😆 u Lucky Biatch u Got Our carin+Sexy Maan Singh Khurana😳😳😳😆

Maan was not about to let her go, so he grabbed her hand and pulled her back. She crashed into him, her back to him as he held her close. Aye here Maneet's Fast Mahi Track, Which we Heard when Maan Saved Geet Frm Drownin goes so Well here😳

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They looked at each other for a long while not saying anything. It had been Maan who took her into his arms first. A moment later, he felt her hug him back. She grabbed onto him tight as she wept.

"Shh Geet, roh maat," he said as he stroked her head. "Main hoon naa, tumhe aur humare baache ko kuch nahin hoga. Main humesha tumhare saath hoon."

She pulled back and looked at him in awe. Maan knew it was because he'd called her baby his own just now.

"I love you too," she said as she raised herself to her toes and placed a soft kiss on his cheek Ayeeeeee Jaz u killed me 😳 n Haila FINISH 😲😲 Why 😭😭😭😭

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Jaaaaaaz Loved it !!! Part was the Best !!! i mean everythin i wanted to happen n u actully Fullfilled ma dream 🤗

Love u Jaz 🤗

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Opti

@Opti

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Posted: 15 years ago

#40

Beautiful Jaz. I loved the way he remembered everything and connected the dots as the women were narrating Geet's past. I particularly liked that he regretted being harsh on Geet so many times. Wish to see this in the show too.

Just a couple of little things, though. You could have also made the women say how Geet declared the truth to the villagers, broke her ties with her family and got Brij arrested. That would have raised her further in his eyes. He is under the impression she did not listen to his advise after he told her to go to the police.

And as far as the last line goes, I would have preferred to see Geet utter those words in hindi. Would have sounded more romantic and Geet like. Some how couldn't imagine Geet say these words in English, at least not now.

Overall a wonderful part which I thoroughly enjoyed reading.

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