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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey all! I am back with...a story? a recollection? a poem? I don't know what it is😆 I just wanted to write an OS in the form of a poem and so, I did!



A blissful life with its own highs and lows,

Looking back I realize from moments, life grows;

The smiles and the frowns-with you I found,

Thinking back, I tread the known, trodden ground….

The very first meeting, oh so random!

At a common friend's party, dancing in tandem,

Till that glass full of drink you spilled,

And hence, began our story-so against our will!

The next few meetings, the mutual annoyance we felt,

Ending up in the same college, what a joke had fate dealt!

The proposal during a ragging drill,

Something in your eyes made my heart melt;

And that was another new beginning,

As friends we started over again-fate was grinning!

The accidental meeting when you were breaking down,

Pulling down guards, a new bond was found.

The three years in college-the most memorable,

Took our relationship from bumpy to stable….

Three years…..

Of hugs and fests, of fights and tests,

Of breaking down to rise again,

Of turning each loss to our gain,

Of finding ourselves all over again,

Of learning to forget all our pain!

The alleged link-ups, all the teasing,

Living in denial, pushing away our feelings!

The insecurity and fear of losing each other causing a fit,

Till your buddy forced you to admit!

The perfect proposal-a real one this time around,

Sitting by me in the middle of college grounds,

The joy, the relief that I soaked in,

It was tough to keep away the huge grin!

The years of courtship-the eye-openers,

Bouncing off the lows, coming out stronger;

Moving to different cities, living our dreams,

Fighting hard to maintain our love's sheen.

The time when I almost lost you,

The few days when distances finally caught you,

The little time away almost killed me,

Till with your love, you again filled me.

Our mutual decision to not procrastinate,

Tying the knot, not being any more late!

The fairytale wedding that soon followed,

With you by my side, I just glowed!

Its been a year now, as Mrs. Geet Maan Singh Khurana,

Each day has been memorable, with lakhs others to follow,

Each moment with you, makes my heart swell with pride,

I am yours and you are my Maan for life!


Do tell me if the story came across!

Love

Swati😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
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First of all bravo for this experiment. I loved it thoroughly. It showed a simple love story in a beautiful way.
First meeting in a friend's party.. dropping drink on her dress😆
ending up in same college.. twist of fate..
I started reading it with a grin but at one place my grin died as i looked interestingly

The proposal during a ragging drill,

Something in your eyes made my heart melt;

That touched a chord.

The rest of the journey was beautifully explained.. with the slow progression of their relation

And the end was bang on. One thing I love in your writing is the realistic factor in your writing. Loved it loads <3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Stupendous... I am speechless... What to say... It was lovely... U explained their small journey beautifully... Great job
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Mindblowing ...you expressed their love story in a short lines...marvoulous...loved it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb , simply awsome dear...never knew that a story could be so beautifully said through a poem...👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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princess
loved it veryyy much
specially the lines

The accidental meeting when you were breaking down,

Pulling down guards, a new bond was found.

The three years in college-the most memorable,

Took our relationship from bumpy to stable….

loved it

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Certainly, My Life is not blessed at all, right now! 😭

It clearly SUCKS! 😭
But Loved your attempt, though I am Zero in Poems, I liked it, but read it twice .. 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cloud9.

First of all bravo for this experiment.

Thanks! I was apprehensive about posting this!
I loved it thoroughly. It showed a simple love story in a beautiful way
Glad you liked it. wanted to keep it simple so that its not lost in the poetry
First meeting in a friend's party.. dropping drink on her dress😆
ending up in same college.. twist of fate..
True😆
I started reading it with a grin but at one place my grin died as i looked interestingly

The proposal during a ragging drill,

Something in your eyes made my heart melt;

That touched a chord.😳

The rest of the journey was beautifully explained.. with the slow progression of their relation

And the end was bang on. One thing I love in your writing is the realistic factor in your writing.

what can i say! You always leave a comment that makes me feel proud of myself. Thanks a lot!😃

Loved it loads <3


@Replied in red
Thanks Shikha DI😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sakshi.ekansh

Stupendous... I am speechless... What to say... It was lovely... U explained their small journey beautifully... Great job

Thanks a lot.😊 Glad you liked it. I was scared that the story would be lost in words
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Mindblowing ...you expressed their love story in a short lines...marvoulous...loved it...


Thanks a lot for reading.
Glad you liked it.😊

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!! Prologue !!! Akeli hi chal rahi thi is zindagi ki raho pe Na manjil or na raste ka tha kuch pata Rote bilkate le rahi thi saase kaise be Apni...

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Posted by: priya_21 · 8 years ago

Hey all of you welcome all in Maaneet sweet world one more painful story i hear " Kitni girhein kholi hai maine" a nd feel this going perfect

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