OS(Poem)-A Blessed Life

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princess163

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: jyothikrish
wow... awesome dear...
loved it to the core...
thanks 4 the pm

Thanks a lot😊

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princess163

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: anks_ams
awesome:)

Thanks😊

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princess163

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: meena..
awesome,superb,amazzing dear

Thanks for the generous praise😊

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princess163

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet
omg swatiii...
beautiful poem..or should i say an os..
the most hatke type i hve ever read...
just so beautiful yaara...hats off to u👏
n my fav line...ahhh😍
Each moment with you, makes my heart swell with pride,

I am yours and you are my Maan for life!
ahhh me feeling super happy yaar...😳
loved it so so so very much!!!🤗

DQ🤗

Glad you liked it dear😃

Last line to mujhe bhi bhot pasand hai😳

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princess163

@princess163

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: teju2292
awesome is a smal word to describe ur writing yaar
but i dont find any other word too...
that was fabulous...fantastic and AWESOME...
i loved each and every word of ur poem...
i can never ever forget these lines...
The perfect proposal-a real one this time around,

Sitting by me in the middle of college grounds,

The joy, the relief that I soaked in,

It was tough to keep away the huge grin!

Our mutual decision to not procrastinate,

Tying the knot, not being any more late!

The fairytale wedding that soon followed,

With you by my side, I just glowed!

lovely lovely sooo much i loved it