FF:Laut aya main..apne Desh ke liye.Ch12 pg31.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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First of all, I would like to thank Jayati and Ashi for their help and support!!

And Varsha99 for helping me to make-up a story!!
You guys are very sweet yaar!!
I probably could have not have done this without your help!
Back to my topic...
This story is about, our Mahan Samrat Chandragupt, who coming to India, from heaven after taking permission from God. He used to ask God each and every day, to send him to Earth, so that he could help people, but he was refused each time by being said that, the rules of the nature will be broken. Chandragupt wanted to go there during the foriegn rule. But... jane hi nahi dete the! He used to cry, seeing his country people starving. Now to, he can't tolerate this. After years and years of request and praying, God atlast agreed to send him, along with Chanakya. And now... they will try to end corruption, starvation, crime etc. So lets get going with their new journey...
Charecter Sketch
Mahan Samrat Chandragupt
We all know how he is.. but now.. when he is going down to Earth, his look will be as he used to look in his youth.. But... will he be wearing his old dress... I don't think so!! If he come down to Earth, he'll have to wear those mordern/western clothes!!!
Why??? You know!! Will any one believe who is he actually?? But his real identity will also come out later.
But remember... here he is fully not a human!!
Respected Acharya Chanakya
Don't worry!! He will not change his look!! Chanakya, here, will not go out with Chandragupt much. He'll make plans for him as he used to do before.. But whenever he will go out, he'll go in his same attire. He is Not so strict here!
BHAGVAN KO KISSI RANG, ROOP MEIN NAHI DHAAL SAKTE. WO TO EK SHAKTI HAIN...
SO, I think it will be wrong to post someone's photograph here and make him God[this is an FF. Not some serial]
Rushiraj Pawar
No much changes
A great child actor as we all know. Here too he potrays the role of Chandragupt!! Great right?? Chandragupt loves to see him doing his role.Tries to help Chandragupt in every possible way. But how did he believe that he is the real one??
You'll see in the story...
Aashika
Rushi's sis, and a great admirer of Chandragupt. Now when her brother is acting as Chandragupt, she has more intrest in finding out new info. on Chandragupt. But when the real one came infront of her... you can imagine her condition!! [dream-world!!😆] She too is an actress.
[Rushi and Aashika's mother father don't know any thing about Chandragupt coming on Earth and their kids helping them]
Nitin Parbhat
Close friend of Rushi and Aashika.
He too knows every thing and always ready too help them. Does the role of Aambhik along with Rushi in his show. Chandragupt likes him a lot just as Rushi and Aashika. He is a very sweet person. But some times doesn't know what should be done in a particular situation..
If any other charecters are added, they will be intoduced later...
Lo get set go with Chandragupt, Chanakya, Rushi, Aashika and Nitin!
please comment!!
INDEX

Character Sketch one- page1

Chapter one-page 2-
Radhi's Cartoon cast- page 4-
Some more characters-page-4 [CS-2]
Chapter two-page-2
Chapter three-page-7
Chapter four-page-10
Chapter five-page 12
Pics-page-14
Chapter six-page 17
Some more characters-page 17
Chapter seven-page 19
Chapter eight and CS-page 21
Pics- Page 24
Pics-Page 25
Chapter nine-page 27
Chapter ten-page 28
Chapter 11-page 30 [flashback]
Chapter 12-page 31
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Posted: 13 years ago
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good one Arushi! continue soon 😊
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such a wow story...very different...😊
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I am so late!!!!!!!!!!!

don't worry!!
its awesome~!!
i would love to read it!!

and woah!! FFs ki baarish ho rahi hai forum par!!
happy to see that!!

:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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bol fr ur ff arushi... gr8 concept!
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wow yaar...
itne acchi baat hai humare forum par itne saare FFsss
m gonna loving it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ok... So, the first part of my first FF is here... Hope you all like it!!
Up... in the heaven...
[God calls Chandragupt to him.. He wants to give him a surprise! Guess what? Sending him on EARTH!!!]
God- Aao beta, aao!
Chandragupt- Pranam Bhagvan. Prabhu! aaj aap ne mujhe kaise yaad kiya? Isliye taaki aap mujhe keh saken ki ab phirse usi manokamna ke liye prarthna mat karna?
God- Nahi putra! Aisi koi baat nahi hai. Balki main to tumhari manokamna puri kar raha hun. Tumne hazaron varshon tak mujhe ek hi cheez ke liye Prarthna ki hai, ki main tumhe kuch dono ke liye Dharti par bhej doon? To main tumhari prarthana swikaar kaise na karun?
Chandragupt- Dhayavad Prabhu! Dhanyavad! Aaj... aaj apne meri manokamna puri kardi! Main... main kya kahun!
God- Are bas bas! Itni khushi! Achcha, main tumse sun na chahta hun ki tum Bharat kyun jana chahte ho?
Chandragupt- Prabhu! Aap jaanten hain, phir bhi aap pooch rahe hain? Main... main jab, apne Bharat ko dekhta hun, to rota hun. Kya isi Bharat ke liye maine, aur mere Acharya ke dukh, sankat, taklif, jhelin? Aur ham dono kyun? Hamare jaise aur bhi raja aayen, jinhone na jaane kitne sankat jhele honge! Ham sabka Akhand Bharat ka swapn khand-khand ho gaya! Gandhar aaj Afganistan ho gaya. Pakistan alag to gaya. Adha Bangal Bangladesh ho gaya. In firangiyon ne hamare desh ko kya se kya bana diya? Pehle ke Khalji Tughlaq, Lodi, Mughal, phir ye Angrez! Phir, jab mera Bharat inke kabze se Azad hua to Bhrashtachaar, Jurm, Bhukmari, Garibi ne mere desh ko... Main kya karun? Mujhse nahi dekha jaata ye sab. Main apne Bharat ko phirse wahi sone ki chidiya banana chahta hun.😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
God- Mujhe tum par garv hai! Jao putra jao. Mera Ashirvad to hamesha tumhare saath rahega. Mujhe aaj bahuat prasannta ho rahi hai.
Chandragupt- Aap ka bahaut bahaut Dhanyavad!
God- Lekin... dekho. Tum wahan par in vastron mein nahi rahoge. Main tumhare saath wo aaj-kal ke zamane ke wastra bhejunga. Aur kya tumhe aaj kal ki Hindi samajh mein aaye gi? Ab, tumhe mere Ashirvaad se Angrezi aur ekksivi shatabdi jaisi Hindi bhasha bhi aati hai. Aur tum vaise hi dikhoke jaise apni jawani mein dikhte the. Ek 20-22 varsh ke yuvak.
God- Aap ka ek bar phir dhanyavaad! Ye bhakt... aap ko aur kya kehsakta hai? Koi aagya Prabhu?
God- Tum jab neeche jaoge to tum teen bachchon se miloge jo tumhari sahayata karenge. Chanakya, baat mein neeche aaye ga.
Chandragupt- Teen balak? Wo meri kya sahayat karenge?
God- ye aaj ke bachche hain. Jinke andar bahaut buddhi hoti hai. Aur ye kaun hain wo tumhe neeche jaakar pata chalega, aur tumhe ye apna parichay denge, tumhare chehre par avashya hi ek muskaan aa jayegi. Ab jaao!
Down on Earth- Rushi and Ashika
Its morning 10:00. Rushi and Ashika's parents have gone out for some work and come back at late night. They don't have shooting today. Nitin is also free but not with them right now. Both the kids are having there breakfast. Suddenly, A glowing golden ball of light comes down infront of them and starts growing bigger and bigger. Both the bachchas are very scared.
What will happen next? What about that golden ball? What will be Rushi and Ashika's reaction? Find out in the next part!
Edited by arushi02 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ arushi :
good start👏 !! mujhe to abhi se hi yeh story ek comedy lag raha hai😆..aur isme comedy hona bhi chahiye..after agar 300BC ka insan 2012 AD mein aa jaye toh gadbad hona to pakki hai na 😉!! update soon !!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsm part arushi nyc strt...

updt soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow !!! vry nice CS and update !!! :)
ur story is vry vry vry interesting !! am loving it !!

Plzzz PM me :)
Witing fr ur next update

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