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Posted: 13 years ago
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If silence could ever speak

Kesar,

Tu kaisa hein..apne Vasanthbha ko bhul gaya?..pehle tho hum paas na hokar bhi humesha saath rehthe dhe..lekin achaanak yeh sab kaise hua..tu hum sab se ithni alag..apne Vasanthbha se bhi...kyun Kesar..eik hi pal mein..aisa kya hua tha ki sab kuch ithne badal gaye...
bahut koshish karke teri patha doond nikkala hein..pehle socha tha ki tuje aakar milun..phir tu hi tho kehtha tha na ki mere khath dekhthe hi ghar daud aane ka mann kartha hein..isliye socha ki aakhir tuje likh hi doon...waapas aaja Kesuda..apne Vasanthbha ke khadir...
Vasanth
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The arms which held the letter shivered, while he tightly closed his teary eyes in deperation...
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He placed his lagauge on the upward berth of the bus and sat by the window seat...the bus was crowded with so many villiagers along with the so called 'sophisticated' civilians...but he felt so lonely,as if this world doesnt belong to him..or was that he never wanted so..except with his Vasanthbha and ...and someone who trespassed his world, for whom he has craved the most but denied himself all these years...as the sights outside were left behind, the world also travelled 3 years back
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Flash Back

It was festival time for Talasagara, a variety of colors filed the streets creating an ambience of the whole festive mood, the street shops tented there with a wide range of handicrafts and other fancy materials. On the other side, there the girls in small groups were performing the Garba dance form of the traditional Gujarat.

While the camera flashes were frequently capturing the snaps from different angles.She was vigilant to preserve the artistic beautyin each frame. She has completely lost in her craziness (photography) along with the spectaculars which her lens would rapidly absorb.

Suddenly she was interrupted by a teasing laugh from behind.

Dushyanth:(laughing) Tu tho aisi behave kar rahi hein jaise Garba pehli baar dekh rahi hein!
Nirja:( in an irritated tone) Pehle bahut baar dekh chukki hun (softness and a strange affection crept in her voice, staring at the spot) lekin un sab mein kuch kammi dhi...woh..kuch tha jo sirf yahan mil saktha hein. Yeh,..logon ki masoomiyath,yeh sachai, iss kala ke prathi jo lagav hein un mein, jo preeth hein, yeh sab...shehar ke high society walon ke beech bahut kam milthe hein..
Dushyanth:Arey, mein tho mazaak kar raha tha, (laughingly), tu ithni emotional kyun horahi hein(she hung her head, embarrased; Dushyanth continued). Achcha hum yahan thak tho pahunch gaye, lekin aage kaise chalenge??
Nirja:(remained thoughtful for a second) Dekhthe hein..(and she looked around to find a village girl of almost her age actively bargaining with the bangle seller, holding a dozen of bangles; Nirja slowly approached her)
Nirja(hesitantly):Ex..cuse Me..
(The girl turned around and looked at her suspiciously)
Nirja:Woh..Motaba ke haweli...
The girl:Ji aap kaun??
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Superb Plz continue it is really very nice some thing different
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Posted: 13 years ago
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AtlantašŸ¤—thanks for starting a new one and this looks so interesting.please continue.loved it😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yeah bhi koi puchne ki baat hai,arre yaar continue as we all know u write really well,waiting for the next chappi
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank u so much for starting another nice story, pls continue...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Alanta...you started a new one...
its very interesting yaar...ofcourse you have to continue this...
waiting for next update...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Alanta.šŸ¤—.Me so happy shappy...yeah...I like this one..seems intriguing..So Nirja and Dushy...😃

Pls pls do continue..I am waitingšŸ¤—

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Posted: 13 years ago
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great start.plz do continue.loved d chappi
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful start Alanta :).
Nicely written but need to read more to know what's going on :)
Am so curious to know aage ka kya hoga, jaldi se update kar :D
P.s mera Like button is not working but i Liked it :P
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Smitha, Mini, Sauris, Kavi, Ramya,Piu, Raunika, Rim..
Thanks a lot for the support, will try to post the rest part asapšŸ¤—

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