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mrs.hughjackman

@mrs.hughjackman

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

hi alanta lovely chap as usual. commenting for the 1st time. loved ur SS and DS😉.

Very sweet and a different concept. but if they r childhood sweethearts, why did he go away for 3 years??

Anyway waiting eagerly for the next chappy.

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chweetu

@chweetu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

wow..alanta..that was a brilliant update..👏👏very endearing connection between..kesu n gullu..😃😃..woh bachpan ke dosth the..n middle mein..woh chali gayi..😳😳..ab lautke ayi na..😃good going alanta..but I'm wondering about vassy;s connection in this..😳😳waiting for d next update..😳

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Sree

@Katyayani_devi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

few days away frm forum bahut hojatha hai. new one already started when did this happened, nice chaps sofar interesting updt soon 😊

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

If Silence could ever speak part 3

[She reached her room and shut the doors with her accelerating breath..and slowly regained herself while laying on her bed with the chunar he gifted, she slowly went on adoring it with the same passion which she has been caressing for him; while a glimpse of their childhood shined in her eyes]

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(Gulaal was emballishing her doll champa while Kesar arrives there)

Kesar:Kya kar rahi hein tu??

Gulaal(Fondly): Kal meri champa ki shaadi hein na...mein isse saja rahin hun..

Kesar:Arey wah kithni achi chunar hein..Gulaal tu jab meri dulhan banegi na..tab mein tuje bilkul aise hi chunar dunga..

Gulaal(laughingly): Mein??, aur teri dulhan ?? kya bak raha hein tu??

Kesar: haan, kyun nahin ban sakthi?? (confidently)..Vasanthba bhi mujse kahan dha ki bade hone par teri shaadi mujse karvadenge...

Gulaal(teasingly): Arey...tu aur tere Vasanthba..mein tere jaise dabloo se kabhi shaadi nahin karungi...

Kesar(angrily): Tune phir se muje dabloo kaha??

Gulaal: haan dabloo tho tu hein hi...dabloo dabloo dabloo(and she ran away)

Kesar(irritated): Gulaal aaj mein tuje nahin chodunga(went chasing her)

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[While here the same sequences were flashing through Kesar's mind, who was in his room, with an admiring smile on his face, suddenly he was reminded of something and enthusiastically browsed his cell phone until the name ' Vasanthba' appeared on the screen]

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(Someone continuously knocked at her door, which broke her trance, and she woke up hastily..the knock was getting impatient with each passing second, while her heart shivered a bit thinking, what if it is him...how would be his response,...what should she tell him...she stepped towards the door and hesitantly opened it and to her greatest relief it was Rewa..and took a sigh but something was there with Rewa which bothered her even more)

Rewa:(with a prettented attitude) chal, tuje neeche bula rahi hein..(and walked away, while Gulaal too followed her with confused steps)

[At the down stairs she heard some familiar voice]

The Voice: Arey, kithne saal hogayi mere dosth..ab jaane se pehle zara gale tho mil jaa...

Motaba(enthusiastically):Arey kyun nahi mere yaar

(She was amazed as she found that he was none other than Laljiba..and to her great surprise, there was Dushyanth who accompanied him..but at the very next moment the cheerfulness on her faded, and became nervous...while Dushyanth found Gulaal at the stairs, and smiled widely at her; but Gulaal could only put out a faint smile in response)

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MR21

@MR21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

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Alanta...loved the FB they both have of their childhood memories😳

Gulaal calling kesar as dabloo🤣...yeh kya bachpan se hi shaadi rap karraha hai😆..gulaal saying no...well this response is expected from gulaal...even vasant promised kesar to do his marriage with gulaal...so can we say vasant is not a KMH here...or we have some twists...

kesar calling vasant...so to do marraige with gulaal...kesar does not have any patience to make her his dulhan😉

Yeh kya..laalji baa is here...does she know him or does she just used his name to come here...if no..then what will be MBs reaction to her lie...if yes..then why is she confused n nervous seeing dushy with laalji baa...

Okay..I asked so many questions...need answers from you...so do update soon...eagerly waiting...

Me going to read the dabloo bit again n again🤣

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: manzilmukul
Alanta🤗..Now this is getting very very interesting...
I am eager to know the real reason for this Gulaal-nirja secret😲..OMG and KG were bechpan se coochie cooing...😉
Very beautifully written update.👏.par itna chotu kyun...
I am eagerly waiting for the further unfolding of events😍

Thanks a lot dear..🤗and am so glad that u liked it😳 coochie cooing😆..loved the phrase..updated yaar...but its a short one

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: MR21
Alanta...this is getting very interesting now...
they r childhood friends...n they both r very much in love with each other...this is a very good thing...
but why did she did not reveal her real identity to anyone...is there any reason behind it...
waiting for the next one...update soon...

Thanks a lot dear...yes u r right..updated

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: enchanted23

Hey Alanta, Thanks for the lovely update. So he has figured out who she is w/o her uttering a word..typical Kesar'.

I was intrigued as to how she went to meet him alone so late in such a lonely place and then I read the entire update'she's known him from childhood and implicitly trusts him'They have shared happy childhood together that developed into something more, but they were not together to share their feelings na''

And then returning after all these years to find out that passion,desire,longing more intense and reciprocated from both sides'ah! This is getting really intense'

I think there is a reason behind not revealing her identity even though she clearly has lot more than friendship in her mind and I reckon this has to do something with family'anyways will eagrly wait for the next update'😍

Thanks for the lovel chappi🤗, Alanta looking forward to next'

hi Aditi🤗, thanks a lot dear for ur lovely comments and am so glad that u liked it..new short chapter is up...

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: prachurya
Hi Atlanta! Hav not got the tym to comment but hav read both the chappies. I loved how Nirja teased Kesar, dat is something we did not get to see in the serial. Now a big twist Nirja turning out to b Kesar's Lady love Gulaal! Very intriguing concept. Awaiting the next chappie

Prachu..happy to see ur comments..and glad that u liked it..updated😊

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minizz

@minizz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#70

Atlanta,Loved it so much but what is this itna chota😭loved the champa and chunar FB.so cute Kesar has been wanting to make her his bride since then😳and loved Gulaal calling him Dabloo😆

but why is she feeling so nervous around Dushyant? hmmm...kya hai mystery

next time expecting a biggg update and very soon😊

enjoyed it a lot.