Story:Gulsar_If silence could ever speak linkspg1 - Page 17

Originally posted by: minizz

Alanta🤗

aiyyo,kazhinyu poyi😭loved it so much.The ending was perfect.Vasant's dialogues were brilliant.I could imagine Rahil saying them.loved it.the whole exchange between Kesar and Vasant was so emotional.nicely done.and the final scene between Kesar and Gulaal was really good.I really wanted the scene to go on forever.It was lovely.Thank you so much for such a wonderful story,Alanta.

Hope you will come up with a new one soon cause I will always be around to read and comment😃

Originally posted by: kiran_trudecent

loved loved loved the ending alanta dear 🤗 it was superb 😃 finally gulaal n kesar r together n vasant himself made kesar understand this, how sweet 😳 shukar kesar ko samajh aya that us k janay se, three lives were being destroyed, now as he is back, everyone can be at peace n specially gulaal, the affect of kesar leaving like that was very clear on her na, but now she could also live her life peacefully, the last part brought tears of happiness in my eyes yaar, too good 😃 vl miss ur updates yaar hey come soon again with one more story, vl be waiting for it 😃

Alanta.🤗.The last chapter was just superb.😳...I lubbed the confrontation between Kesar and Vasant..bang on.👏.Just lubbed the story and the marvellous emotions so brilliantly potrayed by you⭐️

And it just ended yaar..I feel bad...😭

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

Alanta.🤗.The last chapter was just superb.😳...I lubbed the confrontation between Kesar and Vasant..bang on.👏.Just lubbed the story and the marvellous emotions so brilliantly potrayed by you⭐️

And it just ended yaar..I feel bad...😭

Originally posted by: Angle_

Realy alanta extremly sory for cmntng too late😳,bt it was awesm yar,abi readng finish kia yar...to kab aa rahi ho nxt story lay k?😉,i'll w8 yar