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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: sauris
Yeah bhi koi puchne ki baat hai,arre yaar continue as we all know u write really well,waiting for the next chappi

Thank u so much sauris. updated.

Originally posted by: kavi.bidaai

Thank u so much for starting another nice story, pls continue...

Thank u kavi..updated.

Originally posted by: MR21
Alanta...you started a new one...
its very interesting yaar...ofcourse you have to continue this...
waiting for next update...

Remya, thanks dear..updated

Originally posted by: manzilmukul
Alanta.🤗.Me so happy shappy...yeah...I like this one..seems intriguing..So Nirja and Dushy...😃
Pls pls do continue..I am waiting🤗

Hey piu, thanks dear🤗..nirja and dushy..I dont know😉😆..updated

Originally posted by: rsk16
great start.plz do continue.loved d chappi

Thank u raunika..glad that u liked it updated

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minizz

@minizz

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Atlanta,finished reading and it's wonderful.something new and different.loved Kesar's entry and Gulaal ko dekhte hi hosh kho baitha.that little joke about Kesar being a girl's name was a nice touch.Rewa is cute and the anklet incident was so Gulaal.enjoyed it. Kesar being slightly rude and then feeling sorry instantly-loved it.the last dosti scene was really nice and I enjoyed the way he said the same mean dialogue but in a lighter tone. so does Gulaal know him cause she says zara bhi nahi badla.hmmm...intriguing.

I loved reading it.please do continue😊

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sauris

@sauris

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Alanta too good yaar,this chappi was really well written,par kya nirja kesar ko phele se jaanti hai?,intezaar rahega next update kaa

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MR21

@MR21

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Alanta...very nice update...

so she came for some research na...but looks like she already know abt them...if yes then why is she hiding her identity...good that dushy left...woh hotha toh tension kuch zyaada hotha na...

so gulaal n reva r now friends n kesar ka entry too good yaar..he is a goner just looking at her...loved the way he has no grip on him to restrict his thoughts abt her...

paayal kesar se pahnaaya..woh bhi ek leg mein...n usse hurt bhi kiya...sach mein gussa na naakh par hi hotha hai iska...

ohh..just loved the last part so much...friendship bhi hogaya na...kya hua agar woh haath nahi milaaya toh...

Ab toh lagtha hai ki nirja know them n why did she come here n why is she not revealing her identity to them...

See there r many questions to be answered...so update soon..me eagerly waiting for the next one...

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alanta

@alanta

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: rimjhim1
Beautiful start Alanta :).
Nicely written but need to read more to know what's going on :)

Am so curious to know aage ka kya hoga, jaldi se update kar :D

P.s mera Like button is not working but i Liked it :P

Thank u so much rim, updated and hope it helps..😊

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alanta

@alanta

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: arti07
yey we have a new ss or ff i loved ur style of writing so needless to say i will be looking forward for ur daily update and since the story is set in talsagra its gonna be fantastic and i loved how u started ur ff with lots of twist and turn and here kesar is angry with his family and vasant is alive oh poor us and dushy and nirja are together wuite interesting and whose that bangle girl see me asking lots of question me eagerly waiting for this story to unfold

and congrats for this new story 😳

Arti thank u so much dear...for ur lovely comments and also glad that u liked it...updated😊

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alanta

@alanta

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: enchanted23

Hey alanta, nice start really intriguing, Dushy and Nirja together looking for Haveli clicking pics and Kesar away from home for last three years wow lots of twist already pls continue it's very interesting looking forward to the update...😊.

You are Aditi right.. I am happy to see u here and glad that u liked it...Thank u so much updated..

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alanta

@alanta

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Kesar04
OMGG! Congooo lady with the Story thingy ! Reserved! Nott

youve wrote another Gulsar thingy

^^because you love my GIF language.

Wow i cannot believe how amazing you are for a 3rd timer. You have wrote stuff that are a much higher standard than 3rd timer. You so deserved this Gulsar STORY thingy. finally.

^^I love that one so much. its so soft and so so gracefully made. It all goes perfectly together. really really well done >>i actually don't why so don't ask😆

Ooh i canot wait for more from you in this Story. keep it up!

^^once again, i don't know why. hey atleast my comment could stand out a little and be BEDAZZLED towards ya Alanta ;P

Thank u so much Kesar...glad that u liked it..updated😛

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alanta

@alanta

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: kiran_trudecent
wow, lovely alanta 🤗 i really liked it, jaldi se continue kar, i was waiting for u to come back 😃 shukar Allah ka u r also here again 😃 now me waiting for next update 😊

Hey Kiran 🤗 Thank u so much dear glad that u liked it..updated