Story:Gulsar_If silence could ever speak linkspg1 - Page 4

Originally posted by: prachurya

I am glad that u r back wid another story! By all means- u must continue! Its a very intriguing start- Nirja wid Dushy😕

Originally posted by: minizz

Atlanta,finished reading and it's wonderful.something new and different.loved Kesar's entry and Gulaal ko dekhte hi hosh kho baitha.that little joke about Kesar being a girl's name was a nice touch.Rewa is cute and the anklet incident was so Gulaal.enjoyed it. Kesar being slightly rude and then feeling sorry instantly-loved it.the last dosti scene was really nice and I enjoyed the way he said the same mean dialogue but in a lighter tone. so does Gulaal know him cause she says zara bhi nahi badla.hmmm...intriguing.

I loved reading it.please do continue😊

Originally posted by: sauris

Alanta too good yaar,this chappi was really well written,par kya nirja kesar ko phele se jaanti hai?,intezaar rahega next update kaa

Originally posted by: MR21

Alanta...very nice update...

so she came for some research na...but looks like she already know abt them...if yes then why is she hiding her identity...good that dushy left...woh hotha toh tension kuch zyaada hotha na...

so gulaal n reva r now friends n kesar ka entry too good yaar..he is a goner just looking at her...loved the way he has no grip on him to restrict his thoughts abt her...

paayal kesar se pahnaaya..woh bhi ek leg mein...n usse hurt bhi kiya...sach mein gussa na naakh par hi hotha hai iska...

ohh..just loved the last part so much...friendship bhi hogaya na...kya hua agar woh haath nahi milaaya toh...

Ab toh lagtha hai ki nirja know them n why did she come here n why is she not revealing her identity to them...

See there r many questions to be answered...so update soon..me eagerly waiting for the next one...

Originally posted by: alanta

Thank u so much mini for liking and the superfast comments as always..it means a lot..and Kesar dumbfounded on seeing her..there is a reason behind it, will reveal it in the next update...and who is this Gulaal?? I dont know...

Originally posted by: alanta

Thanku so much Remya..yes u are right...there is a reason behind it and also Kesar is confused seeing her..all these will be revealed in the next update ..yeh Gulaal kaun hein yaar muje nahin patha..glad that u liked it..will update soon...😳

Hey Alanta, Yes I am Aditi, I really loved the start and was intrigued from the word go…and you have enhanced that intriguing start with this update….

Nirja seems like someone who returning rather than visiting the place..…interesting….I also liked the way she strikes friendship with Reva as if she has known her all along…It seems that she will be staying in the haveli for a while…Kesar and Reva both seems to recognise something about her that's connected to them ……I can't wait for her past to unfold….

And that payal scence was so cute,Nirja seems like gal who knows how to get what she wants…even from someone who's considered akdu and gussail…

I am already hooked Alanta, and will be hovering over this thread..…..so please update soon….Thanks