Wings of imagination(open up and behold me a poem pg 28)

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srija

@-srija-

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Posted: 13 years ago

Guys its a thread of poems related 2 emotions,love nd feelings nd imagination.hope u all like my attempt.
Thanks 2 piyali 4 inspiration nd khusi 4 the title.
Here goes my 1st poem.

U R MY SOULMATE

I can easily trip n fall,coz i know u'd hold me
I know m a special girl as u've always told me.

I can relax in ur arms,coz u're everything 2 me
U always melt me wid ur charms,m hypnotised as u can see.

I can fight u widout a reason coz i know u wldn't mind me.
i can sneak n can hide,coz i know u'd find me.

I can fight wid world 4 u coz ur love has wind me.
I would never run away coz ur love wil always bind me.

Dont try 2 stay away,dnt try 2 shove me,leave everything upto fate.
U r the sole reason of my life,u r my soulmate.

Whenever m in ur arms,the world vanishes around me.
It feels so heavenly as if my angel found me.

Whenever i hear ur voice,music fills the surrounding air.
It feels as if any other sound is nt so magical 2 hear.

Whenever i feel ur gaze,i feel so special.
It feels as if u r reading my soul nd making a call.

Whenever i hear u love me the most n remember me 24/7.
I feel myself luckiest gal n find myself in 7th heaven.

So dnt try 2 stay away,dnt try 2 shove me,leave evrything upto fate.
U r the sole reason of my life,u r my soulmate.

Hey piyali i did it thanks 2 ur inspiration.
Guys how is it.i know m nt a gud poet bt i tried.do tel me if u want me 2 continue.
Hospital bed ne mujhe thodi poetry vi shikadi.thank u guys 4 ur wel wishes dat i survived n m recovering fast.
With love
srija.

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srija

@-srija-

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Posted: 13 years ago

U r my soulmate-above.
over the centuries
till the world ends
straight from the heart
open up and behold me
as i lay dying

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piyali.1228

@piyali.1228

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Posted: 13 years ago

wow... srija

i had told u na u r d best

ur poetry is jst superb

awesum

literally i loved it

it was so touchii that i cant explain u

literally man superb

hatts off

great job

do continue writing lyk that

n pls give me some ideas also so that i can lyk as u did

thanx 4r d pm

N YA PLS TAKE CARE OF URSELF

GET WELL SOON

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Aysha

@matwamango

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Posted: 13 years ago

This is fantastic yaar loved it to the core😃

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668837

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

Lovely! The first line was so sweet!

Thanks for the pm!

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Monkey

@TISA0711

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Posted: 13 years ago

Great poem.i remember sum1 mentioned u as MULTITALENTED.she does has a insight. 👏

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sandeep

@SANDY_ROSE

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Posted: 13 years ago

hey srija dat was awesome all lines r beautiful written wow medicine ne tume poet bna diya hai and writer se sidha direct poet and injection lagne ke thodi dar baad tum singer mat ban jana ha ha ha . its lovely poem cont.soon and take care lvu.

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sonia

@-Sonia-

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Posted: 13 years ago

the poem is superb..

loved it..

very beautiful..

take care!

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cuteteddy

@cuteteddy

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Posted: 13 years ago

u r stupid srija u know there is no need to ask that whether u should continue it or not of course u should . wow so we r having 2 poets now hun. it was beautiful srija. all the lines r so divine . chalo hospital bed at least taught u poetry haha. it was awesome continue soon n thanks for the pm .
take care dear. btw i just forgot to ask who has typed it u or shirish ?