as i lay dying

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srija

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Posted: 13 years ago

Wel i missed today's episode bt whatever other viewers explained abt todays epi i read it nd felt sad so thought of writing sth.

AS I LAY DYING

As i lay dying taking my last breath
the one i remembered war u
ur voice passed tru my sense
the only 1 i saw was u.
the feeling of ur touch,the treasure of ur love
are stored deep inside my dying heart.

As i lay dying bearing the searing pain
the one i missed was u.
The pain of death i can bear
bt how can i bear loosing you.
The fragrance of ur breath,the treasure of ur love
are stored deep inside my dying heart.

As i lay dying counting my heartbeat.
The one i wanted to see was u.
Ur trust,ur call i cld feel it
the only one 4 me was u.
The moment we spent together,the moment of our love
are stored deep inside my dying heart.

As i lay dying on my death bed
the only one i cried 4 was u
i know i'll kill u wid me
i know u'll die again.
4give me my love n remember
ur kiss,ur touch,ur voice,ur love
are stored deep inside my dying heart.

m sad pkyek is ending.going 2 miss Abhiya a lot.

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shivanirajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

wow srija that was a very emotional poem
you really made me cry 😭😭
i was trying so hard to stop my tears but i couldn't not anymore
pkyek is my life
and today when i saw pia dying i somehow managed to stay calm
but after reading your poem i can't stop myself i m not that strong😭😭😭😭
i m so depressed i cant even concentrate on my studies and my story
i hope you will continue writing and will not leave ur ff even after show ends

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srija

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Posted: 13 years ago

@shivani.
I missed the show bt reading ayesha's post i was really sad.since i just returned frm hospital i cldnt watch it.bt hearing that the show is ending i feel like crying.m depressed yar.

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shafaq

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Posted: 13 years ago

I m in tears nw... U wrote so well dii... M gonna miss abhiya nd pkyek alot bt still sumwhr in my heart i still want sum1 to say pkyek is nt ending

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srija

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shafaq_abhiya
I m in tears nw... U wrote so well dii... M gonna miss abhiya nd pkyek alot bt still sumwhr in my heart i still want sum1 to say pkyek is nt ending

thanks dear.i also dnt want pkyek 2 end.its so frustrating

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vijayata123

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Posted: 13 years ago

Aww,this poem is heart touching..M so gonna miss ABHIYA then PKYEK

n I will miss all of u guys..Moreover,ppl from this forums n everything...But it's our own life we have to live it..The crews n casts who plays in this serial i don't think dey reli care abt it..N we viewer care more abt it..If vivi&SUKU n others reli cared he would have lots n lots of interview of abhiya visu..WE WANT A VISU INTERVIEW BEFORE IT ENDS..FOR UR ATLEAST..IF DEY WANTED TO END THE SERIAL THEN WE WANT A INTERVIEW..IF DEY DONT GIVE US ANY INTERVIEW OF VISU OR SCENES BEFORE IT ENDS THEN TRUST ME M GONNA KILL EKTA..M SERIOULY GONNA COME TO INDIA ANY HOW N KILL HER N MAKE A INTERVIEW OF VISU BY KIDDNAPPING DEM SO THERE WILL BE NO bodyguard..(my name starts wid V n last name starts wid D so m not gonna write lady VD it might mean me2 lol)

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srija

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Posted: 13 years ago

@vijata.

Itna vi violent mat hona.bechari ekta marjayegi.ya m really depressed too.I DONT WANT PKYEK TO END N I DONT WANT THIS FORUM TO END.I m going 2 miss everyone in this forum yar.seriously lets protest.