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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jnawaz


party mein mujhe nahin bulaoge? 😭...vaise...i may have reason to celebrate very soon!! 😉 ill keep you all posted...and ha ha...this past weekend i was talking to one of my friends about something Dad said...she's a very close friend who knows everything...and she's like "dad"...you guys are talking 😆 i was like yes...we're talking...😳

JAZ

Of course you are invited 😃...we can't have a party without the person who is the reason for the party...
and another reason to party ??? ohhh...what is it ??
hahaha 😆...i bet it felt gud for things to fall back into place 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
First off congos for receiving your lappy back
Secondly I updated my part 2 comment .. I unres'd on page 44 i think ..
Thirdly this teaser has me ROFLing .. oof course its from the past but I am looking fwd to all the moments where MSK makes himself look like a fool because he'd be too busy niharofy-ing Geet 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice ff
add me in ur pm list
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mk.Gh

Ok knowing you I won't build castles in the clouds as of yet. You never know when you'll give us a crash landing without a warning by making Maan or Geet either end up with someone else or dead 😆 .. lol...true ture..mere twists to mashoor hai!! 😉
BUT it goes without saying that this has had a fabulous start.. I'm falling in love with it already .. good!! and thank you!! 😳
I love how the guys who think they're so tough and all and think they'd never fall in love -- fall in love when they least expect it. And I guess that's what's happening with Maan here. You keep going back to the present -- which at this moment is pretty confusing because you haven't given much out yet ... everything is still a mystery -- so we know that whatever situation you're describing in the past may not be anywhere near to what the present has in store for us.. I'm scared to know how Maaneet are in the present.. are they married .. are they divorced.. did they get married .. he he...to save you some serious brain cells...ill tell you one thing...NOTHING more about the present will be revealed until much later...you're pretty much going to get this until i get the whole back story out...as for Maneet's union or lack there of...it shall be revealed in a few updates...😉
But tthe last line from the present where he's thankful that it came true .. hmmm .. won't guess too much on that.. it could mean anything at this point .. again...true!! 😉 you just never know 😆
As for the past .. love the way Maan is being so desperate to meet that one girl .. who .. frankly he hasn't even seen as a girl yet 😆 .. seedha aankhon ko dekh ke deewana hogaya .. sahi jaraha hai 😆 .. but I love it .. the whole being attracted and falling in love .. right after the first encounter .. and thats saying a lot considering after the first encounter maan didnt know if the person he fell in love with...the person whose eyes intoxicated him...was a girl or boy!!! 🤣
First I thought ye lo aik aur mauka gaya .. but thanx to Teji Veerji for dragging him to the dance floor which led to their second encounter! 😳 Haha Geet seems to be the bubbly, energetic, fun .. basically the opposite of Maan 😆 .. I'd love to see how they fall in love -- if they ever do 😛 .. abhi tau sirf aik mulakaat hui hai .. with their real faces LOL .. but I like what's happened so far .. she is...she is totally bubbly...jaan of the family and all...know what i mean...just like she is on the show now..for the most part...when Nandu isnt hogging the lime light and pretending to be malkin of the house...ok...that was a tangent! 😆 as for their love story...its very...different...from their usual love stories...at least the ones i have for them 😉
Aww I love the 'beautiful' part .. clearly if you find a girl just "hot" then it isn't the kind of attraction that may turn into love one day .. but considering he finds her beautiful already .. awww 😳 and Geet blushing.. DOUBLE AWW 😆 i think that one words makes a world of difference...beautiful is so much more endearing...while hot is more of a lust related term...i'd be beautiful over hot any day..just saying...though i want my Maan to be both handsome and HAWT!!! 😳
Well Jaz so far so good.. no shocks or jhatkes .. just the fact that the present is a mystery and I am scared to know what the future holds in store .. because you can take this story anywhere .. true...but enjoy it one update at a time...dont over analyze and think too far ahead 😃
We've only gotten to know so much about the past .. they've only met twice .. and so far only Maan has been shown in the present .. and that too in a very peculiar mood .. hmmm .. can't wait to see what's next though .. certainly intriguing! Loved everything about the past though.. too hilarious! 😛 there is a reason for his mood...it will all change and the present will get more depth once you see their relationship so far...through his eyes 😳
Sorry for the late replies .. I'm on a commenting spree .. but darn IF for giving SPAM comments when I'm not spamming..pata nahin kaunsi dushmani paa rakhi hai 😡 i hate that...you have to wait like 10seconds or something...or else it gives that nonsense warning...makes me so mad!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

Of course you are invited 😃...we can't have a party without the person who is the reason for the party...

and another reason to party ??? ohhh...what is it ??
hahaha 😆...i bet it felt gud for things to fall back into place 😛


i think things officially went back to normal today because we just complained about mom to each other...just like old times!!! 😆 though mom was not a happy camper!! 🤣

JAZ

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Posted: 13 years ago
I am so happy to have U back again along with your updatesjumping in joy n my mom doubts if I got a spring under me😆but still I am happy that U got your pc back again but then once gain Eid is coming meaning u missing again😭 Khair will wait for it
bring it on waiting for teh update
As for teaser mujhe kuch samjh nahi aya😃 truly so that makes me more curious and hungry for the update😳 so U better give it so early as possible
Thanks for the pm
Take care
God bless U

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: muskaan_cute19

I am so happy to have U back again along with your updatesjumping in joy n my mom doubts if I got a spring under me😆but still I am happy that U got your pc back again but then once gain Eid is coming meaning u missing again😭 Khair will wait for it
bring it on waiting for teh update
As for teaser mujhe kuch samjh nahi aya😃 truly so that makes me more curious and hungry for the update😳 so U better give it so early as possible
Thanks for the pm
Take care
God bless U


lol...you are right actually...i didnt even see that...Eid is coming up...first weekend of november if im correct...good catch!! he he

JAZ

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey guys!! I'm back!! computer has been fixed and my precious files have been returned to me!! i swear...Bhaia is a magician w/ computers!! 😉 any way...after much delay...here is the next installment of this story 😃

Part 3

Present

Taking another swig of the drink he held in his hand Maan reflected back on the two most important things in his life – one, his family and two, his business. His family meant the world to him because without them what did he have, who did he have? They showed him how to love, they made him laugh. They are the ones that made his life the best life he could have asked for. Then there was his business, a business that his father had started but both him and his brother had made successful. Together they had put their blood, sweat and tears into making Khurana Constructions the reigning empire that it was today. For his family he'd do anything and for his business he'd do anything, even if his heat was in a completely different place.

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Past

Maan ended up staying abroad due to his business trip for about a month and a half. He hated every minute of it – he couldn't concentrate, his mind kept going to Geet. It annoyed him to no ends. No girl had ever had this kind of affect on him – no one had ever made it hard for him to eat, sleep or think. He had to take care of this 'situation' as soon as possible. Or else his business, health and most importantly, his sanity would all be destroyed before he knew it. He still couldn't wrap his head around how all of this was happening because he had only really seen Geet once, at the wedding. Apparently that was all it took for her to seep into his mind, heart and soul.

Maan had kept in touch with his family. He talked to his Pammi Bhabi on a daily basis because Teji was usually at the office when he called. Maan really liked her, she was a great person inside and out; he finally understood why his confirmed-bachelor brother had fallen head over heels in love with her. They talked about everything and anything, except for Geet that was – Maan just couldn't bring himself to ask his Bhabi about her younger sister. However, every once in a while when he did talk to Teji he would casually ask about her. It was through this that he found out about Geet coming by the house every now and then to visit with Pammi and what not. All Maan could think about was the fact that he wasn't there!

After his business deals and everything else was fixed he was looking forward to come home. He was happy, happier than he'd been in a long time. The day he booked his return flight he was ecstatic…actually, he was absolutely GIDDY!!

The day that Maan finally came home was not a good day in the least. The airport had been horrible, traffic and what not. When he got home no one was there – Teji Veerji was at the office, Pammi Bhabi and Biji were both out of the house; the only person there was their butler Nakul. Maan decided to go up to his room to rest. About an hour later he had heard Biji and Pammi Bhabi return but he was so tired, that he didn't even bother getting up. He figured he would just meet them once he was sure he would be able to stay awake for the conversations.

When Maan finally woke up it was almost six in the evening, Teji Veerji would be home any minute. He had just gotten out of the shower refreshed and was getting dressed when he heard a distinct voice, a voice that was calling someone 'Didi'. Maan had to see if he had really heard her voice or if his mind was playing tricks on him. He just grabbed a white shirt that was lying on his bed, yanked it over his shoulders and didn't even bother to button it. He walked out of his room and looked down to living room area but didn't see anything. Maan was disappointed because it looked like his mind was actually playing tricks on him. He was about to turn around and go inside when he heard her call again. He looked in the direction that the sound was coming from and that's when he saw Geet…there she was in the flesh, standing in his house looking as cute as ever, yelling at the top of her lungs.

Maan began descending the stairs and buttoning his shirt, but all the while he kept his eyes on Geet – he was afraid that if he looked away for a second she would vanish. He came to a stop at the bottom of the stairs. He saw Geet turn in his direction and give him a beautiful and warming smile; what he didn't see was a door open behind him. The next thing he knew she began running toward him with her arms out stretched.

The only thought in Maan's mind was "Oh my God! She is going to hug me! She is coming to me!"

Maan stood with is arms out stretched ready to engulf her with his arms. There she was, coming closer…closer…closer…past him…………wait, past him? Maan turned to see a grinning Geet run into the arms of her sister, Pammi, who had just come out of the bathroom. Oh, how he wanted to be his Bhabi at that moment – holding Geet in his arms.

"Didi, congratulations!" Geet yelled. "Where is my Jiju?"

"Thanks my love," Pammi said as she took Geet into another hug. "…and your Jiju is still at work."

Geet looked shocked. "What…work…why? He shouldn't leave you in this condition."

That is when Maan finally spoke up, announcing his presence to both women. "What condition? Bhabi, are you ok?"

"Maan, you're awake!" Pammi said, with a smile on her face. "Biji and I have been waiting for you to get up. Have you me my sister, Geet?" she asked turning back to Geet.

"Oh yes, at the wedding. But Bhabi, are you ok?" Maan asked again. He didn't even realize that he was ignoring Geet, but at this point he was worried about his Bhabi. What condition was her sister talking about?

Maan caught a slight blush creep onto his Bhabi's face, while Geet stood next to her beaming.

"Oh come on Didi, don't be shy," she said, "…its normal." Geet waited for a few more seconds for Pammi to speak, but when she didn't, Geet continued. "Ok, she's not going to tell you because she is dying of embarrassment…but…congrats Maan!"

Maan watched as Geet stuck out her hand in an attempt to shake his. Maan confusingly advanced his own hand, still not fully able to understand what was going on.

"Umm, thanks I guess. But, for what?" he asked.

"You, Mr. Maan Singh Khurana, are going to be a Chacha!" Geet announced.

For a second Maan was confused, "A Cha…" but then it finally dawned on him, "Oh my God! Congratulations Bhabi!" Maan gave his Bhabi a quick hug, and by this point he too was beaming. "Just let that brother of mine come home, then I'll see him."

Pammi put a hand on Maan suddenly, "Actually, he doesn't know yet. I just found out myself. I haven't had a chance to tell him."

"Oh, I understand," Maan said. "That's fine, I'll get him later," he promised.

Maan had just turned to Geet so he could say a few words to her when she spoke up.

"Ok Didi, I have to go," she said as she hugged her sister again.

Before Maan could protest, Pammi did.

"Already?" she asked, "I mean, you just got here – at least have something to drink."

"You know I don't want to leave but I have to. I have an evening class, which I am already late for," Geet said as she glanced at her watch. "Ok Didi, bye…love you!" With one more hug Geet was off, but not before she yelled "Bye Maan, nice to see you again!" over her shoulder.

She was gone as fast as she had come. Maan wanted to kick himself, that was meeting #3 – another useless meeting. Of course he was happy for his Veerji and Bhabi, he was excited to become an uncle; but he couldn't get two words in with her.

Maan would never forget the reaction that Teji Veerji had when he found out that he was going to be a father – the shock, wonderment and happiness was all etched on Teji's face.

The next few months passed in a blur. Maan was swamped with work for their new projects. He thought about Geet every day, all the time – he couldn't help it. He caught glimpses of her in the house every once in a while; none were long enough to satisfy his hunger for her. He felt that even if he glared at her all day and all night, it still wouldn't be enough.

Then one day, it was like God answered his prayers. Maan had come home from a busy day at work. He was walking in with Teji Veerji when he heard laughter; not just any laughter but the laughter – the one that was music to his ears. As he walked further into the house, he saw Geet – sitting on the living room sofa, laughing her heart out with Pammi Bhabi. It was one of the best sights he had ever seen. Her hair was flying around her due to the fan, and her eyes were mirroring the sheer joy she was feeling. Maan just kept watching her…and watching her…and watching her…and………BAM! He had literally walked into a wall. He had been so busy gawking at Geet that he hadn't been watching where he as going.

As soon as he had collided with the wall all eyes flew onto him, even Geet's. Maan had never felt like a bigger idiot in his life. Of all the times for something like this to happen, it had to happen in front of Geet. He didn't know what to do or say, so he just retreated upstairs to his room. As he climbed the stairs he could hear Geet burst out into a fit of laughter as Pammi Bhabi tried to get her to be quite – although failed to control even her own laughter.

Later that evening, after discovering a big red bump on his forehead, Maan had found the courage to come back down to face his Veerji and Bhabi. He sat at the dinner table sighing in relief because Geet was gone; he didn't want her to see the remnants of his idiotic goof up. Biji, Teji Veerji and Pammi Bhabi were already at the table when he arrived. He saw movement coming from the kitchens direction. When he lifted his head to see what, or who, it was, he nearly fell out of his chair – it was Geet. Maan was shocked to see that she was still there – he was completely dumb founded. What was he supposed to do now?

Geet began serving everyone food. When she got to Maan she tried very hard not to laugh, everyone tried. In the end, they couldn't hold it in any longer; Geet was the first to laugh, but everyone joined in soon after. Geet was still standing next to Maan – he couldn't help but watch her because he was mesmerized by her.

Maan was finally broken out of his spell when Teji spoke to him.

"Maan, what happened to you today?" he asked.

"What?" Maan asked. "Nothing happened. I'm fine."

"Oh yeah, because you just walk into walls all the time!" Teji teased as he and Geet high fived each other; causing everyone to fall into a fit of laughter again

"What? No!" Maan yelled in retaliation, "That was…that…Oh, shut up!"

"You guys don't tease him," Pammi said, in defense of her devar. "Maan I hope that you didn't get hurt too badly. That bump looks really bad."

Pammi smoothed a gentle touch over his bump and winced herself.

"No, I'm fine. Really, it's nothing," he said.

The family went back to eating and making small talk. It wasn't until about 10 minutes that Teji finally spoke up.

"Oh Maan, I forgot to tell you…Geet will be staying with us through Pammi's delivery."

This one statement caused Maan to nearly choke on his food. Great, just great – add inability to eat to his inability to walk!

"Staying here…with us…but…" Maan couldn't finish his sentence because he wasn't even complete sure what he was trying to say. God! This girl was going to be the doom of him.

"Well, Geet's exams are over," Pammi said. "I can't seem to do too much work myself now days – I either get too tired or too nauseous. Geet being here will help me out a lot. I hope you don't mind," she added.

"Oh no, of course not Bhabi," Maan said. "If it helps you, then gladly."

Mind, no way. Why would he mind? Geet living here means he gets to see her all the time, where ever he wants. He would go to be happy every night happy knowing that she was in the same house as he was and that she would be there in the morning when he woke up too. It was a great feeling, odd but great.

Although, Maan was happy that Geet would be around more, he was also worried because Geet would be around more. Sure, she would be helping out Pammi Bhabi, but it also gave her the potential to see more of his stupid antics. For some reason when Geet was around Maan lost all grace and stability.

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Present

Whenever Maan thought about the wall incident, his hand automatically went up to his forehead – it was a habit. He let out a little laugh. He had been a fool that day, lost in her beauty and innocence. Such a trivial thing brought her so much laughter and joy. Geet had laughed will all her heart that day and that night when she had seen her red bump.

Oh, to hear that laughter again. Anything, Maan would do anything to hear it again. If it meant walking into walls until he bled, he would gladly do it – just to hear her laugh once more. To give his heart and soul the sound that did things to him he never imagined possible. To see the sheer joy on her face again - once more…just once more…Maan would give his life for that laugh…just one more time.




JAZ
ps: Good job to those of you who guessed Maan injured himself while "niharofying" Geet!!! 😆...i have to pick my teasers better...cuz a majority of you guessed correctly 😛
Edited by jnawaz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wonderful update..!!! 😳
hoho..c i guessed it right dat maan might have hurt himself while staring at geet...bechara wall se takra gaya...!!! 😆
ohh Pammi pregnant...loved the way he saw geet's hand on his wen she said he was going to b a chacha...lovely...😳
aww...he was so eager to meet her n din leave a chance to b near her...n upar se she is going to leave in the same house with them...yaayyy ..this is going to b really fun n interesting...eager to c how he will control his imbalanced hormones in front of her.. 😆...pehle hi wall se takra gaya...aab aage kya hoga..??? 😆
ssly lovin it...!!!
wonder wat had transpired in the past that they r separate from each other......😭
but loved this update...
cont soon plz Jazz di...😛



Edited by -bansi- - 13 years ago
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Maan stood with is arms out stretched ready to engulf her with his arms. There she was, coming closer…closer…closer…past him…………wait, past him?...🤣🤣

Maan just kept watching her…and watching her…and watching her…and………BAM! He had literally walked into a wall..🤣🤣

This one statement caused Maan to nearly choke on his food. Great, just great – add inability to eat to his inability to walk! 🤣🤣

maan ko koi bachao...is tarah to usse next time hospital jana pad jayeha...🤣

either for mental illness or for injuring himself...😆🤣

i still cant stop laughing...maan making a fool of himself...

continue soon...


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