FF: Beetein Lamhe Prt 7 pg104 2/25/13

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Mirela

@Myra.nelly

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#411

So the culprit was the wall 😆 Funny scene with geet walking past him,and he actualy stoot with his arms streched, 😆 Uff,love at first sight could make one acting so silly 😃 😆 Liked that he got along with pammi,so she kn help him with geet later 😉 I am surprised that maan didnt make a move all these month,he must b overheels with her or in this time that she is in the house their luv story will blossom 😳 Hmm,his words from the present worries me,what happened that lost her smile and was his part in it,but i know u wont reveal it,just wanted u to know u realy gave me food for thought and that happens when a writer realy does a great job 😉 Thanks a lot jaz,it was a pleasure reading it,now got to run,lecture its starting 😕 See ya' 😉

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Zahra

@-Zahra15-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#412

maan was so funny...inability to eat n walk...lol...lovely update...i woner how maan gonna stay with geet in the same house...haha...continue soon n thnxxx...

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MsMovielover

@MsMovielover

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#413

loved the update...

haha maan walking into the wall was hilarious 🤣

cant wait to find out waht happened in the past..

plz cont soon

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Anu

@anuandavi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#414

Lovely update. Now if Geet is going to stay in KM tab to Maan will make a fool of himself. Then Geet can sing "Didi tera Devar deewana"

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muskaan_cute19

@muskaan_cute19

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#415

lol...you are right actually...i didnt even see that...Eid is coming up...first weekend of november if im correct...good catch!! he he

JAZ

yeah coz u even got missed in iearlier one too na so common sense😆 first week tou nahi bt depend where u reside n wat u follow its like from 6 or 7 u see😉in pak n india most probably n arab coutries here it is like 5 or 6😳

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muskaan_cute19

@muskaan_cute19

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#416

Great part just loved it,was simply amazing.I too fall into fits of laughter when I was reading maans condition that really blew me, he was actually acting so stupid n more of some lunatic, her presence was just causing inability in every act of his.Surely it will be a great deal to read geet around him 24 7 how will he actually manage will it really enchanting or disguise him further...that will be something really thrilling to read already excited 😃
Do continue soon will be waiting eagerly for the next part
Thanks for the pm
Take care
God bless U

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maaneetsangel

@maaneetsangel

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#417

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon...

where is geet ..

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#418

Though part of it seems sad, its so cute to read maan's past. Lol, add inability to eat to his inability to walk! Superb update. Thanks for the pm.

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#419

Hi Jaz...tahnks 4 da pm n fabulous n amusing update! The past n present were welll incorporated! Loved da update! thnaks 2 ur bro as well lol. Nyways sorry 4 late likes n commenst bt IF does nt open @ wrk, its blocked 😭 so can only read da updates @ home n do nt come on IF all da tym, ju thrice of four times a week! So please bear wid me lol! Nyways Maan mesmerised by Geet bt will nt say nything! Maan meets Geet n is happy. Maan cannot stop starimg at her! Maan bumps into geet n hurts himself. Geet staying wid Pammi until her delivery! Maan surprised bt happy. Well written! wonder what happened to Geet in the present! Update soon