My Story...KYPH FF......Updated!!

Hey guys I was just sitting there and well this idea hit me for a new fanfic so I just felt like posting it up. Reply if I shud continue it or not!!

(The Siggy above is not made by me but the next two ones are)

** Kripa's Life

My out take on life isn't that great, I mean think about it, I'm treated like a servent in my own home. I have loads of siblings, yet I take care of the house. I always thought that maybe it was a phase and it would pass by. Soon I realized that nuthing will change I'm treated wrong and no one in the world could change that. I always cried myself to sleep because they didn't love me. I had often heard there conversation, uff this girl, y did she have to be born in this great family, her and her nasty little self. I couldn't take it, I was the reason this house was standing, if i didnt have a 12 hour job and if i didnt clean the house for the other 12 hours of the day, this family would have been a reck. I was thrilled when I got accepted in the Private school far away from home. My family ofcoarse locked me in the attic with no food and no water so I wouldn't escape, but did they honestly thought tat i was stupid, I knew everyway in this house. From trap doors to trap windows, and oday I planed the escape, I was ready for the adventure. At midnight I I gathered all my courage and walked to the trap dorr that conceled the most deadliest stories in town. I swolled hard and walked through the door, my head began spinning and the hot air added on to my misery. The way started steepening, my foot slipped down the rail, and my heart stopped, the feeling of hope became unmistakably stupid, In a sudden moment pain slashed through my body, the feeling of stupidness took over me. I tried hard to move but it was impoosible, I lied there for hours maybe days, but i was sure it wasn't a day because I hadn't hearsd the voices of my family yet. Then all of a sudden life refilled itself in me, The thought of my family struck hatred in my mind which enabled me to move on. I sprang back up (with much deficalty that is). And made my way ahead. My foot banged into a wall, a wall that had doors, this was probably the exit. Wow, my house is big, it seemes like i traveled for days. I pushed open the door to find buetiful sunlight hit my eyes. The sun had never felt this way. It was a new beginging for me, Kripa Sharma.

Please tell me if I should continue

😃

~~~Mahak~~~

wow! i luv it continue soon...

very different and very interesting 😆

omg that sounds so interesting...U Should definatley continue. 😊

Nida

that was just fantastic!!! plz plz plz do continue soon! i am dying to read more!!

MAN THE STORY IS AMAZING!!!!!plzz cont soon

nice!!!!!!!! seem interessing!!!!!!!! wanna know about angad s life

Hey guys thanx for the wonderful comments they are really sweet!!!



The wind blew harshly signaling a big thunderstorm as I walked through the streets of Mumbai. It was a week later, after my escape. The whole week replayed in my mind including each and every feeling I went through. The struggle I went through to get to Mumbai was a lot, I had to go back to my house for money. While my family went in search for me I had snuck in and well I don't think of it as stealing since it was my money my family was living off of, I just took it and ran out. And now I'm standing in Mumbai, a day before skewl starts. I had enough money to rent an apartment and a couple of cloths. But i needed money to survive so i needed a job. On this rainy day when kids my age would be laying on there bed and talking on the phone with there buddies I was standing in a office, shivering and on the verge of crying. I missed my family, they did treat me wrong but still they were my family. Uff how long does this take. Finally I thought as they called my name. Wow this room is beautiful; the customary designs filled with colorful curtains were intriguing. This guy is a creep, he had long brown and red hair( it was actually RED!) But the thing that got me creped out the most was that he hired me by looking at my face. He said that with sum people you can just tell. But I was happy I was going to get 10/hour. I thought about life without my family as I rested my head on the fluffy pillow. In moments I was twirling with my prince charming.

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The icy cold water splashed on my face, refreshing me. Today I was finally going to go to a skewl. Wonder how the kids will be there, hope I'll fit in. The way to skewl from my downcast apartment was about 30 minutes. I wonder how you make friends, since I never went to skewl well I mean I did but it was one of those skewls that had no other kid except you, more like a bad kid's skewl. No wonder the teachers were surprised when I got picked for a full scholarship. Wow, the inside of the skewl is…………… marvelous. Through the entrance and down the corridor was like a palace. The antique walls, and the marbled floor, this place must be expensive, good thing for the scholarship. I walked in to a large room scattered with kids. This must be the lunch room. Second later sharp pains erupted from my head; everything began spinning and gradually started loosing color. The growing screams pierced my ears as I stumbled to get to my feet, a minute later, or even more later my vision started clearing up, I heard a male voice, he was yelling at a distant figure, it was a girl she was wearing high heels with a mini skirt(extra mini in my case)with a very reveling top, her hair laid onto her shoulders. Her long earrings passed down her shoulders (it was longer then her hair). Her earrings seemed to be pulling her down. But then sum thing strange caught my eyes. She had a piercing on her belly button. That's weird, I had never seen sum one have a piercing on there belly button, but I hadn't seen many people in my life, my parents never let me. They said I made the family look bad, My eyes adjusted, enabling me to see the girls face. I looked over to see the back or the guy who was yelling at her…………………..

"Cant you see where ur going. U hit that girl…"

I caught sum of his words, the girl in the mini skirt replied

: Oh Angad calm down, who cares about her, I mean I've never seen her around"

"Oh so u mean to say if u've never seen that person u have a right to push them, Mishty ur impossible."

I finally realized that the guy was standing up for me. I had to say sum thing but wat was I supposed to say. Man I don't want the guys to get in trouble because of me. I mean he is the first person in my life to actually stand up for me.. But like always when ever I was gathering up my courage sum thing had to happen so I couldn't say anything. Three rings exploded throughout the building, and all the students' squirmed out of site. That was the bell, I guess. I looked at the map in utter confusion. This was going to be a long day……….

Hey guys sorry a little late on that, but I have decided to continue on Mondays and Thursdays only. So I hope u guys liked this part. Please comment if u want me to change anything.


~~~Mahak~~~