Dakshna FF(Fan fiction) - Page 33

Originally posted by: lucky.m

@sweet aish

Yaart une tho aaj ka poora din banadiya..😃...and dialogues sweet and cute as usual..lved them...a lot lot and lottt🤗

Aakhir tumne lipstick laga diya😆..I know kaun khush ho jayega😆 aur pillow fight😛( point noted my lord)..aage ki FF mein jaroor dalungi..sachi bhaut daudaliya dono ko..😉..

Awesome and rocking 👏

thanku meri jaan🤗...nd i'm waitin 4 dos sohini ki dhulayi on dis side😆😆😆...jaldi karo

Originally posted by: DakshnaFan

He He Aish aakhir end main bedroom aahi gaya 😳 Dakshu bechare ko kitna pareshan karti hai Naina...😆

yohooo Akhir Lipstick laaga hi di Dakshu ko😆 😆 😆

Superb superb loved it...😳☺️

I really love the way u write the whole scene with the extra comments of urs... totally could imagine it while reading 😍... Enjoyed it thoroughly...

Originally posted by: sweetaish

hey evryone🤗...i'm back again😊 sry aj kal net jamd rehta he henc my replys r dis late😛 chalo wont keep u guys hanging nw.

note : 1st part completed😆😆

Morning rush in PH [aka P-zoo😉]. Daksh is late [again] and Naina is busy elsewhere.
He calls out for her once with some excuse of a missing file, she finds it for him and disappears again before he can say a word, and he's disappointed [bechara😆].

Naina is in the kitchen with ayi, and Daksh pokes his head in. Ayi doesnt notic as she's busy making something and is talkin 2 Naina beech me.
Naina sees KP @ d door nd starts her eye-speak [naina ke naina😆], asking him wat it is that he wants nw. He asks her to come out.
She refuses and gets back to her work [itna kam jo pada hai kitchen me😛]

Her mobile rings from somewer; she smiles,knowing its him but doesnt budge.

A : Naina, beta phone baj raha hai, dhyan kaha he tumhara..[dhyan wahi hai jaha hona chahiye, ayi don wry😉]
Naina finds her phone [his misd call of course] and looks up.
He's stil @ d door, smiling.

A : Chintu? Kya he beta..Naina to keh rehi thi ki tu aj thoda late hai...
He walks in now , asking for a glas of water.
Ayi goes to the fridge and he inches closer to Naina.

N : [softly] ab kya hai daksh..

D : [smiles] Kuch kehna tha Ayi se.

Ayi hears Daksh. "Kya hai chintu?"

N : [stil in hushed tones] To mujhe bahar kyu bulyaya.Kya bahane banate jaa rahe ho daksh...

"Tum kuch bhool rahi ho..." he whispers back.

Naina blushes; Ayi comes back with his water.
D : Ayi, me aj sham ko late aunga..khana bahar se kha ke aunga, mere liye mat lagana.
Naina looks up, wanting to ask him y, he just smiles at her.

A : Theek he ebta. bahot late mat hona lekin, nahi to ye rat bhar wahi front room me baithi rahegi.

He takes her hand; she tries to tug it off, mouthing "Chodo na" he smiles and keeps his hold.

D : Pata hai ayi. Me kehta hu isse ki wait na kare, par ye to meri koi bat manti hi nahi hai...

Ayi smiles, and Naina tugs her hand free giving him an i'll get-you-for-this look.
Ayi turns to the cupboard for something, and Daksh sneaks one in on Naina [naughty dakshu😆...mission accomplishd😆😆]
She is thodi si shocked bcos Ayi s rite behind them, and pushes him away, blushin furiously. He smiles and backs off.
"Bye Naina.." he says loudly. "Ayi, me nikal raha hu..." he leaves with another smile for N, and she keeps staring at d door with a half smile even after he's gone.
A : Naina, kya soch rahi ho?
N [blushes some more; cute pink, cute pink😳 😆] : Kuch nahi ayi. [gets back to work]

Its lunchtime, Naina s surrounded by files and papers nd all kinds f stuff. Bechari is in a hurry to finish the work so she can go out and get some things for the surpris [nop, abhi no clues 4 u guys😆] and her mob rings.
Its Daksh.
N : Ha daksh...bolo...
D : Busy ho kya?
N : Thoda sa.. Kya hua Daksh?
D : Kuch nahi, bas yu hi. Tumne khana khaya?
She blurts out without thinking "Time nahi he-" then stops, realising this.
D : Kya? Itna kya kam pada hai ki khane ke liye bhi tim nahi he...
N : Wo...actuali Daksh muje kahi jana tha to..

D : [from sumwer nearby] To ek kam karte he, tumhe me khana khila deta hu, phir jaha bhi jana he, drop kar dunga...

She looks up, surprised. He's standing by the office door, all smiles.

N : Daksh? [her whole face lights up, and he smiles back]
He sits down in the chair opposite hers.
And then she wonders how she'll go get the surprise wala stuff now...
N : Tum...late ane wale the na...
D : Ha, kyu...Ja ke bad me au kya...[starts to get up]

luv this dialogue

N : [holds his hand down on the table] Nahi, rehne do..
He smiles and sits down again, and she starts sorting her things.
N : Subhe ko kyu kaha ki late aoge...
D : [laughs] Late to aj hona hi hai. Lunch ke bad vapis jana hai.
N : Itna kam pada hai to abhi yaha kya kar rahe ho...?
D : Bhook lagi hai. Khana nahi dogi? Late na ane ki punishment he kya?
N : Daksh.
D : Acha baba. Me agar ab nahi ata, to tum na ab khana khaogi na sham ko, aur tum rat ko sofe pe baithi rahogi jab tak me na au. Ab to tum nahi keh sakti na ki sara din muje miss kiya isliye neend nahi ai...[mera sweetu..*pulls cheeks* 😆]

and this one

she gets up and he holds the door open for her.
N : Mene kab kaha tumhe mis kiya...wo to muje adat ho gayi he ab-
D : Janta hu. Vaise me mazak nahi kar raha tha...
N : [goes through the entire convo in her mind] Kaun si baat...?
D [cutsie smile😊] : Tumhe khilane ki...
N : Bas bhi karo na daksh...ab chalo..[he laughs again; she pushes him out the door and they go off.]

2nd part bhi dala he, peopl...hop its up2 ur xpectations😛

Originally posted by: sweetaish

Helo my darlins🤗..ye raha part 2...

Daksh reaches home ultra late [gues 11.30 wil do]. There's no light in the front room, and he smiles wondreing why she's changed her favorite spot to wait up for him [the front room sofa in most f my FFs wen he cums late] .
But there's no light in their room either; seems she has gone to sleep.
He lets himself in quitely and considers tip-toeing in the dark so as to not wake her but then he stops to think cos he cant feel her around [d dil ka connectn na😛]

Samajgayi

so he switches the lights on. Wel, she's not there, so he goes to check her offic.
Ah, idhar bhi no lights .
He calls out to her softly; no response so he gets the lights on. No Naina again.
Now he is slightly worried [surpris he darlin, sabr karo😉] and he decides 2 chek the terrac 2, cos he suspects she's upto somethin.

[guys i think i've coverd most locatns in P-zoo by nw...kal kitchn tha,aj to terrac bhi a gaya..ab mat kehna ki sare scns bedrm me set hoti hai😆😆]

He opens the terrace door gently, a whiff of the hava...[yep, our trusted announcer ki aa gaya dildar...]

Naina s standing by the railing, lookin out into the night.
Whiff of the hava for her also. She knows its him; she doesnt turn.
And then his arms are around her, and she smiles.
D : [softly in her ear] Kisi ka intezar kar rahi ho.
N : Ha, apne pyaar ka.
D : [peck on her cheek] Kaha tha na wait mat karo...Kabhi meri bat nahi manti ho.
N : [laughs] Agar me tumhari har bat manu, to phir usme kya maza he..
D : Theek he, to phir ab se me bhi tumhari koi bat nahi manunga.
N : Nahi, mujhe tum aise hi ache lagte ho.
D : [draws her closer] aj kya special hai?
N : [smiles; sooo like him 2 4get] Mere life me har din spl hai.
D : Kyu?
N : kyu ki mere har din me tum ho.

wah, kya romantic dialogue

D : [complains] Mere lines churane ki adat dal di hai tumne.
N : Daksh...
D : Hmm.
N : Me tumse bahot pyaar karti hu.
D : [laughs] wo wali bhi...

They spend some more time like this , kabhi staring at the moon tho kabhi trading jokes, tang-kheeching et-al...[pls guys...muje 12 o'clock ka intezar hai lekin adhe ghante ka lamba dialog mat likhvao mujse😛]

Naina's mob beeps from sumwer.
D : Itni der rat ko kaun hai? Me to yaha hu.
N : [laughs] alarm he.
D : [turns her around]. Kyu? Birthday he kya kisi ka?
N : [enigmatic as usual] aisa hi samajh lo.
D : Mera to nahi he...
N : Nahi. tumhara nahi he.
Daksh looks around and spots the gift on the small table.
D : Wo kiske liye hai?
N : Mere KP ke liye. Khol ke dekh lo.
Daksh takes up the package and Naina watches with this mysterious smile.
Daksh opens it up,seemingly disappointed.Ther's this cute toy train inside [i gues u guys hv guesd ki kya spl he aj😛jab we met ka b'day he guys😆].

He lifts it out,complaining. "Naina..."
She smiles. "Bacho jaisi harkate karoge to me aise gifts lake dungi."

luv Naina's retorts
D : [prtending he stil din understand; shana😛] aj mene kya kiya?
N : [lo ab ye bhi pretend kar rahi he] Subhe ko tum ayi se meri shikayat kar rahe the na.
Daksh laughs at that, and den this ribbon ka end falls out of the box. He pulls it out. Yards n yards f red satin with "i love you" written all over it, and he looks up nd gives her the smile we al go fida on.

wow, a great gift

"16 A?" he says, holding out his hand.
She smiles back. A jerk, a tug and she's back in his arms.
D : Mujhe yad tha.
N : Acha? To meri gift kaha hai?
D : Kya chahiye tumhe...? Tum jo bhi kaho, tumhara hai.
N [puts her arms about his neck] : Mujhe jo bhi chahiye, yahi mere pas he.
D : to ho gayi wish poori...[cute-sa head-butt]
N : Matlab?
D : Kal me kahi nahi ja raha hu. Sara din tumhara dimag khane yahi rahunga. Aur agar tum chaho, to...

great present too

N : [ignores the last part and d implication😳] Is liye tum aj itne late hue?
D : Aur nahi to kya.[happily] Kal chutti.
N : thank you.
He leans down to whisper in her ear : "celebrate nahi karna he kya..."

i luv it when his naughty

She promptly blushes😳 and drops her nazre.
D : ab tum kahogi ki yaha nahi.

They know each other too well.

Naina laughs but is still playing with his shirt ka button instead f lukin up.
D : Chale neeche?
Naina ab bhi kuch nahi kehti hai [irada to madam ka bhi yahi tha, ab badi shani ban rahi hai😆]

LOL at ur comment

D : Naina, tum aise nahi manogi na, to me utha ke le jaunga tumhe..
N : kya? Me kisi movi ya novel ki heroin hu kya jo tum muje utha ke le jaoge abhi...
D : Movi ka to pata nahi, meri zarur ho...[leans in for a kiss]
She starts to say sumthin [spoilsport], and as usual he's thoda sa annoyed. "Kya naina...tum bhi na."
N : [all business] Pata hai sab so gaye he par sabko uthane ke liye tum ek kafi ho.
D : Kuch bhi kaho, lekin ek minut bad. [u cnt stop him dis time babe😆]
He pulls back, smilin, and takes sumthin out f his pocket.
N : Ab ye kya hai?
Chota sa red box with a cute littl bow on top [no prizes 4 guessin😆].
He takes the ring out and slips it on her.
[BG, nyone...?lets hav naina tere...misd t...😊😊]
She looks up now, and her eyes tell him all that she feels...
D : I love you...
She hugs him. "I love you too..."

umm guys, they do go downstairs eventuali, i'l try making dat the nxt FF😉

ps : if i misd out on ny f d promisd elements, marna mat guys😆...misguiding promos dekh ke adat pad gayi hai😛

pps : idea drought again. nxt one may take tim😆. luv 2 all🤗

Hey guys🤗...been toying with this idea for some time nw. Pace thoda slow he, not exactly my usual😛...

yep, it ends in our al-time-fav chase, and dakshu gettin his five-minutes worth of promisd time [describ nahi karungi, sry😆] nd Naina having to correct certain elements f her make up...and kisi ke gal pe kuch lagi he😆😆😆...