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Posted: 13 years ago
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🤗this one i've dedicated to Rupali, Lucky nd Mysti...luv u guys🤗
ok...so dis s wen Dakshu realises he's fallen 4 Naina😊😊😊

Enchanted...

It happens to me every time

I see you,

And my heart works double time

Why is it so

It has no reason, no rhyme

It happens every once in a while

Particularly when you smile

You eyes dance, and mine too

When you laugh

The bells chime

And my heart?

Rogue, it won't listen to me

Beats this tattoo,

So hard, so loud

And I'm drawn to you again

What is it that you've cast on me

What spell ...

That I didn't know when it was

That I slipped, and fell

And you ask me if I've fallen in love

Oh I wish I could tell you, my dove

That it's you, the angel from above

With whom I've fallen in love...

I've fallen in love...

ps : guys mene halka sa editing kiya he😊
Edited by sweetaish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank u dear 🤗 for dedicating such a beautiful poem... Loved it 👏 A big big hug for u dear 🤗 🤗 🤗

Loved it 😛 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for dedicating us such a lovely poem for us aish!!🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 its very beautiful..👏.
PS:remember daksh once scolded aayi saying Naina has cast some spell over her and she should not believe her so much? Now dakshu is eating up his own words!!😆😆i guess the spell she cast on him was wayyy too strong!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey aish,
good mrng

ur enchanted is really magical and enchanting loved to infinity i was abt to reply yestrday itself,net ka prb hai abhi hai this reply is frm dad mobile i wanted to reply cdnt stop my self fr posting this to appreciate ur magic in words tjanks for lovely dedication

cnt type more so hav a nice day i may nt b able to respond much untill net tkcr works
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lucky, mysti nd rupu...thnk u 2🤗🤗🤗nd lucky...u went 2 al dat troubl 4 me...how chweet*pulls cheeks*😊😊😊...thnku darlin...ek xtra 4 u...🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Your poems, are like the lifting of the mist after a cold night in winter, when the hills are bathed in the white mist, and as the sun warms the surface, the mist clears, to shed light on a green luxurious mountain.

Hope the one who will ultimately share your life, will be worthy of your noble thoughts. I hope for you the best.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: walquest2000

Your poems, are like the lifting of the mist after a cold night in winter, when the hills are bathed in the white mist, and as the sun warms the surface, the mist clears, to shed light on a green luxurious mountain.

Hope the one who will ultimately share your life, will be worthy of your noble thoughts. I hope for you the best.

thank u😊...itne beautifully aaj tak kisi ne describ nahi kiya he...reali wonderful...sach batau, i might write one on this 2😊😊😊...inspiration ke liye phir se thank u😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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so we all kno Dakshu bechara cant resist Naina in anything right😆...this s 4 our bechara KP🤗, for each and every instance that he melts to her charms😊...
That smile of yours...

Oh, don't turn that smile on me

I'll melt...

I'll melt; I'm not made of stone

Ah, but who could resist you

Not when you smile

And those eyes of yours

Light up so, least of all

And here I fall for you

All over again

Helpless, before your airy charm

And that laughter, a soothing balm

Anything, yes anything I'd do

To keep you from all harm

No, its not for you, more for me

Helpless though I am

I'm selfish too

For you are precious to me

So precious, so...

Because you see

It's that smile of yours
that keeps my heart beating so...
Edited by sweetaish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aish kya kahu main😊...Teri hi style main tujhe low blow dear🤗🤗🤗... Beautiful and Brilliant 👏 👏 👏 Teri poetry pe to I am totally fida sweety...😳


This ones for u my dear friend😛 for giving us such beautiful poetry 🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Rupu darlin...ye tere liye😊😊😊...thanku🤗...tum log itna encourag nai karte,itneee sweetly respond nai karte, tho me shayad itna nahi likhti 😊... so thnku thnku thnku🤗🤗🤗

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