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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 7

Geet was being very restless. She was afraid that now Maan is gonna free her as dev is leaving his men. So what is she gonna do now?

Only if she could've got a little bit more time, she would make him admit that he loves her too.

She curses dev and said to herself "Ye dev bhi na, jab itne din ruk gaya tha, to chaar din aur nahin ruk sakta tha kya? Kya zaroorat thi, itni jaldi Maan ki baat maan-ne ki? Babaji! Why is everybody hell bent upon ruining my happiness?! Kiyun logo se meri khushi bardasht nahin hoti hai?" she said while tears started stinging her eyes but she controls herself and said

"No Geet, you don't have time to waste on crying. You cant give up!!! Maana ke time bohat kam hai, but you just have to fight harder!! You cant accept defeat before even fighting."

And she continues with determination "I will fight! I will fight till the last breath! I will fight for my love!! I will fight for my life!!! Yes Maan, you cant make me leave you this time without my consent. And I will never leave you until my last breath."

And she goes inside with determination.

She saw him working on his laptop again but she knew that he was aware of her presence.

She goes and sits in front of him. She knew that he knew that she was sitting in front of him but didn't pick up his eyes from the screen.

Geet puts her elbow on the table and rests her face on her hand while looking at Maan lovingly.

After few seconds, Maan said without picking up his gaze from the laptop "Kuch chahiye Geet?"

She didn't reply and just kept on looking at him with loving eyes.

When Geet didn't reply, Maan looks up at her and says a bit loudly "Geet!"

Geet says lovingly "Haan ji?"

Maan looks away confusedly. He was expecting Geet to give tantrums by now that she is not gonna leave him, as she has heard that dev has decided to leave yash and raju. So she would know that she has to leave now.

Maan himself didn't want Geet to leave, but he knew that this was best for her. The mistake that he has made by crossing her life again, he couldn't change that; but he can still try to rectify it by freeing Geet to live her life without him.

But Geet's cool behaviour was confusing him. He wondered what was cooking up in her mind.

He asks "Aise kya dekh rahi ho Geet?" and he quickly mends his question realising what might Geet answer to this "Do you need something?"

Geet just nods yes.

Maan looked at her and waited for her to say something more.

Geet says while looking down and blushing "I need to take a shower."

Maan didn't understand why Geet is blushing! What is there to be shy to take a shower??!!

Geet was leaving him more and more confused with her every gesture.

He said "Umm... sure! You can use my washroom!!"

Geet nods while still blushing. She was feeling too shy about her next plan.

She goes to Pinky and says something in her ear while Maan observed her every move. Then she takes one of the shopping bags that they have bought before Maan's men brought them here.

When at the door of the room, Geet stops and slowly looks back at Maan while her cheeks were red with blushing. And she looks down while shying and her lips quivered a little. And she went inside.

Now Maan was seriously curious about Geet's behaviour. It was very rare that Geet behaved like this. She used to blush a lot in the earlier days of their dating when Maan used to kiss her or touch her, but that was because he knew she wasn't open romantically at that time and those moments used to be extra romantic. But why is she blushing today???

She isn't just blushing blushing, she is turning all red by just looking at him. What is she upto now?!

Geet went to the washroom and tried to control herself. Her heart was beating erratically in her chest and hands were becoming numb. She gets into the shower but the warm water just increased her heart beats.

She was feeling too shy thinking of what she is planning to do. But she doesn't have any time left for her other plans and she knew that if her this plan gets successful, Maan will never be able to send her away.

She tried to calm herself saying that she is doing this just for Maan and herself. Because the truth was that she cant live without him anymore. Even the lifeless life that she was living from last 5 years, seems impossible for her now. The only way that she knew she would survive was with Maan.

She knew Maan loved her. No matter what he tries to show her, but she knew otherwise. He cant lie to her. She can still see that love and care for her in his eyes even if he tries to hide it behind his cold face. She knows that he was still her Maan that loved her alot.

So what was there to shy! She knew that only he has the right on her, so why wasn't she able to look into her own reflection in the mirror? She hides her face in her hands while smiling to herself.

She peeked through her fingers to her reflection in the mirror and for a second she felt so shy that she thought of changing back into her old clothes.

But then she snaps at herself

"Geet stop it! There's nothing to get so shy!!! It is just gonna be Maan!!! Maan se kaisi sharam?? When u know, that only he has the full right on you!!! So what is there to shy about to give him what is rightfully already his!!! Control your heartbeats geet!!! You have to seduce him today if you want him in your life!!! Samjhi???!!!" she scolds herself and says "Ab chup chaap bahar chal, aur khabardaar agar tune peechhe hatne k bare mein socha bhi to!!!"

She closes her eyes and takes a deep breath and goes towards the door.

But as she reached the door, blush washed through her. She tried a lot to control her erratic heartbeats but in vain...

At last she gave up and went out. As she stepped out of the washroom, her heart skipped a beat. Maan was standing in front of her.

She wanted Maan to be here but wasn't expecting him to be here... Somewhere in her mind, she was hoping of getting little more time to control herself before Maan sees her in these clothes...

Maan was getting worried because it has been more than half an hour since geet has gone to take a shower. So he came inside to check on her...

He went near the washroom door, and as he was gonna knock the door, the door opened and his heart skipped a beat at the sight...

Geet was wearing a sexy lingerie, which made his eyes widens. Her hair was wet with her locks falling onto her face. Maan looked at her from top to bottom while his heartbeats fastened. Geet was looking too sexy to resist...


continued in the next post


Edited by jazz07_dh - 13 years ago
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Geet looked down while her cheeks turning bright red. All her plans of seducing Maan went down the drain with seeing Maan checking her out.

Her chest heaved up n down vigorously making her more irresistible, if that was possible!

She didn't know how to react... She has never done anything like this in her whole life, so she was clueless how to seduce someone. So she decided to settle down with flushed and self-conscious rite now...

She was totally unaware of the turmoil of emotions she was stirring in Maan...

Maan was in a daze... His throat was getting dry... He wanted to touch her... He wanted to feel her... He wanted to kiss her breathless till eternity... He wanted to love her... He wanted to loose himself in her...

Absentmindedly, he slowly picks up his hand towards geet and geet looked down while feeling shy. He gently puts her locks of hair at the back of her ear and strokes her face with his hand...

"Maan..." Geet whispered his name and closed her eyes in anticipation... Maan moved his hand slowly towards her lips and gently strokes her lips with his thumb.. Geet's lips quivered under his touch...

He moves closer to geet covering the little gap between them and gently takes her lips in his...

An electric current passed through them as their lips met...

His mouth was not gentle on hers; there was a brand new edge of hunger and eagerness the way his lips moved against hers. He kissed her harder and harder like it was the last time while his hands moving all over her body. They were too engrossed into each other, that they didn't realised when they landed up on the bed...

Geet broke the kiss to breathe but his lips didn't leave her skin... His lips moved down towards her neck leaving wet kisses all around while burning her skin with his touch...

Maan didn't know what has gotten into him but he knew he couldn't stop. The desire to have her was burning him inside.

His mouth was all over her but still he couldn't get enough of her. Geet moaned in desire as his mouth explores her body.

Geet's mind was blank with heat and passion... She wished that the time stops and she could be in his arms forever... She wanted him to touch her... She wanted him to hold her... She wanted him to love her... But more than that, she wanted to touch him...

Her hands trembled to the front of his shirt and opened the top buttons of his shirt... Her little act brought Maan back to his senses. And he realised what he was doing...

Suddenly geet felt his body weight lifting up from top of her... She opens her eyes while breathing heavily and found him lying on the side with closed eyes trying to control himself...

It has took every ounce of his control to come back to his senses and moves away from her... He thinks 'I couldn't do this... It is wrong... Then why does it feel so right... Stop it Maan! Control yourself!!! How can u even think of crossing this line?!!!! You can't ruin Geet's life!!!!'

Geet touched his face gently while breathing heavily n mumbled "Maan..."

Maan instantly gets up from the bed with determination and is about to leave, but geet holds his hand.

Geet says in a little voice "Mujhe chhod ke mat jayiye Maan!!"

Maan closes his eyes to fight the pain and said "Leave my hand geet!"

Geet just looks at him while tears starting to sting her eyes at the failure of her plan, but didn't leave his hand.

Maan glares at Geet angrily and spat the words sarcastically at her "Geet, I didn't knew you were so desperate to sleep with me!!"

His words broke her into million pieces. The tears easily made their way into her eyes..

The tears in Geet's eyes shattered Maan into million pieces... But he knew he can't console her!!!

She is gonna leave tomorrow, and it's better for her if she leaves with hatred for him in her heart...

Geet didn't say anything. Embarrassment was too big for her to say something. She made herself so vulnerable to him and he doesn't even leave any chance of breaking her...

She felt anger at herself for being so weak in front of him. Is it such a big mistake wanting to be with someone you love???

No!! She will not let him win this time by hurting her!!! She will not let his words affect her!!! Because if he wins today, she will lose him forever...

She fought back her tears and gets up and says angrily "kiyun Maan, aap bhi to yehi chahte the na?? So here I am. Giving myself to you!!" and she moves her hand to take off the strap of her brassiere but he holds her hands with his both hands and pin them down.

"Geeet!!!!" he looked at her with anger and frustration. It was getting too hard for him to control himself, he walks out. He stops at the door and says without looking back at her "You are leaving tomorrow!"


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And he leaves the room without another word.

Geet sat down while her heart still thumping too hard in anger. But soon another emotion took over the anger. Rejection!!!


Teri meri, meri teri prem kahani hai mushkil
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye
Ik ladka aur ik ladki ki yeh kahani hai nayi
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye

Teri meri, meri teri prem kahani hai mushkil
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye
Ik dooje se hue judaa, jab ik dooje ke liye bane
Teri meri, meri teri prem kahani hai mushkil
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye

Tears rolled down her cheeks as rejection washed through her. She felt embarrassed and humiliated. She felt unwanted...

He doesn't want her!!! And she is like cheap fluzy throwing herself on him. He hates her now, that is the reason why he doesn't want her with him...

She sat there crying for many minutes in humiliation. Her mind wasn't thinking straight in her present condition. She has never made herself so vulnerable in front of anybody before, so the pain of breaking was making her better thinking numb.


Tumse dil jo lagaya, to jahaan maine paaya
Kabhi socha na tha yun, meelon door hoga saaya
Kyun khuda tune mujhe aisa khwaab dikhaya
Jab haqeeqat mein usse todna tha

Ik dooje se hue judaa, jab ik dooje ke liye bane
Teri meri, meri teri prem kahani hai mushkil
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye

She determinedly wipes her tears and says to herself "Geet! Stop throwing yourself on him!!! He doesn't want you!!!"

Maan goes out to breathe...

It was too hard for Maan to control himself!!! What the hell he was doing inside??!!


Teri meri baaton ka har lamha sab se anjaana
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye
Har ehsaas mein tu hai, har ik yaad mein tera afsaana
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye

Saara din bit jaaye, saari raat jagaaye
Bas khayal tumhara, lamha lamha tadpaaye
Yeh tadap keh rahi hai mit jaaye faasle
Yeh tere mere darmeyaan hai jo saare


He strokes his hand through his hair in frustration. Geet was giving herself because she loves him a lot and still hopes to be with him but he... he should've controlled himself when he knows the truth that he's gonna succumb all her hopes under his feet very soon!!!


Ik dooje se hue judaa jab ik dooje ke liye bane
Teri meri baaton ka har lamha sab se anjaana
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye
Har ehsaas mein tu hai har ik yaad mein tera afsaana
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye

They are not meant to be together... At least not anymore... He hits his fist on the wall in frustration and anger!!!

After some time, when he was able to control himself somewhat, he goes to the room to check on geet thinking that she might be asleep by now...


Teri meri, meri teri prem kahani hai mushkil
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye

Teri meri, meri teri prem kahani hai mushkil
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye
Ik ladka aur ik ladki ki yeh kahani hai nayi
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye

As he entered the room quietly, he found the bed empty. He looked around the room, but the room was empty too.

He knocks at the washroom, but no answer!!! He opens the door and the washroom was also deserted...

He was about to go outside when his eyes fell on a piece of paper on the bed.

His heart started sinking as he picked up the paper. He opens the letter and found Geet's handwriting on it...


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PART 8


Edited by jazz07_dh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
aww no way x bet shes gone herself x
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wonderful update, so geet is really gone,
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Posted: 13 years ago
good she left him so he can realize geet imp
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Posted: 13 years ago
No, no, no...why did Maan stop? He shuld stop being so righteous, Geet is giving herself to him b/c she feels that's his right. I understand that he doesn't want to bring her in his dark life, but I wish he would stop making decisions for her...give the girl a chance to tell what she wants in life and whom does she want to spend her life with.

Amazing update, enjoyed it
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww you left us hanging!
i LOVEED the part so much
gosh i could literally feel Geet's pain!
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update
why maan is not telling anything to geet and geet was very determined to make maan come back to her but at last she also gave up
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update dear 😊
thanks 4 the pm
please continue soon

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