Opposite shores of a sea LAST Prt & EPILOGUE Pg 91

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thabassum

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Posted: 13 years ago

#261

nice part..

wat exactly happend in their past!!!!!

now im eager to know!!!!

awsum update!!

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soniya_lovesu

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Posted: 13 years ago

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MY ANALYSIS ON UR FF...: okay, my frnds will kill me cause i never post my analysis on any of their ff's but i dnt knw why i wanted to post it here...

PART ONE:

OMG!!!! they loved each other so much.😲😭..it was so beautiful back then, i cn feel it ryt nw, the pain that geet must be feeling😭😭 ...Some how in a weird way, i can relate to this SS...Maan and Geet were engaged? 😲 how can geet even think of marrying someone else?😒 so what that maan told her to move on? is it so easy to move on? NOT FOR ME...😭 just hope that it ends on a happy note. 😊

PART TWO:

Why am i having a feeling that dev 😡 is one of the bad guys here despite the fact that maan is being portrayed as a criminal? And i know from from somewhere that maan cannot hurt her even if he wants to😭...He wants her to hate him? WHY?😲

NO MAAN dnt do that...she cant live without you, she pretends to but she cant!🥺

And the way she grabbed his hand, she was unconscious, her mind was not working but her heart was, she knew that its her maan...😭

PART THREE:

I knew it... She is not scared, she is scared for pinky, for her sister's safety... Inside her heart she knows that nothing can happen to her. 😍 She dint even felt the pain, when her arm was cut with the glass. Why? cauuse the pain in her heart was much more deep. The pain of losing him, the fear of losing her life (or whats left of it) pain of losing maan💔. She knows that every single part of hers belongs to him. She cannot even think of anyone else but him with her. She is numb, living like a life-less body.😭 When she was trying to leave, she knew that something of her is been taking away from her, she felt it! she felt the same pain, same fear that she did back when the phone call ended 5 yrs ago. 😔

Even when he tried to shoot (or i would say pretended to shoot) pinky, she knew that he wont but for her sister's safety she stopped him. And when he cut his hand with the knife, it gave her immense pain..😭 she was about to shout at him for what he did with himself but her words died when he said that he dont want her anymore..🤢 When he said that he could still fulfill her physical needs, he felt an urge to rip his own tongue out of his mouth. But Geet, her heart must have skipped a beat at that sentence, but then she would have thought, was she only just a mere body satisfaction? IT RIPPED HER HEART OUT!!!🥺 she must have remembered the times when he was her savior from everyone who looked at her with lustful eyes. Was it just an act? NO! her heart knew his words had no weight in them but her mind yelled at her, that he dont even respect her anymore.😭 and when he asked his men to take her to his room she knew nothing can happen to her, she TRUST him , she can see it in his eyes but his facial expressions told her otherwise. But only he knew how he was controlling himself...the urge to love her, the urge to embrace her, to take away all the pain, to remove the tears from her eyes was making him weak. He did that so that he could control his urge to kiss her, to love her. He said that and went away to breathe, so that he can again be a ruthless, and selfish criminal he was portrayed as.

PART FOUR:

She went away with his men's, even though her mind was yelling at her to struggle, but her heart made her do that. She was in a trance. Her maan died the very day when he called her the very last time.😭 She was brought back to this world when he started kissing her, she felt his love, his pain. And when he shouted at her for not being careful, she was on cloud nine. She knew she was right, she knew her maan can never do this by his choice, something made him do that and now she decided to find out the reason for all this..

PART FIVE:

OMG!!!! 😭 ARE U SOMEHOW RELATED TO ME? 'cause ...omg!!!! u wrote something in this part that happened to me a year ago.😭😭 And then the way he tried to dodge the topic by telling her that he will kill pinky, she knew he cant, he cant kill anyone whose related to her, he cant, thats why she was so confident, her heart took over her mind and made her strong. She knew he still love her, all she need to do is provoke him to tell her the truth. But it wnt be easy...😭

PART SIX:

Well, she is back to her original form 😆 The punjabi- sherni GEET HANDA...👍🏼

Awww...love the nok-jhok between two lovers...😊 simply awesome.

PLEASE ADD ME TO UR P.M LIST...AND U R A WONDERFUL WRITER👏👏...CONTINUE SOON...😊

Edited by soniya_maaneet - 13 years ago