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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Danina

Wow just read ur poems amaaazing;D;D
Wow ur words...amazing;D;D;D;D
amazing yaar;D;D
wow;D
do write more...;D;D
and pm me please;D;D


Thank you so much darling. ðŸ˜›
Muahhh🤗
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Thank you darling.
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Pain, Yearning and Reality

(For Ansah's FF - The Heart I lost)

It has only been a few hours
But those hours seemed liked years
He could not comprehend the fact that she was missing
She was missing only because of him

Her little one had cried her heart out
To find her mother missing
What was he to say to her little one?
That her mother was missing just because of him.
His heart was in pain, filled with agony without her presence

He waited, he cried and he prayed
For her to be all right without any harm
He craved, he longed, he yearned and he desired
To see her safe and sound, without any harm

And when he could not take it anymore
There she came tumbling into the safety of his arms
And the time stopped for both of them
Both were lost in each other's eyes
Both were swept off their feet weaving into their own dreams
Until, they heard the little one crying
And their dreams crashed jolting them to reality.

Edited by Water. - 12 years ago
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Unknown Feelings

(For Muskanp's FF - Dreams)

My life has changed in the last few months
It moves on a rhythm of its own free will
It summons me dance on its melodious tunes
Just like Radha danced to Krishna's flute
 
My mind, body and soul are in sync with each other
They repeatedly beat on one single tune
A tune that brings me closer and closer
Closer to Garv and to Maan
 
How did they become an essential part of me? Even I do not know
I hardly know them, yet I know them from ages ago
They are a part of me, my mind, body and soul
It is a need, need so deep that it is hard to explain
A need to hold, to feed, to soothe and to protect
A need for me to be with him every second, minute and day
A need for me to never let him out of my sight
A need for him, to be mine and only mine
A need for him to be my son and I his mother.
 
But, how can I think like this?
Is he really mine? Or am I living in a dream with my eyes closed?
Maan is married and it is his child.
Then how can Garv be mine?
 
Yet, I crave for Garv and for Maan
How can I perform such a shameful act?
Of dreaming about another man
The shock, the shame, the guilt and the realization tortures me from within
Yet, I feel hopeless because my heart beats only for both of them
And I shamelessly accept the love I have for both of them.
My Garv and My Maan!

Edited by Water. - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: miss_giggles

Looking forward to them 😃

 
I agree with you😃
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Excellent post ...love it thanks.
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The Imperfect Wife
(For Banglores FF - Surrogate Relations)


My life has been filled with an abyss of darkness so deep
That night herself loses her way to the emergence of dawn
My days remain burdened under the dark pool of sorrows
And my nights strive under the blanket of my fears and my terrorizing dreams

I come from a past from which there is no return
I do not know who I am or where I belong
Since I have no identity of my own 
Whatever I had was taken away from me
I have lost my heart, my body and my soul
I live in shame so deeply engraved that there is no indication of light
Because my body is tainted and ruined and can be never repaired

I have become small, as small as the smallest particle of an atom
As hollow, as the deepest hollow of a drum
My pain is as terrorizing as the life imagined in hell
Therefore, my each day is spent living in despair

I made the mistake of falling in love with you
Knowing you belong to someone else
You showed me with your utmost care and concern 
And I just could not stop myself from feeling for you.
I think about you day and night
I want to be held, touch, caressed and protected by you
Because you make me feel like a human again
You make me feel that I belong in this world
And that I am a woman who can be cared, loved and cherished

Yet, I am scared, scared to come close to you
Because I am not capable of loving you 
Because I know that I cannot make you happy 
I can never fulfill your desires if I become your wife
How can I take away your life, your dreams and your happiness?
When you are the best thing that ever happened to me
I love you more than what my heart desires
And therefore, I do not want to you make this mistake
For asking me to be by your side
When I know that all I can be is The Imperfect Wife!

Edited by Water. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
hi Rachana thank u for the poem...i'm honored that u placed urself in my Geet's position,  felt her emotions and lend them expressions thru' ur words
Edited by bangalores - 12 years ago
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Haha Shaheda Di, do you remember when I tried to post your name like this on your story? Ane shu badnaam ane dhamaal thai ti. Yaad che?😆