|AbhIya| ~~BEAUTIFULLY DEAD~~ | Pg 107 update. :)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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~~ BEAUTIFULLY DEAD~~




::PROLOGUE::

PIA POV
What does it feel like when your life is snatched away from you .. when your life crumples right infront of your eyes..when you watch the person you love the most ..value more than tour life marry the person who was once your sister ..what does it feel like when the people you care the most betray you..?? Here I stand all alone wondering about the choices i made in life as I stand here focussed on my decision to die .. Everyone says cowards commit suicide but I say that its just something you FEEL to do when everything and everyone has crossed the limits of tolerance.. where are you ABHAY..?? where are you..?? ohh..!! just for a second it felt like you would be here to save me like the times you did before but now i know you won't come 'cause at that time there was a PIYA in your life but now i guess I just dissappeared like i did today.. away from everyone ready to embrace death to finally be dead ...BEAUTIFULLY DEAD







[YOUTUBE]http://youtube.com/watch?v=3ymeJeZyaE0&feature=player_embedded[/YOUTUBE]

TERI MERI BY RIDHIMA_BASKET1

hey guys this is my first attempt at writing an FF so please dont jusge me harshly and let me know if i should continue ..!! NEED A LOT OF YOUR HELP AND VIEWS so PLEASE don't crush my attempt..!!ANYWAYS I'LL UPDATE THE CHARACTER SKETCH BELOW ..!! I WROTE THIS A WHILE AGO THE STORY WAS LIKE HAUNTING ME AND I NEEDED THE BREAK FROM THE LATEST TRACK..!! so i tot ill pen it down..!! and this is both a JIYA and AN ABHIYA FF so happy ending wiw whom is upto you people..!!!

XOXO
KiArA



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Posted: 13 years ago
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::~~INDEX~~::


PAGE 1 :: PROLOGUE 1

PAGE 4 :: NOTE(Just a teenie meenie bit of help please )https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/45933082

PAGE 4 :: CHARACTER SKETCH - THE RAICHANDS


PAGE 10:: CHARACTER SKETCH - THE KHURANAShttps://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/45973163

PAGE 13:: CHARACTER SKETCH - THE DOBRIYALShttps://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/45999453








PAGE 41:: CHAPTER SEVEN - PART ONE https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/46599050

PAGE 41:: CHAPTER SEVEN - PART TWO https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/46603782
















Edited by tiger_lily - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey reli very nice start!!
i loved d way u xpressed pia's feelings
continue soon!
n yes ofcourse in last i want pia wid abhay n abhay only!!😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great start...Happy Ending...No doubt abt it...Only n only with Abhiya...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice start!!
pia's feelings were beautifully expressed
continue soon
& i want pia only with abhay !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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gr8t start i loved it cont soon dear i would love to see happy ending of piya with abhay n jiya to b gud frnds pm me when you updt
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow Really Nyc start!!!👏👏
U expressed Pia's feeling very Well...
Continue Soon..😃
Want only Abhiya☺️ no Jiya🤢 Only ABHIYA!!!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey dear😃
awesome concept dear...plz cont soon n add me in ur pm list...
i only want abhiya as soulmate at end n jiya as friend not more that that...
plz update soon
hav a nice day
luv u
sunita
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its beautifully written and do pm me...
of course we are abhiya maniacs so we want abhiya together at the ending but jay should get some one who is really in love with him... but not piya...

regards...

swati...!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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please do continue it is nicely n fantastically written 😊😛 and please pm. 😊

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