|AbhIya| ~~BEAUTIFULLY DEAD~~ | Pg 107 update. :) - Page 42

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Posted: 14 years ago
Panchi is so ...

Waiting for Abhiya.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Eowyn

Honestly Birdie! Had your senses gone to moon when you married your sisters true love😡

That idiot didn't show any senses but why the heck didn't you😡
Ab aage ki zindagi mein betkar bugtho iski sazaa...
Just hope that your daughter doesn't end up hating you...
Daadi's words were superb...
So were the dialogues of the Khuranna's...
Brilliant job👏


hey nidha..!!
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coz she was so happiee dat a handsome dude agreed to marry her..
yeah.. now 2x sazaa
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thanks..!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: snitchseeker

Panchi is so ...

Waiting for Abhiya.


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Posted: 14 years ago
::CHAPTER NINE ::




KHURANA MANSION

Jeh broke out of his thoughts,he found his answer and that was all that mattered to him knowing what to do and foolw the path destiny had set for him.. he might have been freed from this infamous cycle of life and death but still there was destiny thats et a path for him and today as in now he had chosen his path..he moved towards the masterbed Piya was laid on,Alina and Geet were besides her while maan arranged for the blood,seeing him come Geet moved.Jeh took Geet's position and gently took Piya in his arms like she was something fragile made out of a single layer of glass.HE helld her in his arms and whispered a sorry in her ears.

Jeh:(in Piya's ears) Piya.. You wanted death,you thought it was your freedom,your family,your escape and your love but I saved you.I saved you only to grant you death but not the death you wanted but the death where you die and you are reborn to haunt the planet...to be the predator...to dominate.Not the death you wanted.. but in a way you were right death was your family,you were born into it,surrounded by the living dead since the day you were born till now when your are on the verge of dying.. the undead surround you.. I'm sorry Piya .. I'm sorry for putting you through the pain I'm gonna put you through but forgive me but this is the only way I can save you.

Saying that Jeh turned into a creature of the dark.. all set to take the next step but today the creature in his arms was not the prey and he was not the predator bot today he was the savior and she was the damsel in distress,the happiness of this family.The animal in him came back to life ... took over his humanity and that was when he bit her.

JEH POV
He waitched as he arched her neck into the preferred position and then he pierced his fangs into her fragile little neck and next he smelt the blood flowing out of her body and into his mouth.. he licked his lips...licked the delicious blood on his lips... blood had never tasted so ravishing before.Her blood was THE perfect blend of sweet and spice.. the blood called out to him ... this was what he left years to coverup for the the mistake he made...killing his love and today he was breaking the promise he made to her to change him self to not be a monster but this time the blood invited him openly and not even the love foer Samaira was gonna stop him.He cared about npthing now,nothing was gonna stop him now.. not the family nor destiny,everything and every rope was in his hands now,he was losing control.. losing control of his so called human instincts.The animal in him had finally risen taking over and destroying anything and everything that would come in his way.Reminding him that he was dead,he couldnot benifit anyone,everyone thinks differently.. convince themselves but in the end the reality engulfs them,this was who he really was,who his family were .. the creations of the dark BLOODY BLOOD SUCKERS>He was about to turn her too... doom her life but no he knew what he had to do and this was it.


NORMAL POV

GEET: (clutching Maan) Maan he's gonna kill her,he can't stop Maan do something..!!

MAAN: We can't do anything but trust him.I can;t stop him 'cause that will anger him more, we are not the same when we change into our realselves,we are different.Trust him Geet. TRUST That's our only key. TRUST

ALEINA: Bhai.. Bhaabi.. Hold my hand. I'm scared.We are just waiting here hoping that Jeh saves Piya but he's there battling with his instincts.. battling against his lust(blood).Just hope for the best Bro.. Just hope for the best..!!

THE KHURANASS ARE THERE COMFORTING EACH OTHER SUPPORTING JEH.. SYMBOLISING THE STRONG BONG BETWEEN EACH OF THEM.

DOBRIYAL MANSION


PANCHI: (Drags Misha into a room and bangs the door shut behind them) Mujhe pata thaki kuch toh galat hai.. yeh sab... ghar aana,haklakana(not sure if thats the correct word for stammering) not the drama and then Abhay.ABHAY

MISHA: Kaise batatein Panchi..? What could I tell..? How could I tell you that Piya's missing..? Tumhe Piya ki parvaah nahi thi..you didnot care for her and now you're here standing infront of me trying to show your fake sympathy and loss but you know what I donot need it nor do mom or dad.Agar Piya yahi hoti toh she would never want to see your face.Never wanted to see a backstabber like you>Kya mila tumhe Abhay ko Piya se cheenke,Kya mila tumhe uski zindagi barbaad karke what did you get in your so skrewd up life,,?? another guy guy in your infamous engagement list who you finally married.Tum yahi maanti ho na ki Abhay loves you but you know what you are mistaken yet again.Agar ABhay tumse pyaar karta then he would never feel so bad so messed up at the news that Piya's missing,he would have easily acceted that fact if he loved you but he had only one motive hhe wanted Piya safe..Pata nahi aisa kya raaz tha.. kaunsa raaz tha ki he wanted Piya away .. not near him. Not ready to let her suffer na mujhe pata hai na tumhe but sirf Piya ko par yahaa Piay bhi door gayi hai Panchi pata nahi kahaa but at the same time I don't even know what YOU did to make him agree to marry you... So yeh sab philosophical baatein choodkar lets get to the point shall we.. Whta happened tonight..?Did you act like your usual self and sold your body to your "husband"..?? Act like a wh**e or was he gentle enough to reject you..??Chal tell... U won't tell then mein Abhay se punch lungi..?? Afterall gotta chek on your overall.. right..?? Other wise u'll lose you precious tag of being a you know what from me

PANCHI SLAPS MISHA

PANCHI:MIshaa..!! Do you atleast know what you're talking.. I am your sister for heavens sake.

MISHA: You..?? No..!! No sweetheart you are mistaken. You are not MY sister.I don't have any sisters.One is believed to be dead .. thatnews is only left to be confirmed and the other one died the day she announced that she was going to marry my baby sisters love...YOU ARE A STRANGER TO ME PANCHI RAICHAND .. A STRANGER




NEXT CHAPTER MIGHT BE UPDATED.. TYPING IT OUT ..GOT LOADS OF HW .. NOT SURE IF I'LL BE ABLE TO FINISH..!!
Edited by iceprincesinluv - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow thts great. finally Panchi is getting good words from everybody😆
Edited by abhayfan_dishu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey its superb chappie i like how misha get angry on panch but i thin ki ye kuch jyada hi gussa hogayi panch par i think panch deserves this reaction from misha but kuch jyada hi ho gaya :) keppp ittt uppp AND DONT FORGET TO PM ME
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Posted: 14 years ago
SUPERB!! 👏

FINALLY...panchi got a heavy dose of insult.. 😉

well, i also cant understand..wat made abhay marry panchi...😕 & panchi didnt once think abt her baby sis..i mean she cud have talked to her parents..i'm sure they wud hav supported her..but NO!! she wanted her sister's love...UFF...panchi.. 😡

aha !!
i just love MISHA!!

Thanks for the pm
continue soon
tc
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update...lovd panchi misha convo..panchi deservs it..b/w when will abhay pia meet,,? eagirly waiting to see them face to face..😳tc.
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey I love the way misha datofy Panchi.Oh wnt Abhiya now😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow...super update...finally panchi ki insult...she deserved it...actually something more...anyways...i loved it...update soon..thanks for pm..

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