|AbhIya| ~~BEAUTIFULLY DEAD~~ | Pg 107 update. :) - Page 37

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Posted: 13 years ago

nice part
abhays memories in the car were nice
the manisons were superb
i liked the khuranas one the most
i loved the phones
piya's cell was very cute
continue soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anuraag111


nice part
abhays memories in the car were nice
the manisons were superb
i liked the khuranas one the most
i loved the phones
piya's cell was very cute
continue soon...


THANKS..!!!
OHK...!!!
ME TO BOTH WERE AWSUM...!!!
IPHONE 4 ... AWSUM
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update dear!thanx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey dear last three updates were very nice!!!
although i m dying to read abt abhay-pia!!
bt i reli enjoyed reading haseena-madhu's part!!
haseena's vharacter in ur story, is superb sweet!!
u av defined whole khurran's story very well!!
n those pics were mindblowing!!
would love to read nxt update asap!!
thanx for pm
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
WOW!!!THOSE HOUSES AND PHONES WERE FREAKIN AWESOME!!!!So waiting for d next chapter!!!!ABHIYA METS IN DAT UPDATE RIGHT??REALLY HOPES SO..IM SO EXCITED U GOTTA UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON
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Posted: 13 years ago
Brilliant job Kiara
Especially Haseena's dialogues...
It is from the heart...
I do hate Panchi for what she did...but still I feel really bad that right now she is all alone in the world...
I mean after a time she will be left alone and blamed even Abhay will probably blame her...
If he does that I will like Panchi to smack him hard on the head becoz he deserves punishment as much as she does
Abhay's ride back into past was superbly done👏

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Posted: 13 years ago
loved your update... it was fabulous... plz add me to ur PM list
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Posted: 13 years ago
All the choices are Awesome...wow..PHONES ARE AMAZING...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
::CHAPTER EIGHT::



DOBRIYAL MANSION

Abhay stopped the car just as they stood infront of the Dobriyal Mansion.

PANCHI : Hum yahan kyon aaye hai..?? Mere ghar pe..??

ABHAY: Panchi.. in sabko tumari zaroorat hai,aur tumhe iss waqt apme ghar hona chahiye.. apne maa baap ke ghar .. apne hai aur behen ke saath..

PANCHI: Par...

ABHAY: Just go Panchi ...!!

Panchi unlocks the car door and enters the house and sees that everyone present there is either crying or is busy. Arnab sees her enter and hugs her.

ARNAB: Hey Panch yahaa kya kar rahi ho.. huh.. kya hua..??

PANCHI: Kuch nahi dad .. was just missing you ..!!

ARNAB: Panchi.. ab tum humare thodi ho.. .. tum toh raichands ki ho..!! atleast unki zyada so come and sit... Tumhara hi hai .. tum parayi thodi ho...

NANI: Mahi voh parayi thodi hao.. voh toh aapki rajkumari hai.Parayi toh voh meri bacchi thi,jo har waqt is parivaar ko aapna maanti thi.. par usse thodi pata tha ki jis parivaar ko voh aapna maanti thi voh parivaar kabhi uska tha hi nahi.. jis aadmi ko voh aapna pitah maanti thi usse uski koi parvah nahi thi par apni jahis(legimate) beti ki parvah hai.. voh toh uski najayas(illegimate) thi na.. is parivaar ka aapnaya hua bhoj.. koi pyaar nahi karta tha use .. voh sab tho ek dikhava tha.Arnav aap toh bas yahi chahte ki aapnki beti aapko maaf karde,Madhu aapne aap ko doshi maanti thi.Misha ne sach jaane ke baad Piya ki jaan lene ki koshish ki.. Kunal toh din raat usse daanta aur taane maarta raha aur aaj Panchi ne uske zindagi se uska pyaaar cheena hai..! .KYA ACHA KIYA HAI ISS PARIVAAR NE..?? KABHI USKA BALAA CHAHA..?? AGAR KISI NE USSE APNAYA YA AAPNANE KI KOSHISH KI TO USKE LIYE EKK HISAAB RAKHA..!!? KYON RAHEGI VOH YAHAA..?? Agar meri bas mein hota toh mein piya ko yahaan se bohot door bechti.. par.. par voh chali gayi... Panchi suna tumne ... PIYA chali gayi..!!.. na uska pata hai na khabar..ek pahad tak police usse track kar paye .. unka maana hai ki voh usse bacha payenge .. par janti ho pahaad par log kyon jaate hai..? kud kushi karne.. .. aisi halat mein voh vaha kudrakt ka jadhoo mehsoos karne thodi jayegi. .. par aap sab mein saach maane ke ya uski saamna karne ki koi taakat nahi hai. bhula do uss aasha ko ki voh yahaa laut kar aayegikyonki voh nahi aayegi.. aaj nahi kabhi nahi aur agay laut aayi toh bhi tumhe pehle jaise saache dil se aapna nahi paogi kyonki usse ab uske zindagi mein naa aaplog chahiye na mein... (tears enter her eyes)

(Misha comes in)
MISHA: Dadi .. aap so jayiye .. aapki tabyat bigad jayegi.. comeon

DADI: Subah ke 6 bhake sokar kya faida..??

MISHA: chaliye na dadi..

(They leave)

Panchi: dad.. Piya sachmuch chali gayi hai.. nahi yeh saach nahi hai.. yeh jhoot hai..kaho na dad .. yeh jhoot hai.. just a dirty joke

ARNAB: no Panchi yeh sach hai... (then naani's words keep ringing in his ears)
KYA ACHA KIYA HAI ISS PARIVAAR NE..?? KABHI USKA BALAA CHAHA..?? AGAR KISI NE USSE APNAYA YA AAPNANE KI KOSHISH KI TO USKE LIYE EKK HISAAB RAKHA..!!? KYON RAHEGI VOH YAHAA..??

ARNAB: WHY DO ALL FAULTS WEIGH MORE THEN YOUR GOOD DEEDS EVEN THOUGH THE GOOD DRRDS ARE MORE IN NUMBER...

KHURANA MANSION

JEH: This is not about happiness Alina.It's about saving..being the savior.. but this is a huge decision Alina.I cant take it .. you know what happened the last time.You say I live in in my past but no it do'nt .. it's just that every thing haunts meI loved her but i let her go but when i tried to save her .. i failed .. centuries later I met Piya, the same urge to save her,protect her,she reminds me of her but if i try to save her i won't be able to satisfy myself.. my thirst and thats what scares me .No one will be able to stop me if i lose myself bring be back to reality.. remind me of my purpose and motive .. not you nor bhai or nor Geet.This is my family,this is your wish but that makes it even more difficult for me to fulfill it knowing that she has a past with this family.YOU ALL LOVE HER.What if i fail.ONE MISTAKE,ONE EXTRA SECOND AND WE ALL LOSE HER.She has lost a lot of blood.Transfusion will take time..what if i make a mistake .. you'll will lose her forever .. this time 'cause of me.

GEET: Jeh it's not about losing her.It's about if you try.If you try and and then if you fail .God forbid. Then we will know you tried.. we will not hold a grudge against you.. not make you repent for a mistake you never did, we trust you remember.. we have faith in you .. this is a chance to prove yourselfJeh..once for this family.. once for yourself.

ALINA: Jeh .. I'll help you. I'll try all i can.. but please...

MAAN: JEh we are a family .. no matter what happens we are always there for you.BELIEVE .. BELIEVE that miracles happen.Just do .. PLEASE JEH.. JUST ONCE...



Jeh closes his eyes but the only thing that came infront of his eyes was the image of PIYA trying to kill herself.. prepare to die.. must be fate had it all planned, maybe he cheated fate to save her. If he had been late for even a second he would have lost her.watched her die infont of his eyes but he saved her from such a risky situation then why let her die now.. why so early.Alina was right .. h was once blinded by bloodlust but now he had changed for the better.HE had killed his love but what if fate had other plans for him namely Piya.Destiny sets the path for us but in the end we have to make the choices. MAKE YOUR CHOICE JEH ... WHAT'S YOUR CHOICE .. TO SAVE OR TO SURRENDER..?? TO TAKE OR TO FORFEIT .. YOUR COWARDNESS OR A BATTLE..?? A BATTLE FOR FOR YOUR FAMILY.. A BATTLE TO PROVE.. A BATTLE FOR ALL .. A BATTLE AGAINST YOURSELF..!!!!?





PRECAP :: WHILE THERE IS AN EFFORT TO TRY TO RESTORE A RELATIONSHIP ...ANOTHER ONE SHATTERS
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow...kiara beautiful...update...👏

loved dadi's dialouges...panchi shud get her due...😡

plz kiara dear update soon...waiting for abhay pia meeting...😳

t.c. love u...🤗

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