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Kiara

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Posted: 13 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: Deepi20
Super awesome update! So Jeh saved Piya! Thank god! Now poor Abhay will live with the guilt that he drove Piya to suicide! I honestly can't help but blame Panchi! She knew Abhay and Piya were in love but she still married Abhay for her selfish reasons.🤢 Eagerly waiting for the next update! Continue soon 😊

yeah...!!!

he'll live ...

I HATE PANCHI..!!

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Kiara

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Posted: 13 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: missglam

hey dear dat was awesome update!!
but very painful. .
its heart wrenching to see abhiya like this. . & its all becoz of dat birdie. . Dis girl makes me mad. .
Awww. . Jeh has cum. . I'm just loving this guy. .
Eagerly for pia's meeting wid every1 after the leap. .

and yes no need to thank me... waise bhi yeh sab maine apni selfishness ke liye kiya...warna itni wonderful update kaise milti! so no problem... Hehe

Thanx for the pm
continue soon
tc

thanks sweethrt..

yeah...

and she makes me lose my cool...

uh .. uh.. uh.. uh.. uh...😉

lolz

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Kiara

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Posted: 13 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: shah10
wow..love it

😊

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Kiara

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Posted: 13 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: Selinapiya
aaww...Piya😭😭
Awesome...
update soon...

😊 yeah will

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Kiara

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Posted: 13 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: Viviliciousgirl
Oh God...this is so heartbreaking!💔 beautiful update! waiting for your next pm

😊ohh...!!

won't pm m blocked..!! ill post on ur wall..!!!

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Mounika sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#206

thanx for the awesome update dear

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Kiara

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Posted: 13 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: anuraag111
hey
i liked pascha night club
yaar misha ka look tho definetly change hona chahiye i cannot see her like this she came as a doc in cid for few she was good at that time
i too support for some colour to raichands
if panchi really became thin then jeans is fine

1 point for pasha so now pasha is leading...

den mishoo ka look change

and color for raichand warna baby pia par kya asar hoga...

yeah panchi ell bhi thin but in these episodes i feel T is not d fashion victm as everyone says but panchi is ... her tops like give away her bulging figure .. geez

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chandrima

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Posted: 13 years ago

#208

Pasha is good..i like herbal too...and yes some colors to Raichands..sweetie..its your story, so we will like it the way u will represent it..it all depends on u. Am sure u will come out will wonderful chapters ahead.

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heena mehta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: iceprincesinluv
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i m loving this new pia in ur ff
⭐️⭐️Do you want Misha's look to be really changed..?? nt xactly, i love her d way she is

⭐️⭐️Do you want Abhay remorsing over his decision to leave Piya..?? ofcourse i wantr him to remorse!!

⭐️⭐️Our little Pia's room ... want it all princessy .. with fairytales all over and totally pink with fairytale pics all over the wall or you want Pia to sped more time in her parents room..?? i want her to b in her room only n more close to abhay!!

⭐️⭐️Raichands dress colorfully or totally black..?? I opt for colorfully..colorfully

⭐️⭐️Panchi jeans and stuff or traditional..?? And guys in my FF she has lost weight ... otherwise i'll have a fit imagining her .. phew...nt much interested how wl u paint her charcter!! bt want her to b mix of all stuffs!!

⭐️⭐️ACP Pradhumanyan,Daya,Muskaan and Abhishek to enter ... in next update temme if keep 'em of throw 'em don't knw, don't bring them in,😕

⭐️⭐️How do u want the bad news to be broken to the Dobriyals.i want them to regret big time for abhay-panchi's marriage.??

⭐️⭐️Do you want Misha and Panchi relationship to go sour..yes i want it a bit.??
hey dear pls don't mind if u find my suggestion rude ny how, they r just suggestion !!
i love ur ff n d way u write it n its always good d way u ask for suggestions
⭐️⭐️And sorry i couldnot update regularly 'cause my personal life is a total mess here and i am really trying to fit in... annoyin ex behind my back bonussed with parents and mission out my social life 'cause of problems .. my lifes a total havoc...hey tk cr of urself dear!!

⭐️SO FAR I GOT ONLIEE 3 COLORS RED FOR PIYA
BLACK FOR ABHAY
BROWN FOR NORMAL

⭐️⭐️yeah and today i will PM form this ID coz the xodramaqueenxo the email id should be confirmed and i din get the confirmation mail so gotta figure dat out too...!!

SORRIEE.. guys i know i sound like a sadu kasus buddhi teacher who is giving us HW when 5 mins are left for our hols to start and what we rlly want to do is enjoyy but what to do my brains are rusted need some good amount of blood to uno bloodify 'em again so that they can function properly

Please add this profile to your PM list to be PM'ed cause i have to go through the list and chek if i have to add anyone like every time i Pm and i end up Pm'ing everyone in my friend list so to avoid that i created a new ID Please add it..!!
xoDramaQueenxo http://www.india-forums.com/member_profile.asp?PF=663717

blocked from sending pms ... why...??

Edited by heena_mehta - 13 years ago

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Kiara

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Posted: 13 years ago

#210

::CHAPTER 4::

Dear Mish,

Thank you!Thank you ki tumne mujhe apne parivaar mein jagah di.Tum meri zindagi mein sirf meri behen nahi balki meri best friend ho.Tum meri sabse badi himmat ho lekin is bar galti se hi sahi tumne mujhe dhoka diya hai.misha mujhe tumse yeh ummeed nahi thi.balki mujhe lagta tha ki tum har kadam mein mera saath dogi.But anyways thanks for all the things you have done and Tahanks for being there for me.

Hamesha Tumhari

Piya Dobriyal

Misha folded the letterand cried.."Why Piya ..?? Kyun tumhe yeh lagta hai ki we donot love you..??we do.. hell yes we do.. you are my baby sister remember.. weish you were here.. everything is a havoc here , dad's worried,mom's shocked and Kunal's searching for you.The brother who once sreseted you is now searchhing for you.. for his little sister... everyone is searching for you Piya where are you..??why did you leave us for a guy who now cares for your elder sister, heck no Piya this is not the Piya i know .. not my detective shetective brave little sister..!! Piya please come back .. Please"

Arnab was shocked.. now he was seriously doubting his parenting skills, was he that bad of a father.. did he never understand his daughters.Why was it that everytime his life got back together in one piece it shattered all over again like a house made out of a pack of cards.he once had a family but he lost that.Piya was his shining star but he lost her too.His thoughts broke as he heard Madhu's mother call him

MADHU'S MOTHER(NANI)

Nani:Piya kahan hai..?? kaise baap ho tum jisse apni bacchi ke barein mein itna bhi pata nahi hai..?beti ghar se gayab hai aur aapko pata tak nahi..!!Kitni pyari bacchi hai.. Ek shaitan ko bhi insaan bananeki kabiliyat hai usme.Agar aaj Piya ki jagah meri Madhu hoti toh... (Madhu interrupts)

Madhu:Maa..! bas bhi kijiye ,hum ekk taraf se poore ppareshan hai aur aap humare pareshani ko bada rahi ho.. Arnab ko Piya ki bohot parwaah hai .. bohot fikr hai par Piya ko yeh lagta hai ki humne usse dhoka diya hai we betrayed her.. omly if she knew how much we love her.. Aaj fir ek baar mujhe apne baccho ko diye hue aazadi par shram aa rahi hai..aise lag raha hai ki maine unhe sahi sanskar nahi diye hai..ek Panchi jisse sabkuch hone ke baad bhi Abhay se shadi karni thi,Misha jisse ladki banna aata hi nahi,Kunal jo samajta hai ki voh aasmaan se utra farishta hai jiske jaisa koi nahi hai aur hum donojinhe poori dehradhun ko pata hue baath pata nahi hai.. kaha choot gaye hum kaha galti hue humse.. (Kunal interrupts)

Kunal:MOM.Piya kisi ke ghar par nahi hai aur kabir ne usse last time apne kamre mein dekha thaand when he went there he saw that she was crying and she was writing something and he thought like it was better to leave her alone after all that she has gone through.And yeah .. kabir's coming here so i better run off and check if she is somewhere like on the railway station or airport or something.

Just as he goes off a butler comes and informs that the police ACP has come.

(ACP PRADYUMAN)

ACP: Mr. Dobriyal apke kehne ke mutabik humne aapki beti ko doondneki poori kosish kar rahe hai.Dehradhun ki adi police force is kaam mein lage hue hai(suddenly his phone starts ringing.)Haan.Oh.My.God. yeh khabar hai.. humein pata nahi kaise classify karein. Vivek,Muskaan aur Daya ko dhyaan se dekne ko kaho agar vahan kuch mil gaya toh humein kuch toh pata chalega.. Dogs ko scen trace karne ko kaho.. WE NEED TO FIND HER SHE IS IMPORTANT(He cuts the call) Mr and Mrs Dobriyal and familyapke liye kuch news hai par usse classify karna aapka kaam hai,humein aapki beti ki gaadi,the same car .. yes the same car you assumed she took plate number UKXX XXX jungle ke paas mili thi .. woh puti tarah se khuli thi .. aapki beti ka sarah samaan usme tha par aapki beti nahi thi .Apki beti ki scent jungle ke taraf jati hue sniff kardi hai.bad news yeh hai ki jis taraf aapki beti raa rahi hai us taraf ek cliff hai.The Anshupati cliff.Dehradhun ka highest cliff aur doosri baat yeh hai ki good news yeh hai ki apke beti ke zinda hone ke chances thodi badh gaye hai...Aap log mujhe call kariye filaal mein site par jaa raha hoon.. BE BRAVE DOBRIYALS.

Madhu:Meri bacchi.. Koi bura kaam mat karna..

Arnab:(In serious thought)

Misha:Piya ..!! Thank God..!!Thank God for the hope ..! Thank God..!!

Kunal:Please come home baby sister.I promise main aapko pareshan nahi karunga ,apni behen manunga but please come back.

KHURANA MANSION

A man is shown,well built may be in his twenties and besides him there is a woman and she is consoling(or comforting .. i cannot get the perfect word here sorrie..) him.There is another girl present there around 19 years old.She is standing next to the guy yeah the same "forest savior" and trying to heal Piya's wounds while he is caressing Piya's head trying to soothe her pain.

Guy:you brought her here,for heavens sake Jeh you brought a human here.. are you crazy.. no ones supposed to know we live here and you brought a human here. Where are her parents,her family..?OMG do you realise that they might be searching for her..??

Jeh:(interrupts)Bro.. chill,She is a humsn but being around her reminded me of myself,as a same feeble humanconfused with decisions,searching for my deatiny till now i never used to care for a human forget trying to save them but today watching her prepare to die made me feel like i was commiting a crime.. like something was being torn away from me like my world was shattering.. she was sad distressed and when the police cam searching for her it was like she was begging me to take her away.. to not return her to her family, an aura of betayal surrounded her and i know what it feels like being betrayed by whom you love.. her perfect blue aura mixed with a burgundy one was tainted with a bluegreen and and a charcoalgray one,bro she was in trouble,didnot want to return to the place she came from.We need to help her out,atleast try to.. bro please.. once for me...

The guy:Did i ever say no to you.. all this while from the day i changed you till today you never asked me for anything great and today you asked me for something huge and if this gives you happiness i will try my best to help you.(The guy moves towards Piya and places his hand on her forehead)

The guy:before you try to heal a person get to know the past and then your decision.(He closes his eyes and holds her forehead and then goes through her memorieshis facial expression changes from regret to sadness then after many others he finally says) Piya ..!! I have finally found you..!!

::IMAGES::

INSPECTOR MUSKAAN

INSPECTOR FREDRICKS

INSPECTOR DAYA

INSPECTOR ABHIJEET

Will Arnab manage to save Piya..?

Will the Dobriyal wish come true..?

Who is "the guy"..? How does he know Piya..?

Is Piya in safe hands or will her past affterct the Khurana's decision..?

Will Jeh be able to save Piya..?

Jeh attached to Piya..?

NOTES::(Back with my teachergiri... bad habits die hard)

AURAS

BLUE:love,peace of mind,represents spiritualityand religion,The most calming color indicates serenity with healing,hope,friendship,physical protection,creativity,patience,wisdom,peace,loyalty,assists with sleep,represents inner light guidance.

BURGUNDY:Wealth, Success, prosperity, and elegance. Unconscious beauty

BLUE GREEN:Spiritual healing. Depression or sadness.

CHARCOAL GRAY: depression

Do you want more involvement of ACP and gang..??

Edited by iceprincesinluv - 13 years ago