|AbhIya| ~~BEAUTIFULLY DEAD~~ | Pg 107 update. :) - Page 18

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shivanirajput

loved the update
i hope pia won't die
update soon


glad u liked it ...
naa she will become something more xcitin .. wait and watch ...
ssshhh... ahhh..!! she'll become a vampy ..yaay finalllyyy..!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: heena_mehta

hey dear dat was awesome update!!

bt again it was painfull!!
n i m reli happy u didn't come wid dat scene where abhay imagine panchi as pia, coz there marriage enough for us...actually its heart wrenching to see abhay wid panchi...i hate her!!
plss update soon n thanx for d pm


hi..!!
after a long time huh..!!
aww ino dats so sad..!! btw one or two more updates den supa fun..!! 😛 or maybe this update wic is cumin in an hour or so caould be fun..!!!
i'm currently thankin my stars(searchin... if i hav any...) that i rejected dat idea.. phew..!! *removin (
sweat not that i have any) from my forehead*)
same thoughts sis even i hate her..!!
yeah .. just typin it out...
apna farz hai yaar..!!
ttyl
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Posted: 13 years ago
::CHAPTER 3::



RAICHAND MANSION
Abhay was about to lie on the couch when he suddenly screamed "PIYA NOO...!!" It was like he got a visionof something.Panchi was shocked and at the same time confused.Abhay didnot care about Panchi, PIYA was his PRIORITY now.

ABHAY: Piya .. noo..!! Get away from there.Piya get away... G-E-T A-W-A-Y.

FOREST

PIYA: kyun Abhay..kyun sunnu mein tere baath..Kaun ho tum mere..Kis haq se keh rahe ho ki main yaha se hat jaun..?? Kaho na Abhay.. Kaho na...



RAICHAND MANSION

ABHAY: Piya vahan se hat jao...Move from there..Tum main tumara kaun hoon Piya..tum jaanti ho ki humare beech rishta hai voh is duniya ke rishton so jyada keemti hai aur mehatva hai ..tum



FOREST

PIYA: (piya cuts him off and says)Hai nahi tha Abhay.THA ab kuch nahi hai .. Kuch nahi.Tum Panchi ke pathi ho mere jija ho aur main is rishte ko ...



RAICHAND MANSION

ABHAY: (Abhay sensing that this conversation was not helping him make her change her mind says)PIYA..!! Piya hum shaanti se baath kar sakte hai na...tum filal us pahad se niche utro .. get away from the edge Piya..!!



FOREST

Piya: Goodbye Abhay,And THANKYOU..Thankyou kyonki tumne mujhe pyaar karna sikhaya...Thankyou isliye kyon ki tumne mujhe dad se milaya...Thanks for saving me a million times ABHAY..Thanks for betraying me..Thanks for hurting me..Thanks for everything..!!!!
Saying that piya cuts her wrist turns her back towards the cliff therefore her back is now facing the cliff.. and falls down...!!


::SCREEN FREEZES::

RAICHAND MANSION

ABHAY: Piya noo...!!! *Abhay collapses .. first he falls on his knees kneeling then gradually sits down on the floor.*


Panchi is shocked that Abhay-Piya had a telepathic collection..shocked to see ABHAY RAICHAND WEAK...shocked to see him SCARED...for the first time she saw Abhay care for someone wholeheartedly and that someone was her sister Piya ,her baby sister.

ABHAY: "She's gone..!! She's dead..!! All because of me ..! I killed her..!! I am her murderer.. Why can't i always find love..??Why do people i love go away..?? WHY ...??WHY ..?? WHY..??"

Panchi was shocked to hear what Abhay was saying..

PANCHI: Abhay kya keh rahe ho..!!

ABHAY : She is dead Panchi,She jumped off a cliff.. She's dead..!!



FOREST

JEH POV
The night is dark and a young lad or did he just look young is shown .. mysterious and utterly handsome that would perfectly describe his features.He caught the scent of the strange creation as he watched her jump,her scent was mixed upwith sadness,pain and anger a very common mix and why did it bother him.He never cared for a human life before,no scent has ever distractedhim from the basic bloodlust to dominate and consume.Her body seemed frail and fragile again the overpowering wind that threathened to blow her away.Each time she took a step towards the edge getting closer and closer causing the rocks to crumble.. a sharp sqeezing pain tore at my chest.No it could'nt be my heart for my heart was cold and dead and yet these confusing emotions threathened to overflow. It was too much!I had to capture this demon angel and demand to findout why she affected me so much that i cannot let the creature be destroyed.I cannot let this feeling go un named and uncontrolled.. i cannot let it dgo .. i cannot let her go...



PIA POV
i could'nt care less what everyone thought or said anymore,death was my freedom.. death was my family..death was the only one who wanted to be my lover and I should embrace him.The feeling was glorious ,the world bowed at my feet as i stood high up there,there was the irony that i would take another fall in my life.But i was ready ... or so i thought ... Holding my arms out in the pose of surrender, I arched my back and leaned off the cliff.My world tipped over,my toes were still touching the edge of the cliffbut my body was parallel to the ground now.Before there was enough time for the wind to hit my face I felt something encircle my waist and jerk me back up ...





PLEASE BE FREE TO COMPLAIN ABOUT SOMETHING OR TELL ME TO CHANGE ANYTHING OR INFORM ME ABOUT ERRORS COZ I TEND TO MAKE A LOT OF MISTAKES... IF I WRITE SOME PARTS IN HINDI THERE ARE BOUND TO BE MISTAKES IN IT

I DIN UPDATE WITH COLOR COZ I DON'T HAVE COLORS FOR ALL THE CHARACTER EXCEPT BLACK OR A DARK COLOR FOR ABHAY AND RED FOR PIYA .. AS SUGGESTED BY MY DEAR FRIENDS YESTERDAY

A SPECIAL THANKS TO MISSGLAM WHO HELPED ME OUT TODAY

phew ... update done...
people colors for the characters please ...!!
Picture u think is suitable for little PIA

NOTE PIA(P-I-A) is little Pia as in Abhay uff Danish and Panchi's Daughter
PIYA(P-I-Y-A)is Piya Khurana ... Abhays's ex-lover..ex-dobriyal family member and currently a Khurana

i forgot what elso to write will post as a note later... coz if i sit to think i will delay the update..!!

good night
tc
cya

xoxo
Kiara
Edited by iceprincesinluv - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey...beautiful and fab update...loved it...

pia's condition made me cry...the way she jumped was breathtaking...i cant imagine my abhiya this way 😭

update soon...i have send buddy request...pm me wen u update..thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: peehu24

hey...beautiful and fab update...loved it...


pia's condition made me cry...the way she jumped was breathtaking...i cant imagine my abhiya this way 😭

update soon...i have send buddy request...pm me wen u update..thanks for pm


thanks.glad you liked it..!!!
aww..!! me to but i want a break from the stuff dats goin on tv..!!

acceptrd..!! thanks btw..

bye
good 9t
tc
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey dear i reli like ur name!
K , coming 2 update, it was fantastic, written beautifully
I don't knw bt i reli wanted this, abhay to realise dat wat he did was a sin, he cn't take decisions of others life at his own n i av no sympathy 4 dat panchi, ur ff makes me go high on emotions!
Thanx 4 d pm n do update soon
Edited by heena_mehta - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey
nice one but cannot see my fav pair abhiya like this
if u have time then post some pics related to the story then it will more attractive i dont much about all these
so sorry if i hurted u by saying this
continue soon...
thanx for the pm
bye
take care
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: heena_mehta

hey dear i reli like ur name!
K , coming 2 update, it was fantastic, written beautifully
I don't knw bt i reli wanted this, abhay to realise dat wat he did was a sin, he cn't take decisions of other life at his own n i av no sympathy 4 dat panchi, ur ff make me go high on emotions!
Thanx 4 d pm n do update soon


thanx..!!
i guess he deserved it .. and he soo has to stop takin decisions for other maana hai ki sabse bada hai but eventhough...!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
😭😭😭pia's condition made me cry
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dolma.rose

😭😭😭pia's condition made me cry

reallie..??🥱
Edited by iceprincesinluv - 13 years ago

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