FF:-ENTWINED SOULS{maaneet)ch-18 page-37 Oct9/11 - Page 11

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lively-piia

beautiful n lovely update...

but i do feel maan lv will hurt geet no matter wat...i hope it became the medicine tooo...
thanx 4 pm...
continue...
chao

Yes ur really right he is gonna hurt her
no matter what that will happen
but will he hurt her more or love her more is something that
i need to write and u need to wait for
thanks for commenting
😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maanhar

Geet aur Maan alag horahe hai... kab uss bechari ka kya hoga??? phir kab milenge dono?? I am getting restless, so plzz update soon ha...


update is on its way
and yes something similar gonna happen
so u just gonna wait a lil bit for it 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
CHAPTER-11
IT'S NOT
GOODBYE
part 2
Mr Abhimanyu Khurrana welcome, what brings you here?
Abhimanyu just smiled back and answered in a firm tone nothing much
Mr Handa your daughter Geet
Before Abhimanyu could complete his sentence Mr Handa spoke
what Geet what did that filth do this time is she still alive
Abhimanyu just clinched his fist in anger but tried to control himself
Mind your language Mr.Handa
she hasn't done anything and to your utter disappointment she is still alive despite your continuous attempts
Mr Handa just laughed evilly yeah yeah so she is alive and i guess she is back too must say that girl is something always survives
Abhimanyu just glared what kind of evil he is trying to kill a harmless innocent kid and no guilt at all
So where is the little filth
Mr Handa said while making a drink for himself
Abhimanyu just lost his control as he screamed Mr Handa please watch your language
Abhimanyu's loud voice brought Maan and Geet out of their world of happiness Maan understood something might be terribly wrong because his dad never loosed his cool so easily
Maan just ran out of the room
Making geet stay with her mom- you stay here Geet i will be back, Geet just nodded little scared
But as he reached down the staircase he heard a loud sound of a vase crashing down it came out from the room he was in with Geet a moment ago
Fear gripped him as he rushed back towards the room only to find geet struggling to get out of the grip of someone he was trying to strangulate her she chooked and coughed as she tried speaking " aah Maannn"
Didn't i tell you to never come back geet now face it
I will kill you right here
brij please she uttered but his hands were just chocking depriving her of the breaths that now only came out as gasps
Maan just rushed towards them as he held Brij from back and just pulled him away from Geet with all his force
The force did make brij to lose his balance he stumbled back and before he could balance himself
Maan just punched him across his face the impact of the punch was so hard that brij blacked out
Maan just breathed heavily as he turned towards Geet
But the sight just scared the hell out of him
She was lying there unconscious her face had lost all her colour
Dad he screamed while he rushed towards her
Geet Geet utho speak something
Geet dekh main hoon Maan aankhein kholo na
He hugged her as if he was scared to loose her
Rano just tried to move but felt down she couldn't even drag herself towards her daughter
As she heard Maan's scream
Abhi just came running to the room followed by Mr Handa
What is going on here? Mr handa screamed
Abhi just picked Geet in his arms not caring to reply to Mr.Handa at all he just pushed him aside
And rushed towards his car
Maan ran after him tears were rolling down his eyes
Dad Geet thik toh hai na
Usse kuch hoga toh nahi na
Abhi just tried to assure him but he was scared himself
Maan just kept on holding Geet in his arms
Murmuring slowly in her ears
Nothing can happen to you Geet nothing at all
The moment they reached hospital
Abhimanyu picked her up in his arms and rushed in
Doctors just started treating her
Were Maan and Abhi waited outside?
Maan's restlessness knew no bounds
he was angry this was what he was afraid of
but was he not lucky to be there when these all happened what if he was not there what if no one was there when she was struggling to get out of brij's grip her painful and struggling face just kept on appearing in his mind
No no he screamed
Abhi just rushed to his side
Maan kya hua
Dad please I cannot allow her to stay with them they will kill her
We were there this time par kal kya dad what if they to do something again
Abhi just tried to calm him down but somewhere even he knew Maan was right
He has to do something for both Geet and her mother
And that was when Maan asked him
Maan-Dad can i ask you for something
Abhi-Yes son
Maan-dad can we not live in Handa haveli with Geet
Maan's question seemed really innocent but his question itself answered Abhimanyu's all problems he just smiled
Precap-What are you doing in my house Brij roared
Thank you to all those who took time out to hit the like button and comment on the update
Its only coz u all that i come back and update this ff
A big hug to u all lovely ppl
And yup happy raksha bandhan too
do leave ur comments and hit the like button if you like the update
thank u all
love you
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Posted: 13 years ago

love the way Maan and his dad care for Geet

superb update
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Posted: 13 years ago
LOVED IT
Abhimanyu and Maan are just AMAZING
poor little Geet!
gosh Maan and his smart ideas xD
cont soon
thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Maan, my sweet little hero!!! please be there with Geet always...
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update...maan simple statement solved his dad problem...
d father son duo is too sweet...
maan is nt only in love but some hw i feel more than possessive nor say rather obbsses kind of... i mean it is turning out to be like dat only...chal let see hw u shape up ur story...
gud luck 4 dat ...want to see more of maan n geet cute scenes...
do continue..
thanx 4 pm..
chao
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update good that maan hit that brij continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
maan & his dad such amazing
& caring toward geet
i hope she okay
superb update
love it
cont soonnn
ty 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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