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Posted: 13 years ago
#91
Hello people here is the next part am still writing
so may be this chapter will be updated in two parts
hope u all will enjoy reading it though i am dissappointed by the less number of likes 😭😭
but I am really greatful to the people who really liked and commented on the earlier parts
will be eagerly waiting for ur responses
so here it is
Chapter-10
It's not goodbye
The day just passed by and the moments of separation were nearing us
I was not happy how can I be happy when Geet was going back to that filthy place where people were just waiting to hurt her, no one cared no one cared for his angel there...but I promise this distance won't keep me from being with you I will always protect you
Maan she screamed with joy see dadi got me a new dress
Isn't it pretty she said twirling around
Yes I giggled at her childishness
Why are you smiling, do i look funny
No No Geet i tried assuring her but to my vain that cute anger on her face made me smile more
What is it Maan please batao na I am not looking good in it she said pouting out making a sad face
Seeing her getting upset I just rushed to her side
Geet you are looking beautiful i swear
Then why were you smiling she asked...
Because you are the Cutest and the sweetest one i pulled her cheek then kissed her nose
She wacked my hand away in mock anger
And walked away
she turned back after a while you are the bestest cutest adorest and all the all the ests...she said with huge smile
I laughed you know Geet these words do not exist in any dictionary
How can it maan any dictionary can't define a strange creature like you and she broke into a huge laugh
I frowned for a while but then i couldn't stop from laughing myself and then our laughter filled in the air filling the atmosphere with our pure happiness
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Geet and I sat in the car as dad started driving towards Geet's home
We were holding hands
I remembered how scared geet was when she told us about her so called family
Fear gripped me every second she was going back where those monsters live
No one would be there
I gripped her hand more strongly as I felt the car slow down and enter a huge gate
Handa haveli those were the words inscribed on the entrance
Geet was happy it was evident on her face
She missed her mom and nothing mattered for her more than meeting her
I remembered when i asked her why you want to go back Geet
And she replied for mom maan I know no one cares for me there they don't like me too
but then i just think would mom leave me if she would have been in my place and my heart answers no so even i won't leave her there Maan no matter how they treat me i will be with mom
I was so proud of her my angel in every sense she was a so childish but at times i can see the maturedness that the circumstances have thought her
We got down the car I was still holding Geet's hand my grip probably was to strong on her because I saw her pained expression but nevertheless i decided not to lessen my grip as if she will vanish the moment I leave her
Abhimanyu just noticed how hard Maan's grip was around Geet's hand he glared at him at once and roared Maan let go of her hand now...
But nothing affected Maan
He pulled her more close as he nodded for a no
Maan Abhimanyu roared again and pulled Geet out of his grip
Geet...Maan screamed his voice filled with agony
Geet just cried as she freed herself from Abhimanyu and hugged Maan
Maan cannot hurt me dad please she insited with tears in her eyes
Abhimanyu was just stunned his son was hurting her but still Geet was happy being with him
Abhimanyu just looked at the young lovers somewhere being scared from there intense emotion
Let's go in Maan and Geet Abhimanyu just said
Maan just nodded Geet's warm embrace just calmed him down
He held her hand this time in a firm but a gentle grip and mumbled a soft sorry to her too
Geet just nodded her head in negative as if assuring he has not hurt her
They made their way inside the handa Haveli
The house was beautifully decorated classic touches antique pieces
Geet made sure that Maan saw every corner of the house she was so exited
Maan paid equal attention not missing any words she said and then suddenly she grabbed his hand and pulled him upstairs let's see momMaan
Maan just happily followed her as he quickly turned back towards his dad and said I will be back dad
Abhimanyu just smiled as he turned towards the maid who was approaching him and asked her to inform Mr Kuldeep Handa about his presence
Maan and Geet entered a dark room
Mom geet voiced gently look I am back she said as she approached towards the centre of room were a bed was lying
The condition of this room was really bad as compared to outside Maan noticed the how ill treated they were in there own house
Maan come along geet said holding his hand firmly
Meet mom she said as he made him sit near the bed
A lifeless body was lying on the bed she was completely paralytic but her pain and helplessness were quiet evident in her eyes
Maan meet mom and Mom meet Maan my Maan Geet said putting extra emphasis on "my"
which made me chuckle
Maan just bent down and kissed Rano's cheeks hello mom he said with equal enthusiasm
Rano tried to smile but couldn't her lips just moved a bit as she tried mouthing blessings to Maan
Maan just held her Hand and put it on his head as if understanding what she wants
Rano's eyes twinkled as he adored him
Geet just suddenly said
Ye kya mom
Maan ko dekhte hi aap mujhe bhul gayi
Maan smiled and teased her haan you are right after all main hoon hi best hai na ma
Geet just glared at him and started fighting nahi I am the best Maan she loves me more
Rano's eyes just twinkled more as a tear escaped her eyes it was for the first time she saw her daughter so lively and happy
She felt so helpless when she saw her being abused and bashed all the while even if her daughter tried to hide her pain but it was evident in her eyes
But today she smiled a true smile it was
Rano just looked at both of them how the lifeless room has been filled with happiness in just a while, How Maan just came and made a relation with her
Rano just silently prayed to her babaji
Precap- well the chapter continues
too much drama to come up will update it either tonight or may be tommorrow night but till then plz hit the like button and do comment on the update
it's the only inspiration which will make me
write more
waiting to read ur comments eagerly now 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: fullyfaltu

that was heart touching...

thank u 😊
I am glad u felt the emotions
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
it was overwhelming
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94
awww i love maan and geet's relationship!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
beautiful n lovely update...
but i do feel maan lv will hurt geet no matter wat...i hope it became the medicine tooo...
thanx 4 pm...
continue...
chao
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
Geet aur Maan alag horahe hai... kab uss bechari ka kya hoga??? phir kab milenge dono?? I am getting restless, so plzz update soon ha...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
wow nice FF...
luved the updates... is really beautiful and touching..
plzz add me onto ur pm list...
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

why cant they take geet's mom along with them to KM ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
that to touching
love it
yu pinned down perfectly
ty 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting for an update

continue soon

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