FF:-ENTWINED SOULS{maaneet)ch-18 page-37 Oct9/11 - Page 8

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Posted: 14 years ago
#71
After knowing the whole story I really don't want Geet to go back to her family😭 plzzz usse kahi aur bhejdo but not to her cruel family...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#72
OMG! Geet's fam is sooo evil!
Love Maaneet's relationship!
awesome part
loved it!
cont soon!
thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
oh God geet family are devil
awesome part
love it
cont soonnn
ty 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
awesome ... superb ... loved part 8 ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

sorry 4 d late comment , was out of town ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: angelic_cute

<font color="#ff3399" size="6" face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif">yiepeee me first to comment</font>

<font color="#993300" size="6" face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif">its really a bitter truth😭😭</font>
<font color="#ff3366" size="6" face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif">loved the way maan promises to take care of geet🤗</font>

<font color="#cc3300" size="6">do continue soon</font>
<font size="6" color="#ff6600">bye</font>
<font size="6" color="#ff6600">tc</font>


Glad u liked it thanks for commenting 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: maanhar

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="2">After knowing the whole story I really don't want Geet to go back to her family😭plzzz usse kahi aur bhejdo but not to her cruel family...</font>


I know the family is there to create problems
But trust me they are gonna play an imp role in making there love mature 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#77
[FONT=Verdana]Thank u all For liking and commenting
I am Typing the next part will post tonight or tomorrow
But thank u all seriously ur Response made me so over whelmed

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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
Chapter-9
❤️❤️"My priceless Possession"❤️❤️
She opened her eyes to find herself wrapped into his arms, the comfort and warmth of his love and care spread throughout her he gave her everything a new family dad dadi and him too she smiled and kissed his cheek she has never felt these ways for any one he was her priced possession. The one she will never let go he was like the fresh breath in her dull life he was the light through which all her world became bright...
She smiled yet again and swiftly tried getting up from the bed without disturbing him
She was about to walk away from the bed when Maan held her wrist and pulled her back
kaha ja rahi thi tum
Ahmm kahi nahi maan...bas dadi ke pass
Hmm dadi ke pass mujhe utha nahi sakthi thi iss tarah chup chap ja rahi thi agar main uthta aur tumhe apne pass nahi pata toh pata hai kitna pareshan hota
She smiled aap pareshan kyu hote aap ek baar bulate toh mein wapas bhagte huey aajati
Sach Geet
Haan Maan
Par jab tum yaha se chali jaogi toh wapas kaise aaogi geet he asked with sad face
Ahmm main aa jaungi Maan aap jab bhi bulaoge aaungi aur agar nahi aa payi toh aap aa jana ok
Maan smiled and said ok
Geet just pulled Maan out of the bed ab chalo na Dadi ke pass jana hai
Ok ok tum chalo mein aata hoon
Thik hai jaldi aana
Maan just stared her retreating figure the smile faded the moment she stepped out of the room and all the talks returned to his head
He was so worried how he can let her go in that house where people are looking for an opportunity to hurt her...
He restlessly started moving around room
How can he let her go
But her mother
Questions kept on coming back to his mind
He just got frustrated and threw all the pillows and bedcovers off the bed
Abhimanyu was just walking pass his room when a pillow hit his head
He just picked it up and entered maan's room
Maan he rorared
Kya ho raha hai ye kamre ki kya halat bana di hai aapne
Maan just looked at him his eyes were spitting fire he was so restless and his dad was busy in scolding him for the condition of room
Maan Abhimanyu said again in a loud noise
Tell me what is all this
Maan just picked the flower vase from the near by table and smashed it on the floor
I won't let her go dad
Wo aapne ghar nahi jayegi this her new house she will stay here forever
Geet just came running to the room the noises startled her she looked at the room's condition then at Maan
Maan just turned his head not letting her see his eyes which were filled with anger pain and fear
Maan she calls to him softly
Abhimanyu just looked at her and softened a bit
He picked Geet in his arms and walked out of the room taking her away from maan he knew maan was angry and needed some time to compose himself
Geet did you had your break-fast Abhimanyu asked as he settled Geet on a chair in dining area
She just nodes her head in negative as she wipes of the tears of her eyes
Kha lo ye lo he tries to feed Geet a bite but she just moves back and just mumbles maan
Abhimanyu smiled the little one already started sharing their meals not bad he thought
Geet kha lo Maan aa jayega
Uhuu i won't unhe aane do na
Ok ok Abhi just gives up
Dad
Hmm geet
Wo Maan is he ok kya hua unhe
Abhi just thinks how to answer her question
Dad kya hua
Kuch nahi geet
Wo Maan thoda pareshan hai
Tumhara ghar mil gaya hai na toh use lag raha hai ki tum usse dur chali jaogi
Iss liye itna pareshan tha
Geet just jumps in joy
Mera ghar milgaya dad
Abhimanyu just smiles atleast she is happy he thought but the very next moment his smiles fade as he sees geet crying suddenly
Kya hua Geet (Abhi asks worriedly)
Main nahi jaungi Ghar if it hurts Maan i won't go
She cries bitterly and runs towards maan's room
Abhimanyu was just shocked she won't go to her own house for his son
He was just stunned what kind of the love they shared it's hardly been much time since they knew each other and such intense love...
Geet just enters Maan's room looking for her Maan
Maan Maan... she calls him
But she didn't find him in the room
She moves inside the scattered room Maan she calls again her voice now mixed with her sniffles
But hearing no replies again she got worried she just starts crying when someone pulled her down right behind the bed
She just lands on his lap her eyes were shut tightly
Maan just holds her face in his palms wiping her tears from his thumbs
Kya hua Geet tum kyu ro rahi ho (Maan asks her tears always makes him restless he forgets everything even his pain when he sees her tears)
I won't go home if you are not happy with it
I will never go home
She says between her sobs par aap pareshan matt hona
I cannot leave you kabhi bhi Maan
And she flungs her arms across his neck
Maan just sooths her cradling her back and forth
He realises how difficult it is for her to choose between her mom and him
Par pagli she choosed him because she cannot see him in pain
Geet he says par I wanted to meet Ma
Geet just pulls herself out of his embrace and looks at his face
He just smiles looking lovingly into her eyes
Sach maan You wanna meet Ma
Hmmm
Kyu tum nahi chahti mein miloon
Nahi nahi i want you too she smiles finally
Maan just cups her face toh tumhe ghar jana hoga iss ke liye
She just smiles she really missed her mom
Maan just pulls her back in his embrace
She settles herself comfortably in his embrace
Snuggling close to his neck
He just smiles
Tum mujhe bhulogi toh nahi na Geet
Kabhi nahi maan kabhi nahi
Par aap promise karo aap har roz mujhse milne aaoge
Maan smiled and replied ja tum rahi ho
Aur vaade mein karoo
Hmm Geet mumbles
Promise karo na maan
Acha baba promise
Geet kissed his cheek and maan her forehead
Maan pata hai aap kya ho geet says looking straight into his eyes
Kya
You are my priceless possession "Mere maan"
Maan just chuckled at her claim her words are now engraved in his heart for ever
Precap-
Geet's goes back to her family😭
Maan is still worried
And upar se Brij 😡😡
Thank u all for giving me so many comments and likes i can't express how
happy u all made me
thank u
but please please
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keep on hitting the like button
and do leave your valuable comments
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so give me loads of comments
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and I will give u big updates😆😆
lol lil selfish na
but i love reading ur comments kya karu
Love u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
yiepeee me first

TRULY LOVED IT
WEN GEET SAY U R MY PRICELESS POSSESSION "MERE MAAN"
BUT PRECAP IS SCARY
WAT WILL HAPPEN TO GEET WEN SHE GO BACK
ME TOO WORIED AS MAAN
DO CONTINUE SOON
THANKS FOR PM
BYE
TC
LUV YOU
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80

FOR UPDATING SUCH A LOVELY PART...
Edited by angelic_cute - 13 years ago

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