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Posted: 14 years ago
#91
Hola people, shocked to see me back so soon ?? Well don't be coz after this you might see me after June only I guess...going on a longg hiatus 😆 so I thought why not go on a happy note and give an update before I leave...in fact this was an unexpected update...

It is written as a part of Blog-a-Ton...and today was the submission date...here you can have a look at my blog too if you wish...here is the link :)

https://duskndawn-fatima.blogspot.com/

So without further ado here is the update...hope you like it!!


POST #5


"As the rain drops caress my soul, let them caress yours too,

Let your guards down and enjoy the heavenly pleasure
of soaking in contentment and glee,
Gathering happy memories with you and giving way to more,
Letting your mistakes and past flow and purify you to the core,
Enjoy this wonderful weather...
With a smile and joy in your eyes like I do!"



The December rains always leave me in a trance, heavy rainfall accompanied by snowfall later mesmerizes me as the weather is considerably below and beautiful and that adds to the unending expanse of scenic beauty as romance is in the air.


Unlike other days, today I'm sitting by the window pane and enjoying the pleasant and exotic beauty of nature contemplating how there was a time when I freely twirled and swirled in the rains and soaked my soul and was the most boisterous girl in the locality, but now I just admire and enjoy the beauty silently just like a demure soul. It is not that I'm a shy person or that melancholy has hit me oft recently it's just I'm observing and looking at life through a different angle. I'm not ignorant but an observant, "Joys and sorrows are a part and parcel of life, one sleeps whilst the other is awake!" I learnt this from him I learnt a lot from him. He showed me the true meaning of love, concern and friendship. When people sympathized with me, he was empathetic to me. He was like the light in darkness and penetrated my abode with ease when others found it crooky. And though we may be apart, we are very much together.

"Twirling and swirling in the rain,

Drenching my soul,

A lone tear escapes...

I wonder and let out a sigh."

Somewhere, same time he was walking through crooked lanes and narrow roads and enjoying the ethereal beauty of nature, he was not much of a person who admired nature but since the advent of her in his life he gained joy even in the smallest of things. Children danced and giggled in the rains, vendors sold their stuff each and everything was peaceful amidst the chaos. He felt like a free bird, raring and exuberant exploring the world and a thousand Watt smile lingered on his face remembering the words, "Hey, Mayank you walking with an umbrella in these rains? I know its an absurd question to ask but God you seriously don't know how to savor such a beautiful moment!" Nupur's words rang loudly in his mind.


With that he folded his umbrella and was contented covering the further journey soaking himself completely. He imagined Nupur dancing in the rains and urging him to join her; the one girl who taught him to enjoy small moments of life despite the fact being a little depressed herself at times. She was really an enigma to him, and there she called him a mystery waiting to unfold. A lone tear escaped his eyes just remembering those beautiful moments!

-Fatima

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Edited by Escapist - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#92
You never surprise me :(
So thought of surprising my sweet dear stupid friend 😛 wid my comment 😊
That ws beautiful :)
You describe nature so beautifully... I cant believe you...actually I can't believe that this matured writer is my crazy friend :) Tht ws ethereal! U have beauty to write! Keep writin and Keep smilin :)

May god bless you
Take care :)
Love you !!

Edited by -sam- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#93
hiii
awesome
loved it
2 good
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#94
hey fatima...
loved your ff...even though i read only MG ff...yet i ditched my preferences for once and i am glad to inform you that i wasn't disappointed...
u have written it beautifully...though they are quite short <pouts>
anyways continue soon and do add me in your PM list..if u follow any...


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Posted: 14 years ago
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A.A Fatima,

It was nice update dear,

Everyone of us can always teach & learn the things from others. No matter how insignificant a person looks but they might teach u something worth the life.

Mayank & Nupur are struggling in their life in different style but both give each other something special to cherish.

Take Care

Saba

Originally posted by: -shabnoor-



Hey Saba,

walekum asalam,

It was good to see you here you know...glad that you read all the parts and liked them too !
Wow that was quite an analysis you see...though it was a short one it says all that needs to be 😊
Thnx

Glad you liked it dear...and hope to see you here often !
Sure, will try my best as I like ur writing style

Take Care,
Fatima

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Posted: 14 years ago
#96
beautifully written one...cnt soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#97
Your pieces are soulful, Fatima. I'm extremely honored to be in your acquaintance, and I find your works to be completely surreal. This piece is again a very well written one from you, crisp and eloquent. You never mention the core reason of the situations of your protagonists, it is beautifully hypothetical all the time. You get the drift, right?

Mayank and Nupur got problems, okay, who doesn't!? They complete each other, heal each other's wounds effectively but for some reason, they aren't together. Soulful and profound, okay, really.

P.S. Pardon me, I do, in fact take a lot of time to get back to you. :|

Kankshita
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Posted: 14 years ago
#98
@ Everyone:

Thanks a lot and glad that you guys loved the post...I'm not replying to each and everyone individually owing to lack of time...but I'm really thankful that you guys took time out and read this piece of work and appreciated it!

I'll update the next post in this series soon :)

Take Care,
Fatima
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Posted: 14 years ago
#99
Symphony of the silent night !

(Post # 6)


It was a cool night after a scorching day, she was sitting by the sea face on the concrete pavement eyeing the vast expanse of sea before her. The full moon was in shades of dull light yellow and playing hide and seek with the dark black clouds that adorned the starry sky, the weather was pleasant after the city was hit by showers an hour or so back... She sat there hugging her knees resting her chin on them. She seemed to be tranquil on the front but was feeling a mess inside, the silent winds sent shrills down her spine resurrecting the buried pain and emotions and a tear trickled from the corner of her eye making its way down her cherry cheeks clouding her eyes, yet she sat unmoved lost in her own reverie.


Sitting on a lone bench,
Eyeing the splendid sea...
The gushing sound of waves,
Brings back some memories to me !

The ardour of rains,
And the calmness of breeze,
Makes me want to believe...
You too care for me !

On days when I fear,
I wish you were there to hold me...
But all I can do is...
Hold back my tears still loving thee.

Neither can I deny,
Nor can I accept,
Yet at times like these...
My heart wishes you too loved me !


Breaking from her trance she realized they were just like the shore and the sea; neither can they be together nor apart but at some point they do meet and at times, wait is the only hope you have. Thinking so she let out a sigh and gathered herself, she was a strong girl and she had to be one for them...she could just not loose hope and cry...maybe love was not meant to be but friendship forever! Saying so to herself she walked home with a smile though her eyes had a different tale to tell.

-Fatima

P.S: Hope you guys liked it, please press the like button and if possible drop in your valuable views ! Thanks a lot
Edited by Escapist - 13 years ago
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hiii
beautiful
loved it
mindblowing
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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