Originally posted by: Savage
Fatima!
I hadn't read post seven, you were right. Well, okay - maybe figuring that out through your massive number of Likes would have been difficult. Seriously lady, you are better off in blogger. I think people have the wit and passion for reading quality there more, naturally. :)
The last two chapters are lyrical. Besides, I think I have read these two more like a story themselves, dissociated from the rest of the posts. Now then, it is like poetry, okay post seven is poetry but so is post eight. The flow of the former made me envious, I haven't in the whole of I-F read from a better poet, honestly and the latter was exquisite, absolutely eloquent a sentiment masqueraded by yours words. Or were they the words and the detailing you managing even in this teensy paragraph? I dunno, really.
Wondrous read!
-Savage
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