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Kankshita

@thegameison

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#71

Uh, it was not very comprehensive for me in the beginning, this vignette is dissociated all the way, and I was trying to recapitulate the previous happenings which was a waste.

Alright, so - you've been long on a hiatus, I hope you write more often now. And you already do know how much I admire your skill of writing and your flabbergasting use of words, some really run over my head! Uh, hands down - this was mesmerizing and totally simple. I shall be looking forward to reading more from you and will try to write you my comments sooner the next time.

Thanks for the PM!

-Kankshita

Edited by -Kanky- - 14 years ago

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-sam-

@-sam-

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#72

RES U KNOW I CONNECTED!!!

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tanu

@Armu4eva

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Posted: 14 years ago

#73

Wohhaa.. every update is a revelation.. loved it..!

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@spln

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#74

*reserved*

I barely and finally did make it back home but I need to get all the writing contest details and the likes sorted out before I can get to this - sorry for the delay...? But you can be sure I'll be back here!

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568124

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#75

Fatima,

Nice and concise (Very easy to finish it in a go).

You know I believe if people don't want to resolve anything they seek help from mysticism 😊. I'm not sure how much of it helps in real life.

If there are no black and white...we should at least strive to move towards one. Getting stuck in grey is not an option.

I'm not sure I get their differences entirely...but will keep an eye out for the same.

Great Update Fatima.

Hasini

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#76

beautiful yaar

loved it

thanks 4 da pm

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Jaee Dev Rathore

@JaeeDevRathore

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#77

Fatima, what brilliant work you have here ...

The way you bring out the emotions of the lonely souls and the inner thoughts - the pathetic fallacy with the nature ... The beauty of the night sky everything is just perfect ...

I too am a person who loves the night rather than the day - the calmness of the night sky - everything you wrote, I have experienced ... It felt so good to read what you think ...

You are a fabulous writer and I just loved each and every word of these posts by you special mention to how you involve the nature and the climate in your posts specially in the first post - reminds me of Thomas Hardy's Tess of D'Urbevilles - just in terms of pathetic fallacy being used ... The vivid descriptions are the cherry over the cake ...

Jaee D. Rathore

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Saba

@Eccentric.Being

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#78

res ... will comment when I get time to read it from start

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A.A Fatima,

It was brilliant dear. 1st I had only read & liked poetry posted by U but this is WOW.👏

It's wonderful & enjoyed it very much while reading though it has doleful touch.

Part 1:

Very nice description of surroundings. At different stages of life all of us question the nature.

It had philosophical touch while they were discussing.

Part 2:

Sometime people form the opinion about a person without fully knowing him/her & then they stick to it no matter what comes in the way afterward, they won't change it even if they are wrong. Human being can be the cruelest creature at times.

Part 3:

Quite realistic approach. Life can't always be easy but it won't be distressing always. Happiness & tenderness are part of it.

Part 4:

Their conversation gives an insight in their minds. It's good that they try understand each other.

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I am not good with words so It's just what I could come up with. But I liked it. Please Continue Soon.😊

Edited by serenelove - 14 years ago

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Escapist

@Escapist

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: Armu4eva
Wohhaa.. every update is a revelation.. loved it..!

Good to see you Tanu after long, hope you are doing good!
Well I'm glad that you remembered this thread and din forget about it as its been ages I actually updated it... and the amount I update is also quite meager...but nevertheless happy to see you here :)

Well yes every update is a revelation...isn't life one ??
Glad that you liked it!

Take Care,
Fatima

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Escapist

@Escapist

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: 6thElement
Fatima,

Nice and concise (Very easy to finish it in a go).
You know I believe if people don't want to resolve anything they seek help from mysticism 😊. I'm not sure how much of it helps in real life.
If there are no black and white...we should at least strive to move towards one. Getting stuck in grey is not an option.

I'm not sure I get their differences entirely...but will keep an eye out for the same.

Great Update Fatima.
Hasini

Good to see you here dear and again I must say you remembered this one too, means a lot to me !

This was one heck of a conversation for me you can as I've lost the count as to how many pages have I wasted and also the amount of time and energy but finally the efforts paid of I guess :)

Yep, at least there are times when I take slip into the black and white world when the rainbow pains too much of sunlight is also harsh at times :)
& becomes too much like a mundane activity with nothing new in store for me and that's the time such conversations come up...for a person like me its better to enjoy the normalcy after this period !

There is lot more to come...some of what I don't even know as I rely on time!

Thanks a lot...Glad you liked it ! 😊

Take Care,
Fatima

Edited by -shabnoor- - 14 years ago

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