Chronicles of an Escapist! #1(MN) ||Completed|| - Page 11

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Posted: 14 years ago
BEAUTIFUL UPDATE...
THANKS FOR THE PM
KEEP UPDATING...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful updt fatima

On days when I fear,
I wish you were there to hold me...
But all I can do is...
Hold back my tears still loving thee.

how beautifully you expressed her feelings with simple words..loved it
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

A.A Fatima,

Finally read the post.

It was brilliant dear.

Wondering what really scorched the day, weather or some realization or miss communication.

As for the poem, that was great. simple desire expressed in scenic style.

Take Care,

Saba.


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Posted: 14 years ago
Will read the whole thing once Im done with the darn report. Loved the first chapter.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sorry guys for not updating since ages...but I just realized after ivre commented...that oh this thread needs revival ...so here I'm giving you the update!

Lemme warn you in advance...this series is coming to an end and this is the 2nd last post.. :)
So do drop in your valuable views! Also thanks a ton...to every one who shared their views on the last part...I'm really glad you guys took time out to read and comment...means a lot !

So here it goes
😊

Post#7:

Sitting on the rough rocks,
The harsh wind blows by...
Seeing his love and longing,
The sky too cries...

-Fatima

P.S: This time I thought of just summing up all the feelings that Mayank is going through just in some four lines, a new experiment for me...I thought of 55 words fiction but settled for this. The shorter the sweeter..do give in your valuable views :)

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Edited by Escapist - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Haven't read from beginning!
But this post # 7 is so amazing
filled with deep meanings!
Will read from beginning after studying ;)

Love, Khushi
Xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
well it was short...
but then it summed up everything well...
hope you update soon...

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Posted: 14 years ago

A.o.A Fatima,

Though I love long updates but the way u summed up all in few lines so no complaints there. Totally loved it.

Waiting for last part now.

Take Care,

Saba.

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome one
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Princess_Khushi

Haven't read from beginning!

But this post # 7 is so amazing
filled with deep meanings!
Will read from beginning after studying ;)

Love, Khushi
Xx



Thanks a lot Khushi...Glad you liked, enjoyed and found it meaningful :)
Will surely wait for the rest feedback!

Take Care,
F

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