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Posted: 14 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: ARMAANKSGFAN
beautiful yaar
loved it
thanks 4 da pm

Thanks a lot dear...Glad you liked it :)
Keep Coming by !

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Posted: 14 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: -jaee-
Fatima, what brilliant work you have here ...

The way you bring out the emotions of the lonely souls and the inner thoughts - the pathetic fallacy with the nature ... The beauty of the night sky everything is just perfect ...

I too am a person who loves the night rather than the day - the calmness of the night sky - everything you wrote, I have experienced ... It felt so good to read what you think ...

You are a fabulous writer and I just loved each and every word of these posts by you special mention to how you involve the nature and the climate in your posts specially in the first post - reminds me of Thomas Hardy's Tess of D'Urbevilles - just in terms of pathetic fallacy being used ... The vivid descriptions are the cherry over the cake ...

Jaee D. Rathore

Welcome to my thread Jaee, its good to see you here :)

Thanks a lot for the comment...it truly looked like a Literature students comment :D It really means a lot...God that you liked in fact not just you everyone...I din know if this conversation could pull people coz such stuff usually drifts people apart 😆

On a serious not, yes even I like night more than the day its something I feel very close to as that's the time I bare my soul and gaze at the silent sky and moon that seems to calm me down!

Well to include nature is something I just can't part with...being close to it and trying to understand it esp. staring at the sky and clouds and making pictures outta them being one of my favorite. Ah! Tess of D'Urbevilles...I love that story its so touching!

Thanks a lot...infact I'm falling short of words!
Glad you liked it :)

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Kankshita

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Bhoomi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#84

Hi Fatima,

Read the 4 post.. and it was so beautiful.. I wished they walked more and spoke more.. they love the silence and can better understnad that but I loved to read when they spoke and get alogn with the flow.. the love , the inhibitions the gap the space.. how to bridge it and the cute thoughts... all were beautiful.. and yup it was soo short.. but I love such .. i hate myself when i write long parts.. and i liked therewas so much it left to me.. while reading..though short.. and yes I woudl read it even if it was long..as when things are beautiful it never can make u feel it was too much.. :d

keep writign and sharing..

luv u

Bhoomi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#85

Oh I like Mayank in this series of drabbles! He makes sense, even when he's actually sort of speaking out loud more with the intention of untangling his own mess of thoughts!

Nupur is places precariously between being just on the threshold of profound, and convincing herself she's already there. She isn't as deep as she thinks herself to be - that makes her spontaneous and philosophical all at once... IMO =)

Sorry about the delay in getting here, but I did say I'd drop by eventually!

cheers,
NJ

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Posted: 14 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: -Kanky-
Uh, it was not very comprehensive for me in the beginning, this vignette is dissociated all the way, and I was trying to recapitulate the previous happenings which was a waste.

Alright, so - you've been long on a hiatus, I hope you write more often now. And you already do know how much I admire your skill of writing and your flabbergasting use of words, some really run over my head! Uh, hands down - this was mesmerizing and totally simple. I shall be looking forward to reading more from you and will try to write you my comments sooner the next time.

Thanks for the PM!

-Kankshita

Kankshita, its so good to see you dear...I know I'm one whose gayab now-a-days and not reading your work...but I'll surely do them you know so :)

Ah! Dissociated why so?? kk I get it was a mere convo but yet...weird convo I guess...flabbergasting use of words..omg please I use simple words I do not like using words which neither I understand nor people would 😆

Actually, the next part is reading...guess I'll post it today and them I'm off on a hiatus this time a longer one...need to seriously goddamn seriously study for my exams...and no seeing the PC also :)

Glad you liked it dear...and yeah this time you better give the comments sooner ;)

Take Care,
Fatima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: serenelove
res ... will comment when I get time to read it from start
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A.A Fatima,
It was brilliant dear. 1st I had only read & liked poetry posted by U but this is WOW.👏
It's wonderful & enjoyed it very much while reading though it has doleful touch.
Part 1:
Very nice description of surroundings. At different stages of life all of us question the nature.
It had philosophical touch while they were discussing.
Part 2:
Sometime people form the opinion about a person without fully knowing him/her & then they stick to it no matter what comes in the way afterward, they won't change it even if they are wrong. Human being can be the cruelest creature at times.
Part 3:
Quite realistic approach. Life can't always be easy but it won't be distressing always. Happiness & tenderness are part of it.
Part 4:
Their conversation gives an insight in their minds. It's good that they try understand each other.
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I am not good with words so It's just what I could come up with. But I liked it. Please Continue Soon.😊

Hey Saba,

walekum asalam,

It was good to see you here you know...glad that you read all the parts and liked them too !
Wow that was quite an analysis you see...though it was a short one it says all that needs to be 😊

Glad you liked it dear...and hope to see you here often !

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Posted: 14 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti
superb

Thanks a lot!

Edited by -shabnoor- - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: bhoomikauttam
Hi Fatima,

Read the 4 post.. and it was so beautiful.. I wished they walked more and spoke more.. they love the silence and can better understnad that but I loved to read when they spoke and get alogn with the flow.. the love , the inhibitions the gap the space.. how to bridge it and the cute thoughts... all were beautiful.. and yup it was soo short.. but I love such .. i hate myself when i write long parts.. and i liked therewas so much it left to me.. while reading..though short.. and yes I woudl read it even if it was long..as when things are beautiful it never can make u feel it was too much.. :d

keep writign and sharing..

luv u

Bhoomi

Hey di,

Hmm...you really wished for them to talk don't temme but I guess sometimes its best to be silent after a time...talking is over rated you see ermm people tell me that a lot...and if the person in concerned were I...then I'm sure the talk would have amplified to an extent that Mayank would have had run away 😆 but jokes apart, I really din wish to continue the aura would have been lost otherwise :)

Yep, it was too short even I think so but I guess...this whole series has shorter parts only and that's the way I like it...if it were a story then yes it would have been longer ain't it ?? ya when things are beautiful or rather we like it all is fair !

Glad you liked it di...

Take Care,
Fatima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: spln
Oh I like Mayank in this series of drabbles! He makes sense, even when he's actually sort of speaking out loud more with the intention of untangling his own mess of thoughts!

Nupur is places precariously between being just on the threshold of profound, and convincing herself she's already there. She isn't as deep as she thinks herself to be - that makes her spontaneous and philosophical all at once... IMO =)

Sorry about the delay in getting here, but I did say I'd drop by eventually!

cheers,
NJ

Hey NJ,

Good to see you back, I was sorta missing you...to be true I really like your take on stuff gives a philosophical insight you see and at times that's what is required.

Drabbles?? Ah! I thought they were Vignettes...339 words or more can't be a drabble can it ??😆

Mayank sure is a confused soul but still portrays himself to be quite mature and understanding but that's something that intrigues me more to go near him and explore him as a matter of fact...not a good friend you see to many, coz he is just lost in his thoughts but then he can be one and he is one if he realizes...almost like the Mayank from the serial! I loved him you see :)

Yeah Nupur, you can say she is more of a confused soul...who lead a life in an imaginary world (Post #2) and was quite happy in it until certain people knocked her door and from then life had been haywire and its even now...just she fails to accept or rather is happy with the mess with Mayank around...unlike Nupur in the show my one...falls short of words when she's with Mayank rarely argues with him and gives him endless support even though he might not ask for one...and yes she does posses that Silly Switch that changes modes oh so too often :D

And I must say that was wow...one heck of an analysis =)G
Glad you liked it...

No worries...you can be late but hey do not miss it...I really miss you then :)

Take Care,
Fatima

Edited by -shabnoor- - 14 years ago

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