MN - The Fragile Magic ** Epilogue - Pg 140. - Page 14

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Posted: 14 years ago
WHat is this yaar! you and taking so much time :( not done at all!
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What happen kinza
u've changed ky????
we want our old Kinza back
we want daily dose...

plz do update it hun

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Posted: 14 years ago
Guys come on stop being so hard on her. She's already said that hasnt planned out the story hence the updates won't be regular. Have patience i'm sure she'll update soon😃
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to b very honest i hvnt commented on this ff yet...n the only reason behind it is that its really hard 4 me to digest that u really came up with such a harsh concept...and that too on mayur...mayur r my weak point,and call me stupid or unreasonable,but i certainly cannot digest the fact that mayank and nupur have their own child and that too 4m different partners...the only thought brings a huge lump on my throat...plzz dont mind dear..i m being honest here..still with great difficulty i wil give this ff a thought,just bcos its ur writing..and till date u hv always been one of my most favourite mayur ff makers...so this reward is only 4 ur writing...bcos i really adore n respect u as a writer...but still each n every update wil remain heart wrenching 4 me...
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Posted: 14 years ago
hello sweets!! ..
Thank u all for making my birthday so special .. i truly feel blessed .. thank u .. dil se ..
so in return of your affection ,.. i decided to give u all a small treat .. i updated !! .. 😳 .. hope u all enjoy! .😳

Chapter # 4:

Dearest Mr & Mrs Mayank Sharma

Okay now I know you both have experienced this blot of red color on your cheeks, but well moving ahead.

You know you both just look gorgeous together. JUST PERFECT!!. For my sake do look in the mirror together, you both will realize what I mean to say.

I can understand you both must be feeling awkward and burdened with each other, you both must be thinking of ways to avoid each other and also thinking of devious plans how to make sure that your own child is not discriminated at any cost, but I want you both to always remember that YOU BOTH ARE MARRIED, and both those kids are your kids - both of yours'. So, don't you both dare think of any partiality ever.

You both must be thinking that maybe your marriage wasn't needed, you better off alone, but trust me, as time will pass by, as your children will grow up, you both will realize how important this was.

Mayank and Nupur, the only thing I fear is that the bond between Rahul & Pranav, you both need to take care that they shouldn't turn each other's enemies, they shouldn't get jealous of each other. I have observed things today which have made me say this. This is your only test, an ddon't worry, this isn't difficult, you both just need to take care and rest , as far as you both are concerned, I can already see the sparks .. don't worry you both will fall in love soon .. Saying on my experience .. afterall duniya dekhi hai maine..;)

Love u both .. lots of blessings.

Diya Gupta.

PS ' as now I have two nephews, this time I want a niece..;)

Mayank immediately folded the paper, assuming that Nupur hadn't read the last line, but Nupur ' being an obsessed reader had a lightning fast reading speed. She had read the last line, which now made her feel more awkward to look at mayank, who himself was trying to waste as much time as he could in placing the paper back in the envelope.

"did u observe something between Rahul and pranav?", finally mayank decided upon not to behave like a silly teenage couple who are caught kissing.

"umm, no , nothing of the sort didi has mentioned", she answered normally, inwardly thanking that Mayank was sensible and mature.

"hmm, neither did I, but if didi has said then surely she must have sensed something, and this is very serious",

"I know, maybe we both didn't think from this aspect, more then we both bond with the children, they both have to bond with themselves."

"yeah but we cannot force them to be friends, I am sure they'll be friends with the passage of time, it's not even 24 hours", mayank said, sitting back on the sofa and got back to his work.

She kept on looking at him for a moment ' he was very calm. He didn't panic in any situation and she liked it.

Taking a deep breath, she went out of the room and found that the lounge was empty. The kids were watching TV here only and now they were not. She immediately went to pranav's room and found that he was reading the books diya was narrating her in the morning.

She wanted to go inside but something stopped her.

"and both those kids are your kids

Diya was right ' she didn't have one child now, she had two sons, and she better now check upon her other child.

Slowly closing the door back, she nervously walked towards rahul's room. It felt as if she was going for a difficult exam with zero preparation!, but it shouldn't be difficult she thought, he is just a kid, all she has to do is be friends with him, just like mayank did. He talked to pranav so easily, now it was her turn.

She was about to open the door, when again something stopped her and she decided upon knocking first.

After knocking gently, she slowly opened the door and found that Rahul was already staring at the door, expecting someone after the knock.

He was amazed while she tried to smile, "main ander a jaon?', her voice was genuinely soft and Rahul got confused on the question.

Why does this not ' so 'pretty wants to come in my room?. Does she wants to check my room if I have some hidden chocolates or does she wants to throw me out of my room?, or does she..

"a jaon?', she asked again and Rahul had to cut short his assumptions and nod slowly. He couldn't say a no, his father had strictly told him to behave with this aunty.

Nupur walked to the matress Rahul was sitting on, with his markers and color pens all scattered around him.

"Hi rahul', she said softly sitting beside him, and rahul unconsciously cuddled to himself, moving a bit away, "hello', his voice was barely audible, and Nupur just smiled at his sweet confusion.

"hamara kisi ne introduction hi nahi karwaya, hi , I am Nupur", she smiled and extended her hand and Rahul after looking in her eyes, hesitantly placed his palm over her hand, "Rahul", he almost whispered and got back to his sketch book.

'kaunsi class main ho ap?",

"K.G 1", he answered with his eyes still glued on his book and Nupur suddenly ran out of questions. It was really difficult and she couldn't think of any appropriate topic to talk about until her eyes caught the sketch book in his hands.

"sketching kar rahe ho?, you like arts?", she said, trying to get a better view of his drawing whereas he was constantly trying to hide it.

"hmmm", this was all he replied,

"kia sketch kar rahe ho?", politeness was natural to her.

"bus aisey hi", he hid the book behind him and started looking at Nupur with wide eyes.

His eyes are just like mayank ' this was the first thing she noticed,

"you have beautiful eyes", the compliment came from her heart and she cupped his face from one palm, while the wideness of rahul's eyes wasn't decreasing.

His eyes were huge and silent. Demanding and deprived. Questioning and hurt. She had never seen anyone with eyes which could speak volumes. The emptiness in his eyes pricked the deepest chord of nupur's heart.

"aisey kiya dekh rahe ho?, main ap ko psnd nahi hon?', she had to ask reading that bewilderment in his eyes.

"ap merey room main kyun ayi ho?", his question was sharp and blunt as a blade, with his voice being stable as a rock., and Nupur was left dumfounded.

"umm, wasie hi, ap se milne, main ne socha hum friendship kar letey hain", she felt sweat droplets on her forehead, she had never felt this nervous before.

"mujhe nahi karni", he got up from the matress, went to his bed and hid underneath his blanket while Nupur could just stare at him. She was embarrassed and hurt, but still managed to force a smile, "koi baat nahi, aj tu first meeting thi, aur first meeting main thori na koi friends bante hain, hum ahista ahista ban jayen gey , hain na"?, she tried her best to keep the joyous tone and expected a reply from his protruding body in the blanket, but it was still.

Waiting for a moment and then sighing, she got up from the matress and was about to step out of his room when he called her, "aunty", she turned immediately to find that he was peeping through the blanket with only his eyes out. He looked adorable , which made Nupur smile,

"haan gi?", she said affectionately , walking to his bed,

"was I rude?", his voice was sinking and she could see the fear in his huge eyes

"no , you were not,", she replied affectingly , standing by the side of his bed,

"okay", he said and slipped in the blanket again, while Nupur wanted to stroke his hair, but ignoring the impulse she went out of the room.

It was not that easy. Nupur thought while walking to the kitchen, Rahul is not like pranav. Pranav had this habit of coming on terms with strangers easily but Rahul was different, but he was innocent at the same time and Nupur knew she would able to break the ice, his last question was a sheer proof of his honesty.

She worked for the lunch and all of them had their meals together, Nupur observed Rahul stealing glances at her, and everytime she smiled, she wanted to give an impression that she was not angry or upset.

Children can just melt with constant affection, and that is what Nupur wanted to show, on the other hand, mayank and pranv were chatting constantly, and Nupur noticed how again and again mayank was pulling Rahul in the conversation but he was hesitant, and what Nupur liked was that mayank wasn't forcing, he was keeping things natural.

Later at night, after tucking pranav properly in bed and then secretly checking on Rahul, she came in her room. The awkwardness was reduced by many times.

Mayank was catching up on news, while she quietly headed to change. As she came back, she saw that mayank was again gulping down the sleeping pills. She felt her nerves contracting again.

"did u talk to Rahul?", mayank asked, as he lied down and Nupur nodded, "yes i did"

"hope he didn't mis behave", he asked genuinely, looking at her while she also lied down on her side, "ofcourse not, he is an adorable child"

"he is not adorable when it comes to people he is not frnds with, what did u both talk about", he asked with concern and Nupur smiled, "ummm, mayank I don't think I'll like to reveal that",s he smiled looking at him, "huh?, why?", he was stunned.

"because it's between me and Rahul, we both will sort it out on our own , a third person always spoils the equation", she was still speaking with a smile,

"a third person?, I am the third person?', he was amused by her statement and chuckled,' okay!, but make sure if he misbehaves then u can tell me .. i..

"I'll handle my son", she cut him in between and mayank was left speechless on the honesty in her eyes, and going at a complete loss of words, he just smiled, "I am sure, good night!", he said and turned his side opposite to her.

A while passed and Nupur was still pondering over a thought, and today she decide to ask, she could never hold her worries within,

"suniye..",she said in a low voice , and mayank , who was alredy awake, turned towards her,

"haan?"

She felt nervous, with him looking intently, but then swallowing a lump in her throat she decided to speak, "ap sleeping pills kyun letey ho?"

Chapter 5 - Page 25

Edited by Fantasia. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
res😃 edited!!
thank god u updated 2day kinzu! 😃 warna i would have missed it till next sunday 😔
I loved the update! The way you showed Nupur's interaction with Rahul.. it was really nice 😊
and I loved the line "I'll handle my son"
superb job Kinzu!
and wish you a very very happy birthday.. may god bless you with all the happiness that you deserve!🤗
~jiya~
Edited by --jiya-- - 14 years ago
...Mitali... thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
resgr8 update
continue soon
thnx for the pm 😳
Edited by ...Mitali... - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
happy birthday kinza dear...isse assa birthday treat nehi ho sakti thi...thnk u so much...

it was really great that nupur was trying to be frnd with rahul...
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Posted: 14 years ago
res:D
*edited*
wow!! Beautiful update!
Glad to see nupur was trying to interact wid rahul.
Next part gonna be interesting!
Update sun!
Thnx for the lovely part.
Happy birthday,!
Payal_
Edited by pearl10 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Luved it Kinza..
Glad to see Nupur trying to bond with Rahul thgh it'll take sm tym for them to become frnds..Wanna see hw Mayur also strengthen their relationship..
Update soon

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