'EK ANCHAHA SAFAR' part 21 - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: preethia

interesting ff...

sent u buddy req...can u pl add me to ur pm list...
pl cont soon


thanks alot!!!!!!!! and u are surely added...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi...read the first part...it sounds interesting...pls add me to ur pm list...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: rennie

hi...read the first part...it sounds interesting...pls add me to ur pm list...


hi thanks alot will surely pm u...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: sakshi.ekansh


thanks di i am not as gud as u all...

zyaada nakre mat dikha.. teri saari innocence humne bahar phenkh iye ha😆
update soon dear...
dont ask i have to update mine...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55

@all thank u sooo much 4 ur lovely cmnts and motivation heres the next part...



PART 2:-




On the breakfast table Geet and Gaurav still chatting and mammu papaji left for their respective works... papaji watching news channel and mammu in kitchen


Gaurav:- cchoti tu jis clg se graduation kar rahi hai wahan ki ladkiyo se bach ke rehna... mujhe nahi lagta ki woh sab theek hain...


Geet:-kya baat hai bhaiya aap to ladkiyo pe bada dhyan dete ho...


Gaurav:- Dekh chhoti...


Geet:-geet bhaiya...


Gaurav:- nahi chhoti Gaurav bhaiya...


Geet:- Chaddo aap se to baat hi karna bekar hai...


She got up and was about to leave when the door bell rang


Gaurav:- Chhoti dekh na Maan aaya hoga


Geet:-Q bhaiya woh aapki baraat me naachne aaye hain...


Gaurav:- chhoti chup

Geet:-nahi to


Suman:- tum dono ladte hi rahoge or anyone is going to open the door... bade ho gaye bachpana nhi gaya babaji ki kasam...

Geet:- Sorry mammu!!!!!!


Geet goes to open the door... when she opens it she sees a man in his early twenties standing their in a white casual shirt and blue denims... she was still for their 4 a moment but suddenly came out of her world and...


Geet:-I am sorry... mera matlab hai hi... andar aaiye na...

Maan:-Hmmm

Maan comes inside without evn properly saying a hi to her this annoyed her...

Geet:- (to herself) akdu insaan kahinka ek proper hi bhi nahi keh sakta chhod na geet tainu ki farak pain da hai...


Maan:- Namaste uncle namaste aunty...


Both:- namastey beta


Gaurav:- are wah yaar saddi to koi ijjat hi ni hai... na hi na hello khair mai ki kar deta hu hello sher-e-khurana construction nikal aaya apne bill se bahar...


Maan:- (in his full attitude) handa bill me chuhe rehte hai sher nahi...


Gaurav :-(smiles and hugs him)

i know ki aap ka kucch nahi ho sakta mr. khurana...


maan:-mujhe kucch hone b nahi dena hai...


gaurav :- shadi nahi karega to kya hoga na ladka na ladki...😆😆😆


maan:-dekh handa agar tujhe phir se shadi ka topic shuru karna hai na to i am leaving right now...


gaurav:-okay mr. gusselaal no more discussion abt ur marriage seedhe baraat hi nikaal lete hai...

(seeing maans angry glare) accha seth ji gusssa mat ho yaar ye bata...

and they continued their usual talkings... gaurav talking endlessly and maan with his usual hmm ummm okay no yes etc etc ...


geet:-mammu ye jo bhaiya ke dost haina...


suman:- kaun maan ha bahut accha ladka hai bahar se sakt par maine dekha hai andar se ekdum narmdil hai ... tujhe pata hai ek baar gaurav ko chot lag gayi thi to maine iski aankho me aansu saaf saaf dekhe the... waise tu kya keh rahi thi...

geet was little touched but being a crefree teenager she ignored...


geet:- bas yahi mammu ki inke muh me zabaan nhi hai kya kabse haa ya na kar rahe hai...


suman:- tu apna kaam kar na'...


geet (in her usual naughty tone):- mujhse koi pyaar ni karta sab muje daante rehte hai...😭😭😭


suman:- olle le le mela baccha tu apna kaam kalle na mela beta!!!!!! now fine


geet:-haan par original hota to zyada accha lagta (and runs away from ther)


Pinky arrives pinky is geet's childhood friend and a swett bubbly girl...

maan and gaurav were sitting with their side faces towards the girls...

Pinky:- oye geet ! ye munda kaun hai jo gaurav veerji naal baitha hai...


Geet:- Q tujhe kisi se shadi ki baat chalani hai waise woh bhaiya ka frnd hai...


pinky:- wah yaar kinna hot hai...


Geet unknowingly looked towards maan and start analysing him.hot body nice dressing style good muscles his deep eyes his stubble his arrogant expression his half opened shirt ...breakkk before going further she suddenly stopped herself and came out of her thoughts...


Geet:-(to herself):- hai hai babbaji ye mai kya soch mera matlab hai dekh mera matlab hai jo bhi kar rahi thi ... geet tujhe sharam waram aati hai ya nahi...

(to pinky in an unknown loud tone) pinky tu bhi na sudhar ja ladka dekha nahi ki warmala leke chaldi...


Maan and gaurav heard her... she looked towards them... gaurav smirking... geet is all red in embarressment and pinky she was dead yeah she was dead🤢🤢


pinky pulled geet's hand and took her to balcony


pinky:-(pointing toward the room from where they have just came) MMM Maan sir...


geet:- maan sir??????


pinky :- geet ye mere naye boss hai maan singh khurana...


Geet had heard that name several times but the effect she realised when pinky emphasised on each letter of his name... but she ignored


Geet:- koi baat nahi pinky itni chhoti baato se koi naukri se koi nikalta hai...


pinky:- tujhe kucch nahi9 pata unke office me agar kisi ki tie b loosely bandi ho na to waoh use naukri se nikaal dete hai... mera kya hoga?????


geet:- kya??????? m to gunga samjh rahi thi woh to dusht danav bhi hai khair tu chill maar na chal shopping chalte hai...


heraing the name of shopping geet and pinky always forget their worries and chill their moods... so geet thought this cud chill her out and it worked as always...


PRECAP:-


the day which changed all their lives


Next:- Part 3

Edited by sakshi.ekansh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
sorry 4 the short post but will try longer another time and plz plz do tell me my mistakes and do comment plz coz it will tell me 2 write or to stop... i know thoda boring hai but plz bear with it...
love
Sakshi

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Posted: 14 years ago
#57

hey sakshi just read ur upd dear...

it's fab...
loved it to the core...
i am really excited for the next part...
do cont. soon sweety...
thanx for the pm...
take care..
Edited by mayadika11 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
wow nice ff... looks interesting.. plzz add me onto ur pm list.. continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
congo congo
new SS
lovely character
both parts beautiful
love it
love maan & gaurv
friendship
the precap sounds nice
looking forward next part
pls do pm me

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