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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update...
like it...
poor sasha...
cont soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago


That was wonderful šŸ‘šŸ¼
Sasha's past & her connection with Geet's pain ... very well written .Glitter Star Red
Loved it Glitter Heart Red
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Posted: 14 years ago
UPDATE PLEASE WAITING I LIKE THIS FF VERY MUCH
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Part 48 Midnight Coffee

At last, Pinky joined the other two musketeers and started jabbering about her shopping experience in detail. Sight of Pinky made the atomosphere lighter. Pinky's presence lightened the whole surroundings and both Geet and Shasha started laughing at her jabbering.

When they arrived back to hotel, Geet noticed that her phone was on silent and she had ten missed calls from Maan. Worried had covered her face and instantly she called him back. To aggravate her worry, he didn't pick up her call. It was never easy to figure out Maan's state of mind.

Geet was relaxing after her tiring day and now Maan was behaving mysteriously. First he called her many times and now he didn't pick up her call. She knew that he must be angry as she didn't pick up his calls. Sometimes he behaved like a demanding kid.

She decided to visit Maan's hotel during this almost night hour. Clock had already passed 10 but she couldn't stop herself. Shasha and Pinky insisted to join her but she denied them politely.

It was a horrible sight when she reached to his hotel room. His room door was ajar. Things were scattered in his room like it was not cleaned from ages. He had thrown his clothes, boots, or whatever things came in his hand on the ground most probably out of anger. Geet was little scared by this display. Geet was a strong girl at the end. Life had trained her very well.

Ignoring everything which came in between her walking trail, she ran towards Maan and hugged him tightly to sooth him. He was sitting like a lost soul, staring blatantly at the outside view from his window. Her touch definitely worked like a medicine and he came out of his stupor. As soon as he saw her, he hugged her firmly like no air could come in between. He entangled her from her waist and he hid his face under her stomach. He was sitting on his chair and she was standing circling her hands over his hair. Her touch was salvation for him and it always revitialized his soul. When they broke apart from their magnatic clasp, Geet moved towards the window watching the dark sky. She was lost in the sky like twinkling stars were telling her some stories. She was collecting herself after having this intimate moment while not facing him at the same time.

He stood up facing her back. Both of their gazes met in the sky. His proximity made her vulnerable. His chest was touching her bare back inadverently. She was wearing her typical Punjabi suite where the only covered part of her upper back was a single strand. He could feel the lightness of her hair on his body and her shampoo smell was making him lost his decency. A dark gray sky covered with twinkling stars and her seductive scent could definitely work as libido.

In his stupor, he pushed her hair towards the right side of her shoulder to make some room for his mischevious glare. She was surprised for a second, but his touch was like soothing remedy for her suffering soul hence she couldn't stop him. For a second, she stirred little from her long standing position to break this moment, but at the same time he trickled her naked back. She froze right there. It was like a fire moved from her neck to toe. Her entire being was shivered with his mere touch. Her stark naked back and her shivering body was enough for Maan to aggravate his emotions. Whatever control he had, he lost with the sight of her. Beating of his heart became more erotic each moment. Rhythem of her heart was synchronized with his erotic heartbeats.

He trailed kisses on her back to her neckline and it wasn't enough for his hunger to stop there and he chased kisses to her bare arms. Within a second, he quickly twisted her from her waistline so that both could face each other. Her eyes were closed and her uneven breathing was apparent through rise and fall of her chest. It made Maan untamed. He tenderly pressed his lips on hers. It was like a long awaited moment for her soul to respond, that she reciprocated his lips in equal fervor by pressing her lips on his. Their lips marked this moment eternal for the sky which witnessed it. It went for few seconds till they lost their breath. She let out a sigh like a prolonged breath she was holding. In this moment, she didn't notice that her dupatta fell on the ground which usually clung to her neckline.

Her eyes swung open with the realization of what just happened. Immediately she picked up her dupatta and moved away from him. Watching her collecting herself, he came back to his senses. He was speechless. He didn't know how to handle this situation.

To lighten the mood, he instantly ordered two coffees in his room and they sat down near the coffee table which was arranged in the patio. Clock ticked 12 and somewhere down in the air they heard the midnight church bells. It was silent and soothing. The only sound they could hear was night birds, church bells and the sound of dew. They avoided each other's gaze for a while and they didn't make any sound as they didn't want to gauge any attention from each other. They had a perfect midnight coffee. It was a sweet moment when only their silent spoke with each other. The air was filled with the sweetness of this moment and bitterness of the expresso coffee.

Geet couldn't wishper a word and she left after having coffee. Maan couldn't gather courage to stop her and he let her go. Both needed space from each other to figure out what just happened between them.

Thanks for reading.

Sejal

Can't wait to read comments.

Edited by Asha2010 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
love how geet sooth
maan anger with the hug
wow they kissed one another
still geet love him
only two of them can sooth
there pain
she just needs to realize
what she really want
mindblowing part
love it core
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update...

thanks for pm..

count soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely update::
Awww geet knew exactly how to get maans anger down
She just went and hugged him
Wow luvd ther kiss
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update Sejal...
Loved the way Maneet took each other to comfort their soul ...Geet didnot say anything after their soul mating ...
loved the part when Geet hugged Maan to soothe him...
Geet still loves Maan ...
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
loved how geet soothed maan wid hug
omg they kissed
surely now geet needs to figure dat she still loves maan
loving it to the core
thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
they are heading towards a confession, like the part where she hugged him and he responded

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