MG FF:THE GIFT OF LOVE!!!!~~ PART 45:page 123 - Page 18

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Sorry for mistakes.didnt proof read it...

PART 22


MISHTY - the name brought a glow in his eyes, a smile in his face 😊..He read the msg.
Txt
Geet:'Maan i think v need 2 talk.Wat abt Barista @ 7 pm.?'
Maan: ok sure.
Geet :Meet me @ Hauz Khas.
Maan:ok
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He had already reserved the entire place for themselves & was waiting for her.She reached 5 mins after him.As she approached him his started beating fast! She has to talk but wat?A strange fear creeped in his mind.Maan Singh Khurana is scared!!
She came with a plane face.He couldnt read her eyes.His fear increased.They stood silently not knowing how to start.Finally he broke the ice.
Maan: office to South ex me he.Then y did u choose this place?
Geet : no i didnt want to talk in front of office.
Maan:oh!
Geet: shall we go now?
She was a little surprised by the bike.But he managed to explain.She just nodded.He noticed that she was careful that they didn't touch each other while in the bike.Apart frm that they didn't talk much.They reached BARISTA after a short ride.Geet was a little surprised that it was empty but knowing Maan she couldnt xpect nything else.They sat opposite to each other.Silence..
Finally she spoke.
Geet:Maan dont do this.Dont make things complicated btwn us.How could u? How could u..touch me like that..
Maan looks at her.
Geet: us raat...
Maan:touch?I kissed u after that.U didnt stop me.To ye pyar hi he na? Bolo Geet! Jawab do!
Geet:...

Maan:There ws a fantastic chemistry btween us.Dont u realize that Geet?Now,i'm sitting here opposite to u.But i cant take this.I wanna b there near u...feeling ur presence..aur me janta hu ki tumhe bi yehi lag rha he.


He stood up.
Maan(shouts):This is love .I'm crazy about u(punches on the table) & i'm fu***** mad about u.

Geet luks @ him shocked.Their coffee arrives.He calms down himself & sits back.
Geet:there is no love or chemistry.Nothing like that.U are just attracted to me,thats it.I dont know why i let u kiss me but u just leave me Maan.I can only give you pain.All the people in my life whom i loved hav only suffered bcoz of me.I can only give u pain.You know already that i hv so many problems in..
Maan(still angry): problems to baad me dekhenge.Us raat jo mene tumhare ankhon me dekha kya wo pyar nhe tha? Hmm geet..Bolo! Jawab do geet!
Geet: i like u.But i dnt want this.I dont want to a burden your life.

Maan fuming with anger but silent😡.His silence kills her further..
Geet:y cant v b gud frnz? Nhe to hume dard hi milega.And i dnt want that.I feel like being with u, to talk to u.Thats y i'm here with u.If this 'love' comes in between their vl b lots of fear & pressure.Think abt ur family,i mean dadima she vl never accept me.But i dont wanna lose u in my life.Can v be in this without love?

Maan:...(turns his face away)
Geet:Maan u vl regret your decision later.I dont want to stress u.You dont hav to sacrifice your life for me.Just get over with this.Lets be just two individuals beyond al these.There vl be nothing between us.No secrets..No ego..wat do u say?
Maan(in a mock tone): nothing?
Geet:yup!
He remains silent.They leave after sometime.
In the bike:
Geet: u kissed me na
Maan:(surprised)..
Geet: u r the first one..I hv never been with any guy ever before.
Maan:...

They reach the gate of the Mansion.
Geet: Maan i vl walk frm here.
He stops the bike & she gets down.
Maan:kya karne ki koshish kar rhe ho Geet?Yehi ki jo kuch bi humare beech hua usse tumhe koi farak nhe padta.Sab kuch kaha aur phir kiss ke bare me baat kar rhe ho.par bike me jab baiti to dur rhte ho.Kahi tumne muje chu liya to me tumhare saath...Even when i ws in Australia & u were in India i wanted to kiss.No matter how far u go i felt like touching & vl feel so always even after 50yrs!

He gets up from the bike and runs his hand over his hear lukin away.Geet turns to leave.
Maan:I wanna make love to u al the time.Then hw can v b jst frnz?
Geet luks at him shocked!
Maan:do u understand wat i'm talkin abt?U feel like being with me,talk to me.Thats nly bcoz of love.Agar pyar nhe rahega to ye ehsaas bi nhe rahega.How could u even think of takin love out of our relation when our relatn is based on it.
Geet:no u are just confused with ur feelings.U dont love me.U are just attracted to me.U are takin care of me bcoz u promised ur friend.Thats it.Ap apne feelings ko galat samaj rhe ho.

Maan couldnt control his anger anymore.He held her arms tightly & pinned her to the wall..his eyes spitting fire.
Maan:Tumhe kya lagta he me koi teenager hu jo apne hi feelings ko samaj nhe pata.Maan Singh Khurana ko uske alawa koi aur samaj bhi nhe sakta samjhi tum.Tum bhi nhe.Koi bhi nhe.Ha ab me kehta hu tumhe.Tumhare liye mere dil me koi jagah nhe..I hate u geet! I hate u! Tumne mere pyar ka mazaak banaya he..kyu aye tum meri zindagi me? Kyu Geet?Chali jao..dur jao mujhse.. Tum kyu mere purane ghav ko khured kar uspe namak chidak rhe ho? Mujse dur jao Geet.I hate u! Samjhi tum I HATE U!
Geet:Thank you!

She frees herself & walks away.Maan stands there lukin @ her.He goes to the gym working out heavily & falls asleep on the floor itself.Next day Nakul wokes him up.He leaves early in his jeep for camping.He camps in a forest & cut logs of wood angrily.3 days passed.But watever he try to do he couldnt keep her away from his thots.
Maan(self-talk): jitna me Geet se dur rhne ki koshish karta hu utna hi wo mere dil-e-dimag me cha jati he.Hmm.. Jab tak me usse dur rahunga uski yade mujhe satati rahegi.Agar me roz use apne aas paas dekta rhu to me use yaad nhe karunga. Ha yehi tarika he uska khayal mere dimag se nikalne ka.
He goes back to Mansion late at nite.He sleeps peacefully in the hope of seeing her the nxt day.
KC
He entered as usual with all the glory.He fumed in anger wen he didn't find her in the cabin.
Maan(shouted):Adi, in my cabin NOW!
Adi:y..yes sir.
He follows Maan.
Maan:Adi Ms.Geet Handa ki medical leave abi tak ovr nhe hue?
Adi:n..nhe s..sir..wo..
Maan:Enough! Cancel her leave now.I want her in the office within 30 mins or else she is fired!!
Adi:par Sir Geet ne to already job chod diya he.
Maan(shocked): wat?
Adi:yes Sir,she resigned two days before.
Maan:aur muje ab pata chal rha he.Mere company ke employees muje bataye bina hi apna decisions lene lage he? Who..who the hell approved her resignation?
Adi:sir wo..
Maan:get out!
Thats it.The day was hell for KC employees.Or he made it hell for them.The slightest of the mistake or even if he felt so they are fired.Adi felt he saw the same Maan who initially joined KC before goin to US.But after his return frm US he was better.At least he was a bit human.But now again the moron in him woke up.Something must have disturbed Maan Sir terribly,thot Adi.Maan was angry & his arrogance showed even at @ 1am wen he was winding up his client meeting.
Maan: Thats it Mr.Gupta.These are my conditions.if u want to work with KC u hav to agree else u can leave.

Adi shocked!😲

Gupta: nhe nhe Mr.Khurana i'm ok with this.
Maan:then lets wind up.
Maan reaches KC around 2am.Geet who didnt hav a peaceful sleep since last 4 days wakes up early in the morning hearing some strange noises.She goes to terrace only to find him doin his tai-chi.She hid behind the pillars watching.After all these she still felt seduced by him.Maan was doin vigurous moves burning out his anger..frustation.But he stopped when he felt her presence.He turned around & found her standing still admiring him.He thot he was dreaming bt he didnt want to break it.He just wanted to feel her.He went near her.She couldnt move.He went closer.A strange sensation passed through her when she felt his bare sweaty upper body on her.He opened her plats & dipped his head on her hair feeling her scent.She hugged him caressing his back sensuously...He placed wet kisses on her shoulder.He slowly moved towards her lips his eyes still closed.Thats when Geet saw Nakul coming with a glass of juice for Maan.She ran away.Nakul called Maan.He opened his eyes & found no one except Nakul.He thot it was an illusion.
Maan(self-think): mujhe Geet ki
har us yaad ko khud se dur karna hoga warna ye ladki mujhe pagal kar degi.😡

Maan went to the dark attic & dumped the taveez.Geet was following him & was heart-broken seeing this.Maan left the place oblivious of her presence.Geet went to take the taveez but stopped mid-way seeing a photo of Maan.He was smiling cheerfully.
Geet:Maan aise khulke haste bi the?
She went near the photo.She touched his face suddenly a diary covered with dust fell frm behind the foto frame.She picked it up & opened it.

She read,'MAAN' A smile automatically came to her face when she saw a pic of his.This was not a muscle man the six pack MSK! He looked like a normal young college guy, ofcourse fit & handsome.



Geet: aaachooo... Uff kitni dhul he isme.Pehle saaf karte hu.phir room me le jake padti hu.Ha waise kisi aur ki diary padna theek nhe par ye to Maan ka he.Aur unhe kaise pata chalega he na?
Geet cleans it & takes it to her room.She lies on the bed & starts reading it.
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PRECAP:MAAN'S PAST!

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Edited by madhubala123 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome!
how can geet do this???...poor maan!
maan's past!...interesting!
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ...

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part.
loved it.
waiting for maan's past.
continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
How can Geet do that to Maan
He loves her madly she does the same but her fear is making her do thgs she dosent want
Maan is gng mad
Paka he wil do sumthg idiotic
Lets c wats his past

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