MG FF:THE GIFT OF LOVE!!!!~~ PART 45:page 123 - Page 20

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Posted: 14 years ago
hiii
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART 24

DeboPriya walks to the mike to face the students&professors gathered there.Tears were rolling down from her eyes!
Deby: 😭i am so..
Just then Maan covers the mike.Deby luks at him shocked! Maan wasnt even lukin at her.He took the mike & spoke.
Maan: Aj subah jo kuch bhi usme DeboPriya ki koi galti nhe.Mene uske sath galat saluk kiya,thats y she slapped me.Bas farak itna he jo mene kiya wo kisi ne nhe dekha.I apologize to my teachers and all of u especially Debopriya for creating such a situation.I assure u all that i wont repeat it again.

With that he leaves the place without lukin at anyone.
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Day 15 : 4:30pm.
Maan & his frnz are in the football ground.Maan is playing with the ball vigorously but he is'nt able to hit it to the goal even once.His frnz are watching him & smiling.
Mayank:Maan apna frustation ball pe kyu nikal rha he?
Samrat: waise bet ka time 5'o clock tak he.But as we already know the result there is no point of waiting.I hav already called the barber. Kyu Maan lets do it?
Maan(angry): i'm ready.
The barber sprinkles water on his hair.He was about to shave when DeboPriya came running...
Debby(panting): I LOVE YOU!...(Everyone shockd) I LOVE YOU MAAN!!
Maan pushes away the barber runs to the ground...kicks the ball upwards...hits it with his head & its a goal.He shouts, 'YES!!'
Thats the moment.From they were always together.Maan & Debopriya were the ideal couple in the whole college.Everybody envied them.
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DIARY
Those were the most beautiful days of my life.Not that we never fought.We had our rough fights as i cant keep my temper in control.But the thing i like about Deby she let me be myself.She never expected me to change.She loved me the way i was.I wonder whether i could ever love her to the extend she loved me.Its been two yrs.She met dadi couple of times.They share a good bond & i love to see that.Deby is such a darling.She called herself my wife. Everything was so perfect in my life.But happiness wont stay for long in anyone's life.How could i be an exception? Somehow came to know about this.He was dead against this as DeboPriya was an orphan.I never thot dad would oppose for such a reason.He was a man whom i idolised.

But our love was strong enough to withstand any storm.Dad was makin arrangements to get rid of Deby.Sensing this we decided to flee on that dreadful day...
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FLASHBACK

Deby: Ok Maan i vl wait for u near the bus-stop at 10pm sharp ok?
Maan: hmm...
Deby: kya hua Maan?
Maan: i dnt know.I'm not feelin gud about this today...
Deby: But v dnt hav an option Maan.Trust me.Everything vl b ok
Maan:hmm.. I love u Deby
Deby: i luv u too Maan

But they didn't know somebody was overhearing them.

KHURANA MANSION


Ranveer Singh Khurana was working on his laptop.
Dev: dad i hv to talk to u...about something important.
Ranveer:kya baat he Dev?
Dev narrated the whole conversation that he overheard about how they had planned to escape.
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9pm KM

Maan was busy packing his things.He didnt notice that Dev had locked his room from outside.He got ready & was goin to leave when he realised the door is locked.He saw Dev.
Maan: Dev open the door...(shouted) Dev! open the door...
Dev stood still.
Maan: Dadi... Nakul... Anyone open the door!!
He started hitting the door! Dadii plz.. Open the door!
Dadi goes to open the door when Ranvir enters!
RSK: No one vl open the door.If Maan goes out he vl b over my deadbody!
Savitri Devi stops hearing this.

Maan hits the door hard
Maan(screams):Dad plz!! Let me go.

10:15pm

Maan tries to open the windows.But he realised that they are nailed from outside.Maan took a flower vase & broke the glass of the window. He was trying to open the window but the guards stopped him forcefully.They pushed him back.Maan fell on the floor.He felt so helpless.He roared, Aaargh...

Suddenly he felt some people dragging him forcefully.They put him on the bed.Something like a sharp needle struck him & he felt darkness around him.🤢
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It was 12 in the midnite.DeboPriya was still waiting for Maan.
DeboPriya(self-thot): itne der ho gaye! Maan abhi tak nhe aya phne bhi nhe lag rha.Something must hav hapnd to him!Otherwise he would hav cald me.I think i should go to KM.She was walkin when she noticed that some goons were following her.They started to pass dirty comments on her.She walked faster...they were still teasing her.She ran & they followed her.She ran & ran... But finally she reached a railway track & a train was coming from far away. The goons also reached there.
One of them said,'ab tu bachke kaha jayegi' & snatched her dupatta.
Debopriya(self-talk):Maan ke alava koi aur mujhe chue isse acha meri maut he.(she closed her eyes) I love u Maan.

She jumped on the track & the train hit here.The blood was spread all over & she breathed her last.😭

The goons were terrified & left the scene immediately.

Next day Maan woke up to hear the news of her death.The world seemed to stop before him.He didnt come out of the room for over a week.He didnt eat,drink or sleep.
Dadima was really worried.She went to Ranveer.
Dadi: Ab to khush hona ap? Bcoz of ur ego an innocent girl died.U might hav used ur power to make it a suicide for the outside world.But your son knows the truth! Its been one week.He didnt eat sleep or leave his room. U hav ruined my grandson's life! Mark my words Ranvir,one day u vl regret.Regret that u destroyed ur son's life.U killed my Maan! U killed him (& she breaks down)
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DIARY
I lost her...i lost her forever! Wat was her fault? That she loved me? Whom should i blame? Dev or my dad? No its me! I'm responsible! Meri galti he.If my love was strong enough nothing could hav stopped me! I would hav been there for her always!

Oh God! Plz giv me one chance & i vl protect her from al evils.I vl never let anything touch her before it passes through me.But no Maan u dnt hav a chance.U hav lost ur life.Yes Maan is dead.I dont hav any rite to live.My love was dying there & i was sleeping here? How can i live now.They did this to keep the reputation of Khurana parivaar, na? Ok i vl not let them down.From today, i'm Maan Singh Khurana! But Maan Singh Khurana wont hav a life of his own.Maan Singh Khurana wont love anyone.Thats wat i deserve! To live like a dead.I wont hav ny emotions! I dont want anyone in my life.From now on, i vl be a loner.

Geet's eyes became red due to tears.😭
Geet: So thats the birth of this khadus dusht-danav!

She continues reading the diary..

Its been two years since i took charge of KC. Its one of the top companies now! I never talked to Dad after that.Not only dad i rarely talked to nyone except dadi.Thats y i'm writing this diary.Watever i did i couldnt get out of her thots.Thats how i started working out & doin tai-chi.Yes to give myself physical pain to ease out my mental pain! I devoted my time to work & if ever i was free i spend it in gym.Somehw now i learned to live with this pain the fact of my life that she is no more! Thats how my life had been for the last two years!
But again Man proposes & God disposes. Dad.. He was on his death bed! I never knew that his health had been ruining since that day..
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FLASHBACK
Ranveer Singh Khurana on his death-bed.Maan holding his hand.
RSK (in a weak voice): i know i hav wronged u Maan! Ho sake to mujhe maaf karna
Maan:Dad aise nhe he!
RSK: I knw the fact beta.i never thot she would...
Maan: Dad that was my fate!
RSK: Maan i knw u vl take cre of Khurana empire & ur dadi.But vl u fulfill my last wish!
Maan:boliye dad!
RSK:U should go to abroad for MBA.I knw thats ur ambition.I was always against ur wishes.Atleast by this i vl rest in peace...

With that he closed his eyes.
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DIARY
It is inhuman if u deny a person's request at his death bed.I wnt to be atleast human. So i'm goin to Havard.But wat about my only wish? Even God cant do nything! How I wish i could protect my love...to be her saviour when she needs me...But i know it wont happen ever! God !! I cant even get one more chance!!!

Geet closed the diary.Tears were welled up in her eyes!
Geet(self-talk): So dats y Maan is always over-protective about me becoz...Becoz he loves me! Frm the day i saw him.He had been there for me always...only bcoz he loves me! Babaji! Anjane me hi sahi par mujse bohat badi bhul ho gayi! Mene unhe kitna bada dard diya! Itne saal baad wo jeene lage aur mene...Maan! Kaha ho ap? Mujhe abhi apse milna he!

She rushes to KC...
Geet:Adi sir! Maan kaha he?
Adi: Arey Geet! Maan Sir to games village ke paas wale star hotels ki site par he. Waise wo tumse bohat naraz..
Before he could finish Geet was in the metro station.She felt the time had almst stopped.Even metro lukd slow. She wanted to be in his arms...to tell him that how much she loved him...he meant the world to her...she wanted to remove all the pain from him...to make him live his life!!
Maan ab Geet apki zindagi me sirf khushiya layegi,thot she & smiled.😊

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PRECAP: CONFESSION...oops Accident!!

THNX for ur wonderful response...Keep on commenting...

I think this is a sad part...but that was needed...MAANEET returns with next part...😊

Edited by madhubala123 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

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continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowww confession
ccooolll
bt wts this accident
oh no nt again...
hell yaar i hate maans dad bcoz of his 1 decision debo died
oh god nooo
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome!
tragic past!
finally geet realizes her mistake!
plzz not again!...plz don't let maan suffer again!
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hiii
Awesome update
Loved it
Naan past was Sooo sad
Glad geet rallied his feelings
Can't wait 4 more
Con soon
Thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome Update
Cont Soon
Thanks 4 The PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
Maan's past was really senti
Hate his Dad n Dev a lot
Loved how Geet got whole thgs abt Maan
Hop they meet soon

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