MayUr FF - The Blossoming Magic || Part 18 - Pg 92

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#201

Fantasia---lol
wah wah kya update tha yaar
Haye it was too good...
hahahaha mayank was mesmerized by nups beauty and also getting jealous becoz some random guy is coming to his (ahem ahem) Nupur..LOL
poor mayank - he was starring at nups and he was restless in his room...
wah wah kya demag paya usne- he called Gunjan...and he was wishng that Nupur could pick up d phone…………kinzu I don't know what u r going to write in ur next update- but plz mayur ki baat karwa do- bechara Mayank ki dill toot jayega…….pilish

Quote

fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#202

such sweet n wonderful part ...craying for next update ..

ek din mein do nhi hosaktay kiya...sorry just joking

lovely

n ya im sorry

CONGRATs on ur 10th MAshaAllah

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

bhargavi

@gopi06

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#203

lovely updt ...mehak All your stories are soo different & interesting ,this one also different from other stories
thanks for the pm

Quote

Naina

@sumonetolub

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#204

oh my god...im in love with this story!...how can 2 people be so freakin cute?!...gosh if they wait this way for a first move from the other, theyre gonna grow old waiting!...i wonder if either has a feeling that the other one might be feeling the same way...waiting for the next update...naina

Quote

459718

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#205

Cinderella , this was sooo cute, seriously they way you have brought out the characters of mayank and nupur in this story its so damn adorable. I loved the fact that mayank was mesmerized by her beauty and why wouldn't he be!😳😆 and i love this slow and steady thing your going for, mayank was so cute calling so nupur would pick up, smart guy i tell you..

I hope they talk soon because at this rate they would get married when they are old 😆😆😆

update soon.

Quote

manjeet

@love.mayurarti

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#206

amazing update

u described the situation vry well...m

mayur face to face...damn beautiful scene...nupur scared n mayank staring at her..mesmerizing

luved jealous mayank n luved the way he wants to c her...n last part was tooo gud

superb kinza

Edited by love.mayurarti - 14 years ago

Quote

np18

@np18

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#207

sigh sigh sigh...
i love ur stories.
sorry for not replying to 3 of ur last - was a little busy.

i love your stories bcoz they are so MN ish. even when the characters are a little different , the bond that develops between thme is so much MN ish.

its just love nothing else. ppl often say that MN were also friends but somehow for me thay have been only lovers and all your stories have that in them.

and i honestly admire you for writing all this . ur new name is nice but then whats in a name- a rose would smell just as sweet if it was called any thing else - like you whether mehak or fantasia, keep writing.

👏

Quote

Mitali

@...Mitali...

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#208

great update

thnx for the pm

Quote

Gul

@DhanakZ

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#209

Oh That was really so beautiful

I love the way Mayank is getting emotional for Nupur

The most beautiful lines are

Mayank's heart beat was increasing with every passing bell. He kept his fingers crossed that may be just luck could favor him, may be just nupur could pick up the phone, he would be able to listen her voice again, maybe he could be able to talk to her about something. May be..OH GOD, just may be 'PLEASE!

I love it

Thanks for Pm

cont soon