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Ramhari thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Waiting for the update 😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yeyyy!!!!!! Superb update..... U r gonna update again.... Love U Di😃 😃
Luvd the confession part.... That was amazing!!!!! Waiting eagerly for Geet's reaction...... Hopefully..evrything becomes like b4 bw them...... GHOSH!!!!! I still remember those endless calls..... Missing dat Geet 😭 😭
Update soooooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
PRESS LIKE BUTTON & COMMENT MOTIVATES ME😳
-truly magical-
part 174

the thoughts hit her heart..her soul.. shattering her entire integrity. He thought mk was not theirs.. he doubted their love, she stood their numb, her tears dried away. She stood their unmoved, unbroken..fixed stood in a permanent pose. Thoughtless now!!! like her struggle was still to be won. Is this wat they asked for!!! their life filled with sorrow, consumed in defeat & regret. All those years when his hands didn't hold her, her tears that he couldn't wipe!! meant nothing!!!

The silence broke,bt the trust did too....
Instead of laughter,there is darkness....darkness so intense that it threatens to engulf them into nothingness....but,LOVE....yes,their love which is covered by pain rgt now can bring them out even from the depths of a black hole!
Innumerable questions...a single answer....LOVE!
by swati
her words were stuck like a lump in the throat. A sense of wrong tortured him. Her silence was painful. It felt like a sickness, unspeakable yearning for her love, & for her comfort. No matter what he tried to do there was just nothing getting through to her. All the while she seemed alone.. threateningly parting away from him, her heart felt to be walled with stone.
All he got to hear was painful silence, she not hearing his cries or his plead, every thing seemed to drown in painful silence. He raised to reach her face, he cupped her face kissed her madly. Jaan please mujhe maaf kardo. He kissed kept kissing her lips, cheeks, nose, eyes, ears, forehead, head.. randomly every where. Jaan ..he shook her jaan!!! please mujhe maaf kardo..she didn't even look at him, he cupped her face. Sweetheart plz..look at me.. I am really sorry ..her silence broke every bit of his confidence, his last trail of hope. As the time passed his plead turned into whimper into sob..now into a loud cry..he searched her face it was pale like some one just drew the color out of her. She now seemed not to even breath. He kissed her lips dearly. Jaan ' breath jaan..how could u Maan !!! why did u...she cried breaking down completely in his arms, in the kiss... her eyes welled with tears.. he kissed her madly crying filled with remorse. He cupped her face yet again & looked into her...eyes.. those eyes seemed to wonder..wat set them apart is not their anger, it is the fact that neither had the courage to speak to the other over their feelings. The tension build as they look at each other in silence, they stood speechless as the cruelty of time ages their distances. But today as the silence faded away all they had was nothing to say all they could hear is sobbing. The picture in their minds were painted with tears so cold and bitter that they froze the heart. Now the only regret is to have never said a word to the only person they ever lived for, cared for. Although they never spoke a word they knew how each other felt.

Mujhe maaf kardo
NAHI
jaan sorry
she pushed him away & walked straight into the bed room, where mk was fast a sleep
he followed her jaan.. jaan.. plz ..tum kya kar rahi ho
she took her suit case & packed her & mk's luggage. nahi ..jaan. Plz nahi.. tum mujhe kuch bhi saaza dedo plz hume alaag mat karo.
She slammed the suitcase shut & held his collar..meren alaag karne se hum alaag ho jayenge she spat on his face in anger. He didn't understand wat she meant. Jaan plz. He tried to block her way. She pushed him off. He held her in his embrace..I will not let u go..tum sirf meri ho
main humesha se hi sirf aapki hi thi
lekin jaan.. tum aisen nahi jaa sakti..
javoongi...aur isse bar u have to find us..
he pulled her suitcase & kept it aside nahi main tumhe kanhi nahi jaane doonga..
why u r scared u won't be able to find us
I will die jaan ..
he cried
u can't..ur not allowed to ...yah meri jaan hain she placed a full kiss on his lips.. he looked at her dazzed in that kiss..helplessly
tho tum meri jaan ko mujh se dor kyun kar rahi ho
thats ur punishment
jaan koi aur saaza dedo....
she lifts mk & walks out she makes mk lie on the back seat & she sits in the driver seat, Maan sits in the other side. Main bhi saath challon ga
ek tho galti karten ho aur saaza bhi nahi maanthe
nahi maanni mujhe aisen koi saaza jissen mjhe se jyada tumhe taakleef ho
phir bhi mujhe khud se 7 saal dor kiya na aapne
I am sorry baby!!!
aap uttroo gadi se
nahi I will not let u go anywhere
Maan mk utteghi tho it will become difficult situation
jaan plz zid mat karo
main nahi aap zid kar rahen ho
he quickly gets off carries her & takes her to the room. She kicks him.. Maan leave me.. I am not going to stay with u, u have to find us first. He closes her mouth with his.. & pins her hand on either side.. tum kanhi nahi jaa rahi. His lips kissed her teary...yet furious eye lids. His kisses became filled with passion as they his hand released hers & now laced her fingers. He glared down at her and his eyes glinted silver with his power..mujhe kabhi chod ke nahi jaana She looked away with a little pout, and he was struck by her sheer love. He licked & kissed her tears. He carried her to bed & made her lay their. He tucked the spread around her. Kissed her forehead & went down to get Mk. He made mk lie on the bed. He held geets hand firmly. She snapped away. He came around to her side & hugged her laying beside her... the moment his hand lay around her she felt the humming in the air around her..the magical feel that always flowed in with him, closing in on her, cocooning her, hugging and squeezing her.

Next morning, he finds himself alone wrapped up in the spread all alone in the bed. He turns immediately looking for his life his heart beat, his soul.. she was gone... he hit his head in frustration. He screamed madly at the emptiness. Just to find a note in the side table.. we will be waiting for u to find us!!!

Precap
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-PREV PART 173 NEXT PART 175-
hope u all like the updates. Love all your comments.
Really love reading them
please do keep commenting'.
Love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yeeyyy!!!!! Yuppppiiieee!!!!! Hurrayyyyy!!!! Balle Balle!!!!🥳 🥳 🥳
Me 1st for the 1st time..... Today I sandwiched ur update Di....
Im so happy...
Update was fantabulous.... Loved all the dialogues of Geet... They were so heart-touching..... Her love is really beyond words....
So..the search begins!!!!! Im damn sure dat this time Maan will find them.... I think Geet has gone back to
the same place.... Im so excited to read the next part....
I wonder how mk dint wake up all the while... N Maan also fell in a deep sleep dat he dint reralise Geet leaving.... Dono baap-beti ek jaise hai
😆
Cont sooon....luv U Di...
Edited by Sameenaas - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update.
cant wait to see how maan will find geet n mk.
do continue plz.
thx
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Posted: 14 years ago
*Thinking* is that Geets way of making Maan and MAANEET whole again.... Beautifully written, both updates Muskaan...loved it....
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Posted: 14 years ago
NOT AGAIN........why did you separate them again😭 I am really sad for maan. The show geet leaves maan for saying the word 'begairat' and this geet leaves maan to test his search talents.....😒

Even then , thankyou for fantastic updates,loved them😊
Edited by scorpiodreams - 14 years ago
Ramhari thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing update
Thank you
Finally Maan vented all his feelings out.
Geet also did her part.
She really wanted to punish him?
She must have been shattered to do that.
He deserved it in some way or the other though.
She has all the rights to punish him.
Lets see how long will it last
Hope Maan finds them soon.

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Posted: 14 years ago
let see how maan find
his two heart
amazing update
pls cont soonnnnn
thank yu so much
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh no no nononoooooooooooooooooooooooo
not again😡
😭😭😭😭😭😭

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