-truly magical- MAANEET FF THREAD 21

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Posted: 14 years ago

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-truly magical-
part 175

Come,Fetch me- Take me Home...

I've been waiting n craving for u since long...
Come fetch me take me home!
The distance is turning me to stone,
come fetch me take me home...

The words that u spoke today,have scarred me deep within...
Never ever did i doubt your love,but your faith went thin.
My heart is still sobbing...trying to take in the pain,
but i am still helpless,for it only takes your name...

Like sand on the shore i am bobbling...
Worrying for u n u alone..
Its been long i have been craving,
come fetch me take me home...

Yes,i feel clueless...betrayed by your feelings,
my mind screams PUNISHMENT!!
But,this heart-you have made it YOUR OWN...
however hard i may try,its you,just you want...
Its been long i've been hurting..come fetch me take me home.

The princess i bore for you,how could u doubt her not being your own?
My body,my soul,my whole being, long back you made it your own!

The pain you have caused is excrutiating...
Yet you being away is worse!
But,i HAD to go far today,
my tears n sobs i had to purse...

Have not known what love is,nor want anyone to define,
all i have know is you and that YOU ARE MINE!
Maan...maan...my heart bleeds,
our princess wants to go home,
ITS REALLY REALLY HURTING,look in your heart n you'll find me home!

7years i waited,yet i know it now for sure...
You will find me sooner,YOU WILL FETCH ME SOON!
But..this distance is still cursing,
please come my love come soon!
Before this heart goes bursting,
COME FETCH ME,LETS GO HOME!

POEM BY SWATI

He screamed madly at the emptiness. Just to find a note in the side table.. we will be waiting for u to find us!!! his worst fear, not being able to love her...to not be able to touch her, hold her, kiss you, he couldn't think that this happened. His mind already created a blanket of sadness that covered him through, a fog surrounded him, nothing clear ever came to his sight.

he immediately rushed out. He took the car & drove to handa hawali.
He zoomed passed the entrance & rang the bell madly
Rano knew it was him - abhi gayen hain
he broke down into tears in her arms - kanha gayen his voice was weak & broken
Rano was quiet, she didn't know the answer herself.
Aunty woh aisen kyun kar rahin hain
Rano patted his back
aunty why is she punishing herself
he fell down on his knees why maansi
she seemed more confident than u said papaji in a rather hard tone.
He straighten himself. This was the first time he was confronting him as a son-in-law
u better get my daughter back, he said it in a rather assertive tone.
He nodded & left.
Brij stopped his way .. I don't wat to see ur face dipped ever again
he didn't say anything, just drew away.

He checked her quarters but it was already allotted to some other officer. He went to the Mansion to quickly change. He walked straight into his room. His room was filled with huge photo frames each of 10ft by 12ft covered with brown papers wrapped around it. They were just resting against the wall, not opened. Daadi came running in.
yah sab kya hain
Daadi - guatum said it belonged Geet, the packs read bedroom so placed them here, thought Geet aayegi tho khud hi arrange kar legi, baaki ke samaan store room main hain
Maan restlessly pealed the brown papers..of the first huge portrait mk & her, when mk was just born.
Daadi - wow yeh mk hain
he tore the brown paper more just find himself in it. The picture was so well modified, he didn't even remember when was this snap of his taken, definitely some time in London. He immediately fished his album to find the pic. It was his & hers alone. Geet had changed it..for mk.. he hugged it & cried. Daadi looked at both the pics & now understood. He caressed his finger over geets face.. she looked so happy to have new born baby mk in her hand. She seemed so worn out.. she still had the drip tube running in her hand, a blue dress.. her face seemed tired & exhausted but her eyes spoke something different..a new zeal.. the baby mk looked so fragile just like a cotton ball.. pink...she had a red scar running on her forehead until eyebrows..he curiously ran his fingers on them..
Nt - veer ji ..woh cup ka nishan hoga
he didn't quite understand
nt - when the dr's pull the baby out they some time use a cup.. the mark fades after few days
he was not there to see this.. not there to hold his baby when she was born.. feel her soft, small tiny fingers ..toes that needed him.. he ran his fingers...
he didn't have the guts to open the other photo
he cried when his shaking hand tore the paper to see 7-8 month old baby mk.. trying to walk.. that to holding his hand... maansi's first step Daadi.. he cried.. mk wore huggies & a pink frock until her belly.. she had her tiny little hand wrapped around seemed like his finger. Which for sure he knew was not his... why was he not there!! he cursed himself..
the other one was mk's first birthday. ..the next one was probably maansi was 3 or 4..

he knew he had missed all this..but seeing them being preserved like this was heart wrenching. More painful than he felt when he realized he actually missed all this.
Daadi - Geet kanha hain Maan?
He didn't reply... he was already feeling a hell pain in his heart & now this question pierced his heart further. He had broken her like a mirror, shattered her whole life, caused her all the trouble, caused her pain and strife. But yet she lost the feeling, yet, she stood numb and cold to all the pain he gave her..with the shield of their life, that too he cracked now. The burning in her heart for him would have just intensified, making his heart an icy hatred..towards self..even that he couldn't since it was not his anymore..it was hers. All these days with her, he couldn't see what she hide behind her eyes!!! behind hers was filled with pain, agony of all these years..not even once did he think about her before saying those words..before burdening her with his pain.

Pain is all he could give her.. why did he let her down and deceive her, why couldn't he be loyal and keep his promises? He had to find her ..he had to get them back in his life.. it was more for them than for him.. he had to keep ..live..all his promises now!!!
Daadi - hum aap se kuch pooch rahen hain Maan
he snapped out of his thoughts
Daadi - humeri bahu kanha hain?
She is gone..I lost her again.. he spoke like those words were parting his soul
Daadi slapped him tightly - don't u ever step into my house without her. I want my badi bahu in my house with all due respect she deserves

TIME TO GET THE QUEEN HOME!

Before those words left me,i knew you would be hurt...
Yet i knew it was time...time for me to blurt...
I knew it would be pahnful,no doubt that it was...
But when i saw your eyes full of pain,it just ripped me apart!

The love in your eyes was screaming...
I wanted to shout in pain,
yet all i could do was to hold you close,
cudn't let you go away again!

Each day away from you was torture,
Hell would be sweeter for sure,
yet it was all my own fault...
How could i go that far!

The 7 years were my punishment,
my personal hell away from you...
Yet today the pain i saw you in,
just sliced my heart into two!

You wanted me to fetch u,u have asked for the same now!
But,i am scared,scared of losing u now!
The pain it will cause me is nothing...i deserve more than that...
But what makes me restless is the pain it will cause u n how!

Yet,there is no time to cry...
No time to scream...
No time to repent anything,
nor anytime to dream!

I will come n fetch you,i will bring u home...
You will be MY QUEEN,ON MY HEART'S THRONE!
My princess will get her father,she will be back home,
won't let you go any farther,VERY SOON THAT HOUSE WILL BECOME HOME!

POEM BY SWATI

Precap
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hope u all like the updates. Love all your comments.
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muskan

Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago

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Ilovemsk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#554

OMG ME FIRST!!!!!
HA !!! (to everyone else)
1st time on this ff lol....thank god for my phone!
Anyway that update made me feel so bad for maan...and geet this is not hide and seek....come and find me...lol
Felt mad for mk but geet also becoz she did everything alone..
An awesome but heart Wrenching update
Naina xoxo

Edited by Ilovemsk - 14 years ago

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Tanu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#555

Thank u muskan for the amazing update, waiting to see how maan reaches his family,

Thank u swathi for the beautiful poem.

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AvNeil123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#556

Plz unite them.. Both hav suffered mre than enuf.. Bwt time maan gt his geet.. N geet gt her home wiv maan.. N mk gt 2 live wiv both her parents..
Plz plz bring them 2geva..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#557

its pain & sad but awesome one love it how describe how maan feeling cant know how maan find geet & MK pls cont soonnnnn thank yu so muchhhhhhh