AR FF: Atlas of Love - Pg 5, 17/04 - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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I really, still am wondering what really prompted you to write on AR! But whatever it was, thank heavens, it happened! :P

Coming to the 'beginning', it was .. what you call a perfect sort of start! and i couldn't thank you less for those lovey-dovey scenes between AR and that kiss! :-) Surprisingly, there was no sarcasm or 'the-sookie-feeling' out there!, not that i miss it, i mean i do... but to see 'romantic' 'saree' scene instead of that wit, was sincerely unexpected' but isn't it what you call... 'to write something short and sweet without all the conundrums of life and leaving behind a comfortable zone.'

It may be out of your comfort zone....but it surely comforts me, a lot! :P So, yeah... i like -- love it actually! Thank you so much sookie for writing it and A--- didn't i already say, that i love you! :P

and now i can proudly say, continue soon *superstar*!! :-D


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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
Really good piece of writing.....Do write more.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
hey sookie..nice start..
armaan was obviously busy looking at her instead of listening to her. lol, thats totally like him.
she had planned a surprise for him, with a cake she made and all, thats really sweet :)..n he was obv surprised!
thnx 4 d pm
update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey sookie .. That was a really nice start!! Throughly enjoyed readin it but it got over sook quickly :( .. It was nicely weird to read the update without the whole sookie feel to it .. Hope you got what I tried to see .. Hoping to see this updated regularly :) and aria thanks a ton for this :) P.S: Aria can we expect an update from you anytime soon 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: khahani

PS: the Naval Play almost gave me a heart attack😆 how did Aria made you do that😲 what has she got on you.😆😆

lol...Nahida, let me clarify - I did not give her any "ideas"😆...the ones I could think of were more like trip-catch-no fall-eyelock...pretty basic AR routine stuff...isn't this wayy better though??😳 Just going to sit back and enjoy reading a new AR FF after ages :)
Edited by esquisse - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
heeyyy
nice one
do pm me... when u update next part
byyeee
tc
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
Thanks everyone for the wonderful comments and acknowledging. I apologize for not responding to you individually.

Thanks a lot for stopping by!

Sookie
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Posted: 14 years ago
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2. The sound of spices

Mustard cackled in merry when dropped in pan of hot oil - singing a ballad about feasts and foreign lands. Freshly cut green-red chilies added to the cacophony. The colored mixture of red, green and golden mirrored the sentiment of the owner as they reduced their boisterous orchestra to one that of distant hum. The owner clad in a pale lavender sari smiled wanly as she bent down to take a whiff of final mixture from the simmering pan. Her smile reflected the quality of the product purely based on smell and the first taste of the simmering mixture made her smile reach her eyes.

She hummed an old love song which was a rage two generations before her. She dimmed lights around the apartment and lit candles. Winter Sonata resonated in the apartment as she set the table.

Swish of wind behind her and the tap of footsteps told the guest was here; or technically the owner of the apartment where she was cooking him a meal. The arms that encircled her waist were cold from the winds of early winter. His face was cozily tucked in the crook of her neck while she completely ignored his presence.

"You are trespassing on private property Dr. Riddhima Gupta", he said.

"How is it trespassing if the owner has given me a copy of his apartment keys Dr. Armaan Mallik?" She responded. He didn't respond but closed his eyes and savored in the freshness she possessed. When there was no response from him, she slowly turned around in his arms and furrowed her eyebrows looking at his face.

"What is it Armaan? You look more than famished today", she asked him gently. His gave her a tired smile in response. She held him for several moments offering him warmth and all of her care.

"It was just another day at the hospital only that it was bit more on the downer side." He replied.

She wasn't new to that sort of feeling as she worked along with him and she had had her share of bad days.

"And you weren't there", came his soft voice breaking her thoughts. She nodded slowly at that. She knew how it felt of course.

"I am sorry to hear that Armaan, I truly am", she said holding his hands.

She took him by the hands and walked towards balcony where moonlight was their only companion. She sat on the floor inhaling sweet scent of jasmine and bathing in moonlight. Armaan settled his head on her lap and inhaled deeply. He didn't let go of her hand as if he was drawing energy from her.

"I am glad you came today Riddhima. I know that I would have survived this night after a rough day at hospital but being here with you makes everything seem... better you know? Your presence give me the feeling of everything is going to be alright", he sighed. She ran her fingers in his hair and her other hand still holding his. He closed his eyes and basked the feeling of being cared for; being loved for.

"Armaan, I am not doing anything", she said. He opened his eyes and looked at her.

"You give me the feeling of home. No, you are home Riddhima", he closed his eyes again and buried his face in pleats of her sari.

With her, he could battle any darkness that tried to crawl its way into his heart. She was that light which kept things like despair and animosity at bay.

With her, he was just him; nothing more nothing less.

The dinner lay forgotten.

Sookie
Edited by -Sookie- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29

I figured it's better to get this over with lest I forget all that I intened to say - the begining well...sounded more like Sookie cooking than Riddhima...😆 and that was only reaffirmed by the Winter Sonata...either that or I'm begining to love your Riddhima. Please tell her Bach is just as perfect when you are waiting on someone... I think it's a bit of both..and I really do like your Riddhima. The start just like the previous part was unexpected(given nature of this FF - you really don't know what to expect) and had me trying to anticipate what you had in mind...and the rest that followed was calming..how often have i said that? And at a point, I wished, I could borrow this part for PM :D noooooo not because of what you may think but I loved the quietness of this part. At some level, this was more like the classic sookie - the AR moment could have been from any one of your other FFs...do I sense you treading a fine line..."to hell with everything else..I'm still writing this and not you!!"

Great going Sookie.Aria
Edited by esquisse - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
lovely update
seriously
m v.happy dat m d 2nd 1 to comment
sookie it was damn amazing
really sweet
i actualy read it twice even before i got d pm
Edited by kajen - 14 years ago

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